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This is indeed a new side to the definition of trolls..

Recently though, i googled the definition of trolls, in the internet sense, they were described as people who are anti social and have emotional insecurities, therefore they tend to be bellicose, insultive and rude in any forum or social network...

They really weren't painted in a good light, and inbetween my research, i thought some of the descriptions qualified princesa!

and so, i decided to turn dat trend around and control my emotions...but if there's anything like a funny troll, then i don't mind.

i just went tru the second update again, and i saw the detils i missed. Yes Anabel and her mum boarded the taxi and the taxi man hit the other when he tried to pull out, i got it now, so just work on new updates and feed us on

badmusace: I agree with you, but that was what defined poetry in those days and in a way they made the poem look beautiful, although they tend to restrict the flow of a poem. However, one can just experiment with them old rules as a way of self development.

yeah self development is good...but am still a fan of 'as the spirit leads' anyday

You sir, are trouble impersonified! But no P. You can sleep and rest easy, prince SA forgives the one who must indeed try to keep his demons at bay

whoal scary indeed! Keep it coming still.

Silent readers are what they are - silent! They hardly ever talk, soon as you let them be, the better for ur sanity.

On to the story...

- very short updates..
- no connection in the scenes. And no clear cut demarcation in two different scenes. You can't write about the prison in the first update and jump to anabel and her mum in the next. You should have placed a sign to tell us that the police scene has ended. Something like: ********* underneath it.

- the driver insult and driving off, hangs loosely in the middle of the recent update, had to read back to know how the bashing occurred or if Anabel and her mum where in the car, and i saw none!

Hope you would work on this few observations?

you somehow did

thank you coogar for the critique, and ofcourse tgirl

Mynddi you're such a lizard oh, why did you have them lock a thread i only replied a comment on? And what's with ur post, have u turned me into a member of the DAN

you cut out their eyes

and keep going too...

Deiok: badt gurl, u like moni gan.

who no go like money? Na them send me school? Even big name like Amazon dey collect 30 percent and one yeye kiosk seller wan collect my 75! Abegi

ITbomb: Abeg , she need the moni for my groom price

you broke my heart and i wonder if i can ever mend it back. Just thought i should let you know

You see, its the rhyming scheme accompanying the sonnet that puts me off such poems.

Poetry needs no inhibitions unless it won't flow


nice poem anyways

Tgirl4real: Love you too Princesa. We come from wayyyy back. I see a calmer side now.

well I guess am finally growing up

[quote author=Anyi.]I heard about okadabooks.com Seems to be an easy way you can publish this book and maybe make a lil dough. Abeg check am, didn't make time to read the full gist sha...[/quote]i checked them out, but their royalty is outrageous! 25 percent for all my effort, while they keep 75 percent, no can't do!

Abeg help me still dey check for better deals.

ok na, me dey wait

Thanks to the organizers and all the judges (xcept the famous Judge 1 offcourse, who was determined to keep dishing me the '9 variants that i so hate! ) I say thanks to all of you, for your time and effort...

And For those who read my poems and gave me feedback on what they think about it...i love you all

To My designer and friend, onegig...you know you're the best, right?

my friend again, ayd9...its being a while dude, guess you gave in ur all and came out better, well guess what, we tied! Ironical hunh?

and offcourse, humbled, cuddles, uj-sizzle, tgirl, mynd, shuga, thank you all

and so...


On to ...forever after!

Oahray: Wow... Who could have imagined?


Princesa, did I tell you your poem was my favorite of the lot? Read it over and over and over

Congrats to every contestant... Never knew we had these many good poets on NL. Improving is easier with your quality around.

yeah, who would have thought you did a come back for us na, so now who is fit enough to unbutton eachother's literary shirt?


really was it? Am glad!


yeah, too many good poets with deeper and bigger vocab, phew! Guess improving is the next level for everyone so the fire would keep burning!


Well, at the end, i got my wish, was among the top five, in between them dudes...wonder if they've ever heard the phrase 'Ladies first' before

anyways, it goes to show that my love for poetry isn't a ruse


I soooooo love poetry?

holla

Wesslier: hmmm.... Attempt a motivational book plz

nah, motivational, inspirational bla bla bla... they bore me to death. I get inspiration from real life experiences, issues and peoples.

so intriguing and unpredictable...

she dey do virtuous woman for naija, na when she see her load outside she go soji

Nedu what's up nah? Am currently in page 13, but decided to peep here, now i see you've gone on a French leave! Better bounce back!

jackbauersballs: I made the top 5. Thanks be to Jah and my Headmaster, Mr Friday.

Congrats Timpaker. That Princesa can write too.

did he mention princesa in one breath?

anyways congrats for making top five, wish i did myself

jchime: Got discouraged, no comment, no encouragement. Even mynd deserted me.....i felt I was not doing a good job and as such wasting my time. I had to forget the project and face my house job,too many stress comes with it already.

poor you! Somedays are like that