TiffanyJ:
Thank you Suzan for making this update. You have improve in your narration and description. From your last two updates? Are you saying that Umma's parents live with their daughter and husband? If so, how is it that they watch him maltreat her?

Tnx ma‘am, actually it‘s a flash back b4 they were married. Rabe only intends to visit her
Ermm....Auntyna i tried editing d previous updates but each time i try my phone will black out, so i don‘t know wat to do about that.
I don‘t know if you can help me plssss

jezuzboi:
Yes oo! Got the I.V & showed up. From the comments just above mine, it show how thrilling it is here.
Make I go start the journey. See u when I catch up.

Wow finally i have you here.
Tnx 4 da comment do stick around pls

Darus05:
Walahi av been busy o. Nice update. U have real improve wt ur narrative nd description....wait let me call oga D9ty7 to see this.me am not writer o, jst observing.

Tnx 4 da comment i luk 4ward 4 such again.
D9ty7 abeg come n assess me

hassan85:
nop! I wasn't o. mine too was good. well I don't know If u in school or not, But I think it's easer to update wen u not in school than wen u in school with busy schedules. And regular updates brings u numerous readers. u won't even have to invite more than 5peopl. it's just unfortunate we in election period so most people are in politics section and not here to encourage. But If u know wat u out to tell as story, keep telling it. After May29 de will come over.

Actually i‘m in skul n at d verge of starting exams come next week.
Tnx so much 4 d advice here is urs*kisses*

Chi-chi d little devil.
Dee weldone!

hassan85:
Hmn I saw u sharing kisses which day so? so me just pull over o. well me do check ur updates like everyday, But ur updates don't come everyday, I understand..... so I just wait for u for days b4 clicking on ur tread again. dts my reason o. How was your night

Hahaha don‘t tell me u‘r J lols
Now i see,well is a perfect timing sorry 4 d irregular updates.
My nyt is gr8! N urz?

Naturehibrid,stuff46,harjibolar10,Darus05,eshfar. And the rest, where are you guys?

hassan85:
Weldon!

Tnx sir!
You have been silent for a while, hope all is well?

Binta answered within the room and urged her to come in.
‘ Sannu da hutawa‘ Umma greeted, while squating in a bid to show respect.
‘ thanks my dear, i hope all is well?‘Binta asked at same time trying to sit up from her laying posture.
‘Yes mother, i just come to seek your permission i want to go and check on mama‘ She responded gazing around the room evident of the changes been done.
The floor of the room was covered with a lushed green rug which complemented the green curtains that surrounds the walls of the room, at the edge of the room the old iron bed has been replaced with a huge ebony bed with a massive vitafoam mattress place on it.
At the other side of the head of the bed stood the gigantic brown cupboard with a see through glass which housed the set of metalic plates, the were arranged in a fashionabled way.

At the entrance by the left hand side of the door,stood a big cushion chair and by the other side another of it kind was placed.
She sighed inwardly fully aware of the source of the awful change.
“you can go, but don‘t stay long you will be entartaining a visitor later in the day“ Binta uttered bringing her out of her reverie.
“A visitor?, but i‘m not expecting any visitor today“ She said.
“Yes i know you are not aware, acctually Rabe called your father through the cell phone he bought for him, that he will like the two of you to meet“.
She felt her stomach tightens as hot blood gushed through her vein, with her heart beating faster than normal.
She tried to say a word but could‘nt as a hard nut barricaded her throat, with a nod of the head she stood and made to leave.
“Ehen! Umma, there is a new cloth that i sewed for you, it will be the one you will wear to welcome him“ Binta said.
‘Okay mother, i will be right back“ With this she hurried out of the room to avoid another horrible news.
“mtcheeeew silly girl, you can run away for now but not forever you will still come back an meet me here“ Binta muttered, casting a glance at her beautiful decorated hands and feet with lalle

Tears freely falling down on her cheeks.
She sat up, using the hem of her wrapper to wiped her tears.
‘I need to see mama( her mother‘s younger sister) maybe she can talk to mother on my behalf‘ With this she stood up, re-tied her wrapper and wore her hijjab. She stood for some minutes looking around the room.
The room was small in size, it was painted in navy blue. By the right side of the door layed the bed and beneath the floor was a mat which filled the room in the sense of a carpet.
Just close to the bed was her baggages of clothes and beside them lay piles of religious books of different kind.
By the left side of the room is where her dressing mirror is.
It seems that is what she was looking for. She stare at her image in the mirror, evidently her mind has drifted to God knows where.

After some minutes of thought she came back to her senses and resumed the task of observing her features in the mirror.
She was tall but not taller than a telegraph pole, a figure eight with flesh at the appropriates part. Her stature could be liking with that of Ini Edo( a Nigerian acctress)but unlike her Umma is light skinned been from the Fulani genetics she has long black and silky natural hair that ran close to her waist.
Surely her beauty will make a full blooded indian lady go green with envy while the male folks drooled in ectasy .

After securing the locks of her room she dashed to the next room opposite hers, which belongs to her mother.
The house that haborred her family is moderately a self contained apartment with four rooms.
The rooms are facing theirselves, Umma‘s room is by the right together with the room that serves as a store while her parent‘s is by the left.
At the other end is the toilet and bathroom, there is no kitchen in the house. Cooking is done in the open close to the store. The whole of the house is painted in green. With a well beside the toilet which served as source of water to the family.
Umma is an only child.

‘Salamu alaikum‘.
‘Amin wa alaikum wasalam‘

Nawa o, why Alice dey always behave lyk chicken

Naturehibrid:
Susan dear we are hungry come and feed us o or 'or what' or we wait patienty btw ina jira ki

Wallahi is our ntwrk o.
Bt nw is better sha so expect one later.

TiffanyJ i‘m so happy hearing from you, tnx so much 4 ur contribution.
Ha! I have a long way to go o.

harjibolar10:

You welcome ma dear


@bol.ded;

Lolz*winks*

Naturehibrid:
Op u just brought back memories of my one year stay in gada lga in sokoto but these ur hausa don pass the lil ones i learnt. Btw nice story you have got here.

Wow.
Hope we will be seeing much of you?

Darus05:
Walk in wt my bread nd kunu.

U are welkum
I hope you will enjoy the tour

[quote author=harjibolar10 post=32850066]
@bol.ded; I wonder why some parents do talk like they have no sense. .. Sani is not good for her daughter because, he hasn't buy her anything since he has been dating her daughter, that bad and senseless mehn. And the one that has be3n buying her stuffs, happen to be the good one

That's where most parents always get it wrong, they wont allow their child to Mary who they love, just because of their selfish interest, God is watching you in 29D

Hmm you have said it all alhaji bola.
Tnx 4 sticking around.........*kisses*

*********continuation***********

‘Oh God! I can‘t believe this is happening. A pregnant husband‘ Umma lamented.

‘Please my dear wife don‘t leave me, i need you more than ever‘ Rabe pleaded, still on his knees with tears in his eyes.

‘Hmmm‘ she sighed and went into a trance.

FLASH BACK

‘Umma, you have no option than to marry him. Your father and i made the choice for you, moreover we have already accept his money and there is no way we can pay him back‘Binta(Umma‘s mother)said.

‘Hmmm,but mother i have already told you that i don‘t love him, i‘m already in love with Sani what do i tell him?‘ She said.
‘Nonsense! Who is Sani? A son of nobody, the deed has already been done and there is no going back with Rabe your happiness and that of ours is assured.
Ever since this Sani started seeing you what has he bought for me?....nothing, but imagine how our lives have taken a new dimension just a month Rabe showed his likeness to you‘ Binta lamented. She went on to convinced her daughter to accept Rabe‘s proposal.
‘Mother, i have never loved any man the way i loved Sani and i don‘t think i will ever do‘Umma said.
‘Well let me tell you something is either Rabe or no one else, mtcheeeew‘ she hissed,stood up and left the room in annoyance.


‘Uwargida, yane? Ina zaton kin shawo kanta?‘ Shitu asked his wife.
Trans:“Woman, how is it, i hope you were able to convinced her“
“Mtcheeeew, dan Allah kyale wannan banzar yarinyar Allah ya nufe mu da samu amman dan taurin kai irin na yaran zamani tana bujire wa. Amma na gaya mata ko ta ki ko ta so dole ne ta aurai‘.
‘Mtcheeew, please leave this useless girl. God has provide for us but due to the strong head of children of nowadays she declined,but i told her whether she like it or not she must marry him“She said fuming with anger.
‘Such an ingrate! Well is left for her as i have already given him my words which i‘ll make sure it come to pass no matter what may come‘ He said.
**********************************‘Oh Allah come to my aid!‘she rolled on the mat

Oga dee wish u quick recovery

adeh39:
Chaiii! nawa ooo! A pregnant man? dis is serious oooo
In short i dnt knw wat to say.

Princesssusan, U've got a nice story going on here, just dat u need sum improvements, Nd i'm sure u will soon be a professional wit d pple here correcting u. Thanks 4 d update, Keep it rolling.

Hahaha indeed even i myself, i‘m speechless.
Tnx sweet.

harjibolar10:
Ghen ghen
Alhaji Rabe don get belle, and thats for the record. .. Whats ummmah gonna be doing ooo




Keep em coming ma'am

Yea a world record,
If nah you wetin u go do?

Harriz:

Absolutely Yes!! Pregnant...

Chizoz, this is serious ooo, Alhaji Rabe, the first man to get pregnant, thats a record thou





Princess, continue jaree

Hmmm that is how it is is o.
Tnk you dear.

Hassan85, tnx 4 readn.
I appreciates ur encouraging words, i‘ll kip on tryn till i prove better by HIS grace.

Hmm mitch.
Maureen is jst an upgraded a.shawo.

‘How can the Doctor tells me that i‘m pregnant, how can that be possible?‘. That is how he has been talking to himself for the past two hours.

‘Hmmmm maybe it was the way i used to treat my wife that made God to punished me. Inna lilahi then i must seek her forgiveness to avoid further punishment‘.

He stood up looking so dejected, with his head bent low he walked sluggishly to his home like a prodigal son.

‘Salamu alaikum‘ Rabe said before raising the curtain of the sitting room.

‘Wa alaikum wasalam‘ Umma responded as she stood up to welcome him.

‘My lord i have been waiting for your arrival since the past four hours, i even put a call to your friend the Doctor which he told me that you ought to be at home. I was so worried thought something terrible has happened to you‘. Umma said while looking at her husband to ascertain her fears.

‘Hmmmm, he sighed
Umma na san na bata maki matukka amma dan Allah ki yafe ni‘

‘Umma i know i wronged you so much but please for the sake of God forgive me‘ He knelt down on his knees with tears in his eyes.

‘ Maigida me yafaru ne?‘ Umma asked shocked written all over her face.

‘I know i took advantaged of you in some many instances that i don‘t deserve your mercy, but please my dear wife don‘t let the wrath of God descend on me‘. He continued to plead with her.

‘My lord i beg of you in the name of your maker, tell me what went wrong with you. You are leaving me in the dark which is not supposed to be as thousands of thought are running in my mind‘. She ended her speech with a shaky voice

‘Umma the Lord wants to avenged for you making me................a laughing stock. What has never happened even in the qur‘an not to talk of my lineaged has happened to me. Umma i.......i am pregnant!‘. He blurted finding it difficult to believe himself.

‘Inna lilahi wa‘ina ilahi raji‘un‘! She exclaimed using her right palm to cover her mouth in shocked.
‘Alhaji! Ciki fa kace?‘
‘Alhaji! Did you say pregnant?‘ she asked.

Can‘t wait to see d success of diz evil act.
Oga floe weldone sir!

Waitn patiently

harjibolar10:
Princess.. . You gat a nice work doing here ooo



Oya, come update abeg

Bear with me, i need to put things in order first.

Ciela:
Nyc story u've got Princesssusan bt pls follow the instruction given to u by d big bosses nd miss Toykathy here it wud help alot, my fone acts dat way tu.

Tnx ma‘am i will do my best

stuff46:
Sabon line sha.

Kk i knw d place

Mayorblaze:


i wan get the feeling....

I dislike being without a crime record

Pple lyk will never be ban, bt if dey ban you nah then u go knw d difference