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Hey guys finally gotten an alternative so I'm continuing the story but it's bad, I get so many views but so little comments!!! why?

" I'll get you John " I say as I put the Love Machine off ,i think of what to eat as servicing myself had made me hungry but dammn my pussy is still wet and dripping, they need to be eaten and banged to satisfaction!! .
I made jollof and dodo, while making dinner I heard John drive out with his "lady friend " and Mr and Mrs okon just came back too
I sit to eat by the window so I can watch when John comes back and know if he came with that sugar- cane girl. Just as I lazily finished my food, John came waltzing in, I watch him park and get down from the car,
" No sugarcane girl " I say happily , my pussy started to itch happily, is not like am a sex addict or anything but what my pussy wants my pussy gets, that's why she gets overly exicted and start to rain when she sees John.
I watch the time tick so slowly waiting for the perfect time for my plan
I fell asleep only to wake up at 20 mins past 11, kai it's almost late but it's still perfect.
I change into my see- through lingerie, I looked into the mirror, the way my almost oversized nipples were pointing at me, you would think they were guns, I gently rub them so they wouldn't be so obvious but they even got bigger and pointer, I sigh and smile at my reflection, I used to complain about my wide hips and big ass when I was a little younger because of all the attention they got me but slowly they began to pay the bills so I started to love them.
I open the fridge and put the last slice of pineapple in my mouth incase I got lucky and John wanted to eat the pussy, I was already clean shaven so my pussy was hot, dripping and ready to be served.
I pick my blanket, phone and a pillow and walk downstairs to john's room, I knock like my life depends on it, after several knocks he opens the door and I run inside before he could even say anything
" what is wrong? " he asks raising his eyebrows
" uncle John, please help me I had a bad bad dream, please pray for me, I cant sleep alone " I say feigning fear
He looks at me unsure of what to do
" please uncle John i beg you let me sleep here, I'll sleep in the parlour, please sir " I say begging and threatening to cry, he finally budge
" Okay, calm down, do you need water or something? " he asks
" yes please water " I answer breathing heavily
I deserve an oscar!
I lay on the couch and use the blanket to cover myself, he hasn't seen my Sexy lingerie yet. He comes back with the water and I remove the blanket and get the water from him, I notice he stiffens and swallow hard, I say a silent Thank you to heaven. I know the effect my body has on men so I decide to use that to catch John, after drinking the water, I stand up and ask where the kitchen it, he doesn't even answer he just points at the kitchen with his eyes like a child who has just seen candy.
I return back, and he is sitted on the center table, I walk towards him with our eyes making contacts, I reach him and sit on his legs, I'm a little taller than him so my big D sized boobs are all in this face, I let my pussy sit directly on his dick area.,i hold him and press my boobs more into his face
" uncle John " I say teasingly, I feel his disk harden, I know I have him trapped now, I slowly take my lingerie off stopping at my waist, he finally gets himself and hold my boobs, i can tell he is trying to resist his self but his flesh is weak, I make aaaaahhh and ooohhh as I ride on the bulge of his trousers, he grabs my boobs and start to press them with strong desire
" aaaaahhh, small aaaaahhh small " I say moaning
He starts to suck on one boobs and he's pressing the other one, I use my hand to bury his heads in my boobs, he pinches the other nipple as he presses the first one. He leaves it and start sucking my big nipples hungrily
I unbutton his shirt as i slowly release my boobs from his mouth, he instantly reaches for my lips, claiming them with urgent hunger, I remove his shirt and his shorts and I bend .
I take his already hard dick in my mouth, I stroke it a little and lick around it before taking it in my mouth
" dammn shola " he says as I put all of the dick in my mouth, I'm surprised all could go in seeing how big he is
I suck his dick for a while and handle his balls before taking the balls in my mouth, I suck them gently and use my hands to stroke his dick, his moans is the lubricant to my machine, I continue sucking his balls and stroking his dick, if I didn't stop he will cum so I had to stop
I take of my remaining lingerie and lay on the couch
" all you can eat, baby " I say and wink at him, he stand and bends at my dripping pussy, maintaining eye contact he bends down and start to eat,
" I cannot believe how wet you are shola " he says and start to lick my clits softly,
"Omg John " I say repeatedly as he eats me out, finally he brings out his almighty dick and start to play around my dripping pussy
" you're killing me " I say and that was the cue
He carries me up and I rest on his waist as he penetrate going deep into me
" Bleep Mann " I scream as he thrusts harder into me
"Aaaaahhh papi " I moan as he goes in faster
"Ay papi ayyy papi " I say as the dick hit the right spot, he continues to Bleep me standing and carrying me
"You're the bomb " I say as we both cum together
" I'm not even started " he answers and carrys me to the bedroom
Wow this churchy guys dey carry o

Back to Toriola's Pov
I reach my house off-campus finally happy to be home safe, I felt somebody follow me to the bus park, I was so scared.
" Baby Girl " Mide says immediately I get into the room, Mide is my roommate, she's a year ahead of me in school but we are really close friends. I sigh
" mide, if I tell you what happened Ehn " I say adjusting my glasses, she sits up and her eyes light up in expectation of juicy amebo
" kai, you like amebo, see as your eyes are shining " I say teasing her
" gist me Abeg " she answers
" let me eat first I'm hungry " I say walking towards the kitchen.
After eating, I showered despite all miles pleas for me to gist her, I finally gist her after showering, we gist about other things too and then we fell asleep.
I wake up sweating, chanting " Blood of jesus, blood of jesus " I look at the time, it's 3:20 am, mide is fast asleep, I pick up my phone and dial my mum's number, after several rings, she picks up
" Toriola mi, kiloshele? " she answers in a sleepy voice
" I had that dream again " I say shakily
" Ahn Ahn, Oya come home let's go see Pastor Jones " she answers now alarmed
" I have exams in two weeks, can it wait? " I answer now the fear has gradually faded off
" wait ke? , your exams are the more reason you should come and get the prayers done, do you want to fall sick? " she asks
" Okay but let this be the last one o, I'm tired of all this dreams " I answer and she tells me how much she loves me and she will not cry over me and ends the call .
I couldn't sleep anymore so I pick my Notes and start reading.
I left for Home the next day in the afternoon, since my house is also in lagos although at the outskirts. I arrive home at few minutes past six, my mum was already seated waiting for me in the living room
" Toriola mi " she said immediately I entered and hugged, I hugged her back and sat down
" Mummy, let's do this thing once and for all, I'm tired of the re occurring dreams " I say as soon as my bum hits the couch
" I've heard you, we'll tell pastor Jones " she answers
"I'm hungry oo " I say rubbing my tummy, she chuckles and asks me to go and cook since I'm a woman I grumble
" Oya i'll cook efo and amala for you, go and shower " she finally agrees, I run to my room with my bag to go shower and come down for dinner.
I wake up early the next day to go see pastor Jones
" Mummy tori, let me see you in my office " pastor Jones say immediately after praying for me
I raise my eyebrows, what can't he say here
" Okay sir " my mum answers and follow him to his office
I wonder what he wants to tell her, I decide to follow them,.
They get to the office and do not shut the door, I know they did this so they could see if anyone was peeping but little did they know that I had super hearing abilities, I could hear anything even the tiniest sounds, nobody knew about this except my dad .
Pastor Jones : You need to tell tori the truth o, this thing is gradually getting out of hand
My mum : Haa pastor, that is risky sir, are there not anymore prayers you can do?
Pastor Jones : None at all, the truth is what you need to tell her and fast!.
At this point I knew something was wrong, my parents used to argue about telling me something before my father died and now My pastor too, I continue listening
Pastor Jones : Don't forget that time is crucial!
My mum : I'll just wait for her to grow up a little
Pastor Jones : Hmmmmn, you don't understand the risk of what you're about to do, tell her now
" tell me what? " I say barging into the office

I come back and I'm surprised to meet Mr Akin's car still parked in the compound.
" welcome " He says as soon as I enter step into the living room.
"Good evening " I greet in response
" thank God you know it's evening, miss night crawler " he answers and grabs emelda from me.
" please fix me dinner " he adds.
I sigh, drop my bag and my phone on the dining table and walk into the kitchen to make dinner for him. I hear my phone beep but I'm too occupied with dinner to find out what it was for.
Mr Akin is already seated on the dinning so I serve him dinner
" I hope you had fun with him " he asks as I put his plate on the table in the front of him.
" I don't understand " I answer, he just smiles and start dishing his food, he mutters something about too much drama, I just walk upstairs with my bag and phone leaving emelda with him.
I shower and change into my night dress,i finally pick my phone and see a read text
" Thanks for tonight, you and emelda were great company, hope you had fun? "
I laugh out loud and shake my head, he can sleep with girls and disappear for two weeks, just because I went out now he's forming boss, I drop the phone and lie down.
" Derinsola " I kept hearing my name in my dream so I wake up to hear Mr Akin calling me.
I rub my eyes and quickly run downstairs,
" Sir " I answer
He doesn't answer but keeps staring at me like a hungry lion, I look down at myself to realise I was still wearing my skimpy night dress
I raise my eyebrows and repeat the sir again, he hands emelda over to me
" clean her up and put her to bed "
I turn to go upstairs and feel his eyes boring holes into my soul.


I wake up and it's Sunday, I decide to go for church today so I dress up and go downstairs, I remember I forgot to take my purse so I drop emelda and go back upstairs to get it only for me to come down to Meet Mr Akin In the living room
" another date? " he asks frowning
" Good morning sir, no sir, we're going to church " I answer with a fake smile
" oh okay I'm coming along, wait for me to bath and get dressed " he answers rushing upstairs to get ready.
I grumble to emelda till he comes and we leave in his car with joro driving us.

Church was great apart from people taking pictures of us anyhow and some begging for autographs, who does that in Nigeria sef? I stand through the whole ordeal and wait for his " paparazzi" to be over.
I raise my hands in the air as we finally get into the car and I scream
" hallelujah ", he laughs and emelda tries to copy me. Luckily church has changed his moods.
" Derinsola, I'm sorry for My attitude So far, I've just been under lot of pressure " How he says sympathetically as we get into the house
" Awwwww Awwww, No problem " I answer smiling genuinely
" Hug? " he asks with a wide smile
" ok hug " I answer as we hug and I feel something poke me in my tummy area, I clear my throat and he catches the drift and releases me.
I smile awkwardly and walk to my room
" common hug o " I say to myself as I enter my room.

To Love and to Hold 10.
I go into my room and sit on the couch close to the window "I hate what you do to me" I mutter
My phone beeps, it's a message
"Hey love, just left the hospital, I was told you had been discharged, want me to come make you feel better? "
I smirk ,i think about Derinsola
"Yes come over " I press send and hit the shower.

* BACK TO DERIN'S POV *
I finish cleaning and sweeping, I open n the fridge and pour myself a glass of cold orange juice, " I am so tired baby " I say to emelda but she's not even listening, the door bell rings and emelda runs to the door, I follow her
"Hi hi" immediately the door opens and comes in
"Sit down, let me get Mr Akin " I say closing the door behind her.
" oh no, he's expecting me " she says walking upstairs
"Oh" was the only thing that I could say as I watched her walk upstairs.
I finally put emelda to sleep admist all the moaning sounds coming from Mr Akin's room.
How can he do this knowing is daughter is just a room from his, I clean the tears that rolled from my eyes
"Have I been crying? " I ask my self, I sniff in and call Adeola, I tell her everything and she calls me love sick, I laugh and we talk about other things
That's why I love her!.


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It's been two weeks and I haven't really seen Mr Akin apart from the few times which he comes to pick or drop clothes for Joro to take to the dry cleaners and he tried as much as possible to avoid me those few times, I tried to avoid him too.
It's Saturday now and Chuma came back from south africa yesterday and he has been asking me to come out for lunch, I accepted yesterday as long as he let me come with emelda.
It's going to be her first birthday next month and I hope Mr Akin let's us have a little princess party for herbal
I look at the mirror and adjust my Jean a little, button up my high low chiffon top
" I think I look hot" I say to emelda who just keeps walking walking about, I grab her, lay her on the bed and tickle her, she laughs and her laugh is so sweet,i continue tickling her and finally lay next to her on the bed, she climbs on me and starts kissing me cheeks and trying to tickle, I had to laugh, she keeps tickling me and I keep laughing
" well done " I hear a voice say, I sit up to see Mr Akin
"There's a door so people can knock sir " I say harshly as I grab my bag and carry emelda
" the door was wide open " he answers meekly
" Where are you going? " he adds
"I'm going out for lunch with Chuma " I answer, hoping he doesn't say no
" Okay " he answers and walk back to his room.
I sigh and leave

Divepen1:
Preferably, rename chapter 1. Make it the prologue. With that, you won't have to make people wonder why you move from 3rd Person Omniscience to First person.



And I see you're jostling between past and present tense, despite your effort at making it the present tense. Watch it.

Thank you, will do

Seduced 2.
I hiss and pick my books from the floor, I pick my glasses and wear them to see the person that hit me, I look up and see the most captivating eyes ever, I blink severally to be sure I'm seeing well, I knew instantly that he is a vampire but my heart still leaps at the sight of him.
" you should at least say sorry " I say getting back my voice
" I'm sorry " he says in a weird bending to help me pick the remaining books, I had a bad day and this fine one is there making it worse, is he blind? But he is fine sha but he is a vampire.
He hands over my books and I start to walk away, I know he's staring and I want to look badly so I can see those eyes again but I can imagine my mum saying
"Toriola, I warned you against vampires, you know what they did to your dad "
I know a vampire killed my dad at the circle of protection, we heard it was a baby vampire but we all know vampires don't get their powers till they are at least 18, me and my mum called it a bluff and just thought they were making stories, u was just 10 but I will never forget the pain I felt. Weirdly I don't hate vampires, I even have few vampire friends.
I shrug and get into the last cab off - campus .
* ALIU'S POV*
I was staring at her till I hit it, I have never seen a perfect human like her, her skin, eyes, face and body is so perfect
I didn't even know when I hit her
" Is she really human? " I kept asking myself repeatedly
"You should at least say sorry " she says jolting me out of my thoughts, her voice is like an angel's
" I'm sorry" I answer trying hard to suppress my accent and I bend to help her pick her books, I hand her the books and watch her walk away, I wish I could pull her back and her back and apologise better.
I follow her subtly as she leaves for the campus bus parks, I can't stop staring am her bum, I take my shades from my bag at least nobody will know I'm staring at that perfectly moulded bum.
I watch her get into the last cab and I sniff in the last smell of her as she gets into the cab.
I turn and go home.
"Aliu why are you late? " my mum yells immediately I get into the house, kai she can be paranoid, that's why she moved here with me when I gained admission ,i'm not complaining but she's not even my real mum but she acts too overprotective, I could have been an outcast if not for her. I say a silent thank you
" Aliu " she yells again
" I met someone " I answered realising what I just said, now she will ask me thousands of questions.
" you met a girl? " she asks
I hate how well she can read me
" yes " I answer rushing upstairs to avoid further interrogation .
"We are not done yet, we'll talk about it over dinner " she yells.

SEDUCED (Vampire Love)
A story of love, pain and joy, let's see how love prevails even in the darkest of hearts.


Prologue
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In the year 1807, vampires lived freely among humans, there was a mutual agreement between both parties, Vampires had their king and humans their president, but that didn't make humans unafraid of vampires neither did it make some vampires not eat human, some humans, most humans infact would warn their children not to associate with vampires, eat with them or get married to them, some vampires on the other hand would trap unsuspecting humans and feed on them, this news got to their King, who got angry and decided to ban any vampire caught feeding on humans. This group of outcast lived outside the kingdom and the king made a circle of protection in which out casts couldn't pass through to get into the kingdom but humans and vampires could go in and out of circle, there was also another but. Anyone of the King Jordan's blood outcast or not could penetrate into the circle. The king had no fear because he was sure nobody of his blood would ever be an outcast but he didn't know his wife Modupe would breach his trust.
Modupe had an outcast lover, Femi. However she didn't always used to be a cheat until one day when she met Femi while walking the walls of the circle.
Modupe was a poor maiden in the kingdom hunting for her poor grandmother and her to survive when the king saw her, he was marvelled by her strength and beauty, he watched her for months and finally approached her, he told her how he felt, Modupe was very happy that her story was about to change but she had a secret. She had an outcast lover Femi who she met while hunting outside the kingdom, she was trapped by another outcast and she said her last prayers ready to die when Femi saw he, he helped her and made sweet love to her, Modupe on the other hand was greatly to Femi and kissed him to show appreciation she was apparently attracted to him, so they made love, Modupe fell in love with Femi and they began a secret relationship, Femi begged her many times to cross over and join him and other outcasts for the fight against King Jordan but Modupe wanted a better life as her grandma had died leaving her poor and lonely, she agreed to the king breaking up with Femi with a note, this made Femi mad, it increased his hatred for the King and the Kingdom and swore to destroy the kingdom.
Modupe married the king and moved into the palace, she tried her best to love the king and be a good wife, she was a lovely queen, everybody loved her until one day, she went unguarded to the circle and saw Femi, he beckoned on her to come but she turned around and left.
She however from that day kept going to the circle until one day she decided to find Femi, she disguised and went out of the circle in search for Femi, she found him and they rekindled old flames, they made love over and over again, then she went back to the palace, from that day she secretly began to meet Femi and make love, until one day she decided to run away to Femi forever, she had fallen in love again.
She made love to the king and sneaked out of the palace disguised, when the king woke up and learnt of what happened he was furious and the whole kingdom was surprised, their sweet queen now an outcast? .
10 months after running away, Module bore a son, the moment he came into the world, modupe knew something was wrong, thunder struck angrily tearing off the roof of the little Inn she had him and rain began to pour heavily on her and the mid-wives and then the baby came out.
Femi felt something go out of him the moment he held the child, Jordan also felt something too.
A year later, the son grew into a handsome and sweet baby just like his mother, he grew up fast and did things his mates couldn't do, baby Aliu would always go missing for hours only for the hunters to find him by the circle and bring him home.
Extra protection was put on him as he grew older, his teachers would talk about his extraordinary strength, his parents would laugh about it but modupe knew something was wrong, Femi on the other hand couldn't wait for Aliu to grow older so her could join in the fight against King Jordan.
One day Aliu ran away from home.

Hi, I'm ree and I'm writing anonymously lol I'm not too sure I want people to know I write yet, lol enjoy and invite people!! .
I'm sorry if you followed Sugar daddy chronicles, I don't know how I deleted it from my phone so I cannot continue, but I promise to write once I get inspiration for it *kisses*.
this is a pretty old work and I hope it will suffice for Sugar daddy chronicles till I can continue .
xoxo xoxo
where's the Cold Orijin Zero?

p.s : don't coppy biko, I'm not so good at writing but I put in effort so don't come and take credit for my hard work Btw i go to Mfm and you don't want to destroy your destiny because of traffic ooo
and I'm sorry the mentions are random.

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