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adeh39:
It's not only you jare...... I am suspecting Tony too, I just hope Kim won't die because of her stubbornness...., I am really happy that Chris didn't die ooo.

Dee, thanks for the updates.



#TEAM SCENT

lol i doubt it.. tony didn't know Kim was married to mark.. and dey didn't plan to meet at d airport... if Kim survive in dis story dose two might end up togeda

stuff46:
Waris this

waris what

MuhdG:
Daaamn! I really wished dee took chris's life

WHY

Onemansquad:
dats why u quoted d whole update *why u dy behaving lyk d journalist dat his camera was smashed ehn * i wil flog dah weyrey comot frm ur bodi

atleast dis is my first tym of quoting d whole update.. but u can derail d thread with ya whala...waiting for u to come and remove d werey o

D9ty7:
I just dey look you one kind, cos the kind bashing you go recieve from dem thugs(onemansquad, skimpledawg) for quoting the whole update, you sef go fear na.
Am glad Chris didn't die tho. I hate to see kids die in my stories. But talk to him, he should be careful.

lol...dat means Chris won't die in dis story yagahhhhhhhhhhhh..

D9ty7:
--continuation--
"Mark! Where is Chris? Where is my son?" Tina cried as she moved closer.
"I have no idea." Mark replied.
"I told you to look for him. I tod you to find him." Tina cried.
"I tried, but there was just a lot on my plate. I spearheaded the whole evacuation thing, I couldn't even think about Chris, even though from the start, I assigned someone to look for him." Mark replied.
"Mark, you didn't. You did nothing. If you had done something, you would have found him. Chris is the reason I live for. I am in this life and death job to make provisions for him, what will become of me?" Tina cried harder.
Another loud boom could be heard, as it seems the raging fire just strucked another source, probably a container of petrol.
"Am sorry." He said as he closed in on her and hugged her.
"I failed. I shouldn't have brought him to work in the first place, now he suffered what N.A.T.U staffs shold have suffered, when in the real sense, he has no connection with the agency aside being my son."
"Never say never. He might still be alive. The firemen are working tirelessly." Mark whispered. "They'll find him in no time."
"Let me go." She cried.
"What?" Mark asked taking a step backwards.
"Am gonna go find him. Am gonna go find my son." With this, she took off, but Mark quickly held her close with all his might
"I won't let you go in there. You seriously want to kill yourself?"
Tina fought with the little strength in her, hitting Mark hard on the face. "Let me go. Why am I living? I should die."
With a loud crack, the burning building came down crashing.
"Oh my God!" She stopped fighting and buried her face in Mark's shoulder.
"Am finished." She whispered.
"No. You are not."
That moment, a young journalist walked up to them with his camera man behid him and the television station's (he worked) mic recorder in his hand.
"Excuse me Agent Mark. Who is this woman, what's here relationship with you and the N.A.T.U in general?" The journalist asked.
"Are you asking me?" Mark replied taking a step towards the duo. "Seriously, are you asking me?" Mark asked angrily.
"Take it easy, Agent Mark. You are the only person who had spoken to the press since this fire started, don't stab the coperation." The journalist pleaded.
"To hell with cooperation. These cameras are gonna go." With the stretch of his both hands, he snatched the camera from the second man and smashed in hard on the floor.
And there comes the reason why he was angry. He just couldn't imagine the guilt he was going to live with for the rest of his life if Chris should be declared dead as a result of the fire. He knew Tina enthrusted the boy in his care, but in a bid to save multitudes, he neglected the boy he had come to love and vice versa. Hence, the reason for his outburst.
"Uncle Mark! Mum!" Came Chris voice from the other side of the building. It was obvious that he just entered the compound through the west gate.
"Chris!" Mark almost shouted as he left the two journalists he was assaulting and approached mother and son.
Chris shirt was shreded with a few cut to his face and body.
"Where have you been?" Mark asked, even though Tina wouldn't let go of the boy.
"That was some hell of a show you put up there. You fought like Jason Statham." Chris laughed.
"Its not funny." Tina scolded.
"You need medicals." Mark dragged him towards the standing medical team.
--tbc--
Someone said she knew Chris wouldn't die cos d9ty7 can't kill him. But reading the last update, you probably would be cursing under your breathe thinking Chris was truly dead. I was tempted not to make Chris come back.

dee thank ya stars dat Chris didn't die if not u for see my werey dis afterwards

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm Mitch is really spoilt.. aunty tiff pls try and finish dis story bfor Saturday

stuff46:
Biko Doris. Help this young man na. Things no de easy nowadays, i know this man. He is more than what you take him to be. To type updates as long as the one he updates he drops, its not easy. I know he will never deny us updates iif he is less busy and have charge.

I know its not only D9ty7's Crime story that is the on-going story. Many writers that update. You can be checking them. If you are the only one complaining, it piss me off.
Not that this guy doesnt update at all. Try following kayem's story and you will beg tire for update. And to say you are a Nigeria, i ought to have to have you been used to African time

Last bullet, when are you coming back to the group?

lol OK. am so so sorry dee.. won't bug u dat much again.. as for d group i left cos d mssgs r just too much.. but i v u all in a very special place in my heart.. love yhu guys so much

stuff46:
You too demanding, I swear your guy go surely feel the wraths of the you accepting to date him.

Abeg Na, Allow this man to decide his updates. Not you deciding it for him and making him not to deliver the best he can offer.

Btw, No hard feelings

do u know it is very annoying wen u don't get an update.. oga dee may be u should also be telling us wat time d updates will drop.. thanks

u said evening

D9ty7:
Hahahaha.... Evening is not too far now. And moreso, you requested that my next update be on N.A.T.U, meaning I had to push the initial update after this.
Evening I promise!

OK am waiting

D9ty7:
I have two more updates to drop, but right now, I can't drop them for some reasons. Check back later in the evening.

Dee do u want to kill me... dis suspense can cause high blood pressure..evening is too far

D9ty7:
Am loving the discussion, argument and the comments. Keep them coming.
Updates drops any moment frm 1:30pm.
Shebarh: This is what has been missing since the start of the story. Everyone seemed to be thinking in the same direction(Mark and Tina being siblings) but now, Galaxdiva don drag Clara in...
As a writer, I will want to work harder and take dem guys on an unexpected ride.
If things continue like this, believe me, we could have 5-6 updates per day.

lol...just hope so... i tink i agree wit galaxdiva too..dey myt be siblings.. oga dee hope ya next update will be bout NATU..

D9ty7:
And you just made it look like I don't update at all.
My not updating began at the end of April and even before then, you don't comment everyday, the poster who quoted you, maybe this is his first post on this thread.
You get my drift?

lol yh.. u do update but uv stopped updating frequently like u normally do..OK now take today for example since morning no Update how do u want us to comment

D9ty7:
You have a point there tho. But I can only be dedicated when I see the response from the readers.
You know what kept me running when I was posting ALL IN A CIRCLE? The comments.
Not just the you are the bomb comment or you are the grenade, but the differences in preferences of the readers. As early as chapter 6, some people wanted Rachel dead, some wanted her to live. By the time we got to the 16-17th chapter, no one wanted her dead again, cos she has given birth. And when no one was expecting phew! I took her life.
While some people wanted Clement to succeed, some loved the personality and charisma in the character, Kelvin(Danger-kelv)
I believe you understand my point. That time, mere reading comments from some people with different thought, I will just start typing and in 30mins, I will drop two updates.
And I won't forget the relentless efforts of Tecno4life. Jeez! Even though he was guilty of derailing the thread, I sometimes enjoy his posts.
All the above is absent in this story.
If you followed my other story; THE THOMAS. When I started, I was dropping an update or more per week, later, I switched to an update per day, then came two readers who will spend hours arguing and debating the turn of event in the story. Mere reading their argument, I will just pick up my phone and start typing.
I can't motivate myself, I can't be dedicated to something that I can't place. If the readers started commenting regularly, I will definitely update regularly.
During ALL IN A CIRCLE, waking up in the morning, I open the thread to see the comments first, cos I knew there would be at least fifteen comments, with this story, I have gone three days without opening the thread.
My dedication is up to you guys!
Jeez! This is almost the size of an update.

how do u xpct us to comment wen u hardly update.. dis is just page 65 of d story yet d story never too reach anywhere like dat... dis story is very interesting and d suspense is too much but yet uv not updated... sorry to say but d fault is also from u..at least wen u update we will comment

NL is still instresting to me tho..but just dat d literature section and romance section is now very boring.. its only d9ty7,Juliet and tiffanyj dat is making it interesting and when dis writers r done with der work den d lit section is going to be WACK

stuff46:
muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah *hugs her tight. Were have you been all this while and how has life been treating you dear?

life is just ok... wbu.. oga dee since morning no update.. u no try gahnnnn

stuff46:
Is this the Dooris i know or another one?

We cant bounce and wont bounce tha girl! She is our own na....

stuff come and chop plenty kiss jawe...oms ntorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Onemansquad:
no update 2da nd if u complain i wil thrash ur bumbum nd throw u out of dis thread

try it na.. weda i no go pour yhu hot water

oga dee weldone o be viewing d topic o don't come and update until u kee all of us with suspense

I wonder who owns dat voice... oga dee u should v updated dat NATU part cos am curious to know wat is going on dere... but anyways thumbs up!uv added anoder suspense again

D9ty7:
1-2 updates to drop later in the day. Probably in the night.

aaaaah night ke... it is too far oooooooooooooooooooooooo..shebi today na public holiday we suppose get plenty updates today na

Onemansquad:
u must complain before u say u tank u
*no let me vex o shey u knw me*

bia oms mind ya business o...olofofo... amebo..oga dee when r we receiving d next update

omg chris went to the west wing!!choiii oga dee dat update small na.. but anyways yhu tried.. thanks so much

hadease:
every evil plan on tina and her son shal nt suceed

lol ;Dbro easy dis is fiction... don't get too emotional... oga dee dat update short o but u try jae chop small knucku

when will dis clara die ehn.... oga dee tanks for d update... u said twelve.. no fall my hand ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

thanks tiff

D9ty7:
I am almost done with the updates, but to open my microsoft word and type will drain my battery. I can only type when I have between 90 and 100%.
I can't afford to be cut out of my daily activities on my gadget.

chisos cwist so we go wait till u v 100% on ya phone... so we should not be xpctn update for now till lyt reach ya side..nawa o

D9ty7:
Fire no dey na

fire ke.. but u promised us ..drop one update for us na...

;Dthanks for d first part.. still waiting for the oda part o

D9ty7:
Update drops later tonight. I have been unbanned.
@lilyomi: thanks sweet

oga dee thank you so much for what yhu did... muwahhhh
u said later tonight but dint see anything and no update again dis mawwen wwtin apn na