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While you're busy Changing into the Christmas gears, lemme tickle your attention.
Earlier I was brooding over this Broken Bottle's saga, and it dawned on me that the curtain didn't actually fall at the right moment. If it did fall at all.
Correct me if I'm wrong, Bina's problem wasn't lack of who loves her, who to love or who would propose (8 times you told us). It was her attitude, her unlady-like touch of her environment, from unkempt room to elsewhere and everything else. Not neccessary to end with her choosing to consciously be neat and tidy, but since you chose to end on a happy note, I think a couple of sentences would have fix her problem up.
"Are you serious...Would you marry me?"
"Yes." He hugged her the more. " Absolutely! Next week or even sooner." she blushed. "On a simple condition." she reluctantly pull out of his hug. Her pink cheek slowly lose its glow as a crease appeared on her forehead, and Tjay looked deep into her searching eyes, knowing the one

draybanks:
This is indeed one of the best stories I have seen in 2016. You know what I think? Let's make it a movie. Would really love to see it on screen. But I need to get ur approval first. Nice one gal!

Thanks. Am interested. Mail me iyareserah@gmail.com

crislyn:
Wow I'd totally love that....I'm in my village right now, when I get back next week then. which part of Abuja are you?

Jikwoyi. Mail me. iyareserah@gmail.com

kunletoks:
Nice Story. Keep it up.

Thanks.

Links to stories I wrote three, four years ago using a moniker I deactivated.
www.nairaland.com/1188960/deep-sea
www.nairaland.com/1132958/razor-tongue

Links to stories I wrote three, four years ago with a moniker I deactivated.
www.nairaland.com/1188960/deep-sea
www.nairaland.com/1132958/razor-tongue

Links to stories I wrote three, four years ago.
www.nairaland.com/1188960/deep-sea
www.nairaland.com/1132958/razor-tongue

MightyFortress:
Lady, you are good... I must complement you on this fine effort... I look forward to more of your stories! More grace and regards to your family..

Amen. Thank you so much *winks*

Megilicious:
lovely lovey writeup, i love it, i had to come online n comment. pls will b xpecting more stories frm u, av read torn also, reading hrtstrngs now. kip up d good wrk. more ink to ur pen.

Thaaannkss *hugs*

pweetychyka:
Nice story ma'am....very comprehensive and many lessons learnt.

GOD richly bless u with more wisdom and knowledge!

BTW, I read through ur other story "RAZOR TONGUE"... And I really loved the storyline buh there is something I don't understand about Martha n her neice{sheila}.. What led to the hatred n y sheila was very mean !
Really love her guts tho

Sheila is an only child who is foul mouthed, doesn't like being cheated, ready to state her opinions, and her aunt, Martha felt she was spoilt and too brazen for her liking.

Their constant clashes led to offences which germinated into bitterness.

Princelegacylemoha:
For me She is the Best Is never easy to write stories and articles short But she Does She writes so good She creates realistic stories She keeps it coming perpetual You Good You Good Am not a lover of fictions But you made me love reading Thanks

Am touched, am honoured *holy-hug*

crislyn:
Yeahhhhhh we've got things in common. I grew up in Lagos too, schooled in your state and I also live in Abuja . I wee come and visit you.

Yipee! Let's hang out.

yorhmienerd:
I'm currently reading Razor tongue where Sheila loosed her memory, me likey

I just read it too *winks*

Tife101:
Madam, don't tell me you were the one who wrote those stories. I read them when I joined Nairaland as a quest early last year. You are a genius ma'am. The lord is your strength!!!

Amen thanks!

I wrote those stories three, four years ago.

hernandson:
Ur 1st writeup av ever read,and it was mature and top notch. Nice one God bless.

Thanks.

tens4real:
Hahahahaha... U got jokes u know... I think he need more than a spank... He need a recession beaten

Ah! I am not there o. Hehehe... Kikiki...

yorhmienerd:
[color=coral]Dope work from shewrites, hope we get another one before the year runs out [/color]

Everything is possible.

kedavra:
Please don't get me wrong. I love your writing style. It's just that it is EXTREMELY similar to the one Rowling used in the Harry Potter books. Read it and see.

Oh! I see... Okay.

ROYH:
Lolz ButWhy *holy-hug* Na

I will buy cane for you o. I am not single *winks*

[quote author=ROYH post=52038056]Thanks Madam, To Be Sincere, I Got A Bina Girl Type Also , 2012-2016 , And Guess What, I Actually Proposed To Her In Year 2012 During My Sec School Days And She Accepted But I'm Kinda Like An Introvert Guy, So ,I Just Zero My Mind And Kept Her Below My Thought Plus The Girl Do Got A Lots Of Attention From M(en) Which Made Me Quickly Resorted To My ZERO Thinking...
EVEN
A Friend Of Mine+Her (Male) Told Me He Really Love Her But He Suspected That She Won't Accept Him, I Told Him That "EVEN THOUGH I HAD ONCE TOASTED HER AND SHE ACCEPTED" she might actually like you but you can try ur look... 2013 then....
I blindly Judged The Girl And Let My Solo Thinking Overpower My Brain Of Reasoning, He Actually Made A Move But Got Rejected And That Was In 2015 And Later In This Year, Like 3 Months Back, The Girl Actually Confessed HER Feelings For Me ( Things Got Complicated , Which Prompt Her To CONFESSED )

Don't let ur Bina go ever again. Sorry I didn't mention u *holy-hug*

tens4real:
I guess he meant too say your style of writing and not copying like plagiarism... Cos sometimes when your addicted to a particular author you tend to write like him... Every author has his style of writing... I guess that is what he meant... My two cent

Thanks jare *winks* Let's buy a cane and spank him.

opal4real:
SheWrites fast. She updates quickly. SheWrites better.
More inspiration to you Sarah!

Awwww... Thank you soo much *holy-kisses*

Justicextian:
Woah, this is a replica of a captivativing piece. Love this story @ Shewrites. Thanks for making my day. Please don't forget to call me on board when the next story starts o. Thanks... Cheers

Glad I made your day *winks*

kheengjay:
a masterpiece... danielle steel ain't got nufin on you nice one nice one!

*takes-a-bow* thank you

seunlly:
Nice write up sis. More grease to ur elbow more data to your device. More inspiration to ur ...

*holy-hug*

kedavra:
It's so clear the OP is copying J.K Rowling. It's still nice though. Just don't copy HP too much.

O boy I don't copy nobody. All inspiration came from God.

Some writers might seem to write the same way, but everyone is unique and different.

crislyn:
Ah y na...y are you not from Kogi or Akwa Ibom? chai oh o.... OK no wahala I still love you but hope you don't live in Benin o? that one wee just spoil everything. Lol.

Hehehehe...

I grew up in Lagos. Now am living in Abuja *winks*

crislyn:
Pls don't tell me you are Edo.

Lol... I am Esan. My hubby is Benin.

@all... I am glad you enjoyed the story.

Here is the link to two stories I wrote (under a moniker I deactivated cos I couldn't access the email address) when I was out of the country.

www.nairaland.com/1188960/deep-sea

www.nairaland.com/1132958/razor-tongue

Elkay3:
Why not put these in prints? I mean everyday we get to see books with horrible plots and typos, from people who couldn't cook up an enchanting sentence, all over bookshops while you're hiding in your "cave". Why?

Hmmmmm...

Soonest, I pray... Very very soon, my stories will be in prints and also in e-book formats.

Chumzypinky:
Nyc endin. Nyc story. U always write short yet interestin story Shewrites. Pls wats ur name??

Thanks.

My name is Serah Iyare.

@all... It's being ages.
I now write stories using a new moniker 'SheWrites'
I had to deactivate my former monikers.