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THE FISHERMAN'S Tale(love Finds Broken) / Bottle Warriors(beer Parlour Night Tale)story By Youngzubi / BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 8:36am On Dec 19, 2016 |
crislyn: Yipee! Let's hang out. |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 8:40am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Princelegacylemoha:Am touched, am honoured *holy-hug* 1 Like |
Re: Broken Bottle by pweetychyka(f): 9:13am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Nice story ma'am....very comprehensive and many lessons learnt. GOD richly bless u with more wisdom and knowledge! BTW, I read through ur other story "RAZOR TONGUE"... And I really loved the storyline buh there is something I don't understand about Martha n her neice{sheila}.. What led to the hatred n y sheila was very mean ! Really love her guts tho |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 11:46am On Dec 19, 2016 |
pweetychyka: Sheila is an only child who is foul mouthed, doesn't like being cheated, ready to state her opinions, and her aunt, Martha felt she was spoilt and too brazen for her liking. Their constant clashes led to offences which germinated into bitterness. 1 Like |
Re: Broken Bottle by pweetychyka(f): 12:21pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
SheWrites: Oh right...She wasn't a spoilt brat as the other family painted her then.... I so much love her guts |
Re: Broken Bottle by Megilicious(f): 5:47pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
lovely lovey writeup, i love it, i had to come online n comment. pls will b xpecting more stories frm u, av read torn also, reading hrtstrngs now. kip up d good wrk. more ink to ur pen. |
Re: Broken Bottle by MightyFortress: 6:13pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Lady, you are good... I must complement you on this fine effort... I look forward to more of your stories! More grace and regards to your family.. |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 7:27pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Megilicious: Thaaannkss *hugs* |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 7:29pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
MightyFortress: Amen. Thank you so much *winks* |
Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 11:00pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
SheWrites:Wow I'd totally love that....I'm in my village right now, when I get back next week then. which part of Abuja are you? |
Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 11:03pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
tens4real:Ehn! OK mo ti gbo. |
Re: Broken Bottle by draybanks(m): 12:03am On Dec 20, 2016 |
This is indeed one of the best stories I have seen in 2016. You know what I think? Let's make it a movie. Would really love to see it on screen. But I need to get ur approval first. Nice one gal! |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 5:56pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
crislyn: Jikwoyi. Mail me. iyareserah@gmail.com |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 6:00pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
draybanks: Thanks. Am interested. Mail me iyareserah@gmail.com |
Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 8:42pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
SheWrites:Alrt ma. |
Re: Broken Bottle by Elkay3: 10:37pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
SheWrites: While you're busy Changing into the Christmas gears, lemme tickle your attention. Earlier I was brooding over this Broken Bottle's saga, and it dawned on me that the curtain didn't actually fall at the right moment. If it did fall at all. Correct me if I'm wrong, Bina's problem wasn't lack of who loves her, who to love or who would propose (8 times you told us). It was her attitude, her unlady-like touch of her environment, from unkempt room to elsewhere and everything else. Not neccessary to end with her choosing to consciously be neat and tidy, but since you chose to end on a happy note, I think a couple of sentences would have fix her problem up. "Are you serious...Would you marry me?" "Yes." He hugged her the more. " Absolutely! Next week or even sooner." she blushed. "On a simple condition." she reluctantly pull out of his hug. Her pink cheek slowly lose its glow as a crease appeared on her forehead, and Tjay looked deep into her searching eyes, knowing the one nagging attitude she must change.... Bla Bla blah until the curtain fall. But correct me if I got it wrong. NB: just before someone thinks I'm hating on this amazing writer, try look up at my opening sentence. If I brood over a writeup, that shows I loved it. Even you. 2 Likes |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 11:53am On Dec 21, 2016 |
*hugs* While you're busy Changing into the Christmas gears, lemme tickle your attention. Earlier I was brooding over this Broken Bottle's saga, and it dawned on me that the curtain didn't actually fall at the right moment. If it did fall at all. Correct me if I'm wrong, Bina's problem wasn't lack of who loves her, who to love or who would propose (8 times you told us). It was her attitude, her unlady-like touch of her environment, from unkempt room to elsewhere and everything else. Not neccessary to end with her choosing to consciously be neat and tidy, but since you chose to end on a happy note, I think a couple of sentences would have fix her problem up. "Are you serious...Would you marry me?" "Yes." He hugged her the more. " Absolutely! Next week or even sooner." she blushed. "On a simple condition." she reluctantly pull out of his hug. Her pink cheek slowly lose its glow as a crease appeared on her forehead, and Tjay looked deep into her searching eyes, knowing the one |
Re: Broken Bottle by Elkay3: 12:54pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Keep the hugs first...just say something. |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 5:03pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Elkay3: Bina prayed and believed that God will deliver her from herself. Change is a gradual process and Tjay knows exactly what he is getting into. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Broken Bottle by Elkay3: 10:47pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
SheWrites: You're right. |
Re: Broken Bottle by radiance26(f): 2:08am On Jan 27, 2017 |
Its a pity we can't catch up with the story after the first post,page 1-3 is inaccessible.Just completing the story in my imaginations.It really pained me |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 8:26am On Jan 27, 2017 |
radiance26: Aww... It's the network. Try again or read the story on www.facebook.com/serahiyare.stories. You can also buy it at just N250 on www.okadabooks.com/store |
Re: Broken Bottle by MhizDherbee(f): 1:06am On May 03, 2017 |
You're DOPE!!! Shewrites; ur stories are Amazing.
Keep 'em coming ma'am.
Waiting for a new story....
Dnt 4get to mention me...
I love you! |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 1:38pm On May 05, 2017 |
Megilicious: Thank. Yooouuu |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 1:40pm On May 05, 2017 |
MhizDherbee: Awww darling ...love. yah too 1 Like |
Re: Broken Bottle by Nobody: 10:39am On May 30, 2017 |
Sincerely This Is Lovely. |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 12:53pm On May 30, 2017 |
chiomajoshua:thanks |
Re: Broken Bottle by vickyviolet(f): 2:45pm On Jul 03, 2017 |
nice story
I doff my hat 4 u |
Re: Broken Bottle by MzShay(f): 3:07pm On Jul 03, 2017 |
Interesting story. More inspiration OP |
Re: Broken Bottle by LilySopi(f): 8:56pm On Jul 03, 2017 |
Short and straight to the point. I love ds piece.. Dope. Weldone |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 10:00pm On Jul 03, 2017 |
Thanks everyone *hugs* |
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 8:01am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Morning everyone. I know you enjoyed this story. Get your own copy at okadabooks.com/search?term=BROKEN+BOTTLE Or mail me at iyareserah@gmail.com and I will mail you the PDF format after payment.
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