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Femi drove back home, he was excited. He had been praying to see this day for months and finally it was here.

The dark clouds in the sky were a proof that it was going to be a stormy night. He was definitely going to enjoy his sleep as well.

The only thing killing his joy at the moment was the terrible traffic delaying him, he had spent close to two hours on the road and yet he was far from his destination. That was what came with the hustle and bustle of Lagos.

He was so lost in thought that he did not notice the bread seller by his window.

"Oga, buy sweet butter bread." He turned to his window to see the young man exposing his coloured teeth with a grin. The bread was well packaged, he was sure it would taste great. He did not have anything to eat at home anyways.

"How much?" he asked.
"₦200, Oga truth to God the bread sweet well well," the bread seller replied.

Before Femi could reply, the bread seller continued "How many you go buy?"
Femi chuckled, what was it with business people. Na everything I for buy? He nearly replied but just said, "give me one."

That moment, the car in front of Femi's moved, Femi heaved a sigh of relief. At last he would be moving from one spot to the next.

The bread seller however kept running after Femi's car, he only stopped when the moving vehicles came to a halt.

"Oga, na the bread be this." He replied, he wasn't even panting. Femi assumed he had been in this job for long, the guy was not even sweating. No signs of the fact that he actually got to run a distance.

"Take, bring change," Femi replied and gave him a ₦500 note. It was when he gave him the note he realised his mistake, he should have collected the change before paying the guy.
What if he ran with his money? He gave the guy who was wasting time a serious look.

"Guy, bring the change now, wetin?" He said in a harsh tone, the guy was wasting unnecessary time.

"Oga, no vex." The bread seller replied while dipping his hand into his left pocket, he brought out a crumpled ₦200 note and added it to two ₦50 notes in his hand.

"Na him be this, thank you Oga," he said and waved at Femi.

Femi wasn't impressed, what was the guy expecting? That he would ask him to keep the change? He hissed.



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It was almost 6pm, so much for expecting to get home before 4pm. Just as he was about to take the lane that led to his street, his phone beeped.

He had a message from Titi.

*Congrats ooooo, call me

He smiled, he would just have to get home before making that call.

Finally, I summoned the courage to open this thread.
This is my very first story, so I'm pleading for support from everyone who reads this. Please your comments, thoughts and constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Do note that I am not a student of literature, so please kindly correct any errors in my use of punctuations, words and sentence constructions.
Moreover, the updates of this story might not be very long as I will be making use of my Nokia phone (with 5000 words typing capacity).
Thanks
xoxo!

#NowFollowing... I haven't read dz yet bt with d no of views am seeing...i trust i wont be wasting my time

Madam Glow... *GloW with pride
thumbs up dearie...i enjoyed 'Be careful what u wish for' n am loving dz as well

OMG!!!
Sir KMJ... 'KiliManJaro'... stumbled on dz story sum daiz ago n due 2 my busy schedule, I jst got 2 catch up,
boy oh boy...bros u gud die!
Its a pity wat nollywood situation is,i wz trying to picture yvonne nelson as Eva,John Dumelo as Shina, Emeka ike as ambrose, Femi blaq as Sean and many odas lyk dt,bt d picture no go jaweee... #patheticItIs...
Bt I cn gladly say i c Jessica Alba,Wentworth Miller,Angelina Jolie,The Rock,LL Cool J,Vin Diesel and odas doing justice 2 dz roles...may God help 9ja
(comment don dey long too much ooooo)
KMJ more wisdom ooo,may d cerebral fluid in ur brain not dry oooo...
#NowFollowingBumperToBumper

*relieved....
My dear Zeest z still alive...underage wan kill persn wit suspense..

:OAariz Y now,why ?
plzzz underage, y r u leaving us with a cliffhanger...
#SuspenseAtItsPeak...

Mynd_44: **walks in with a stay containing Kuli kuli and a bottle of zoo**

enjoy

*Me likey...

underage: You are so welcome dear, am sure u'll enjoy your stay on NL cos dere are very good stories here, U can't imagine how much talent we Nigerians have until u read stories here. That's actually what inspired me too.

By the way, thnx for d compliment. Enjoy your stay. There are lots of beds, chairs, sofas to lie on and lots of finger-licking chops to keep ur mouth busy here, just make sure you look for Mynd_44, am sure he'll take gud care of u

I'm beginning 2 enjoy my stay already, @Mr Mynd,plzzz shey no chop chop 4 1st timers niii,i dnt mind 'kuli kuli' with chilled zobo ooooo

Used 2 be an ardent fan of wattpad until a friend told me abt dese stories on NL...our very own 9ja zone....
Just started reading dz story 2dei(d 1st story I'm reading on NL,mind u!) n am so hooked...so loving dz... Underage u r gud..rily!

N plzzz tel me dt Zeest didnt die,plzzzzz