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Nkysuccess:
That was the only option dt Kelvin had to help his brother out. If u had read well u would av seen that he started by talking senses to Micheal but that did not work, he had no option than to do wat he did and yet dt even brot trouble btw him and Michael. And besides as at dt time Kelvin was no ones fiancé.

iamloyalty:
Kelvin is indeed a gud friend to claire he refuseed to support what is wrong or cover the wickedness of michael. He hasn't forgotten how claire saved him from going to jail and he really wants her to be happy.
MORAL LESSON:
PEOPLE SHOULD STOP SUPPORTING WHAT IS EVIL ELSE U ARE PART OF THE EVIL.

iamloyalty:
Is very realistic my dear, he his also a friend to claire. remember she was the one who saved him from going to jail, so why wont he support her happiness or do prefer he encourages her to go back to michael until he kills her? Or he should cover michael cheating on his wife? Besides he never push claire to phil he just knew phil is an honest guy compare to his dog of a friend.

iamloyalty:
I am surprised how some people can support what is bad, because kelvin refused to be part of michael unhealthfulness and unrepentant attitude now made him a bad friend.
NO WONDER THE WORLD IS GOING FROM BAD TO WORST!

Nkysuccess:
Kelvin tried for Micheal abeg. He even went ahead to sleep with Sarah just to prove to Michael that Sarah is a slut so as to save their marriage but he got nothing but insults from Michael. Pls you pple should free the guy abeg. Its not a crime to be a brother to an unreasonable man

Nkysuccess:
Pls help me tell them maybe they did not read the story very well

ericsmith:
i think the only unrealistic part of this story is d kelvin 's script .... micheal bestie i suppose,pushing claire to anoda guy asap... claire shuld move on wit another guy but kevlin shuldnt av played any role @ that ... no reason nor excuse justifies betrayal btw guys ... i think betrayal is ladies tin ....

Rodriguez12:
Cough!! A lot of people are commenting here without even reading d story well, some r commenting because der hate Micheal wit passion for treating claira that way.....micheal! Micheal!! Micheal!!!......yes mike is guilty we all know but is kelvin a saint? Huh!!
Who turned Amara to d mosnster she now is? Who made Amara to strt doubting her sister's claira loyalty to mike? Y on earth will u call d name of ur brother's wife while having sex wit another? Kelvin is not a gud guy to me oooo.. What if mike was to be his blood brother, will he call Phil dat d coast is clear?? Mike look up to him as a brother but he didn't play a brotherly role there. Abeg let's leave d hate n b realistic.. Kelvin didn't come to help he came to do more damage...what if he wanted mike to see reasons dat his sec is a slut, is that d best way to go about it? By exposing her to d whole world� n thereby damaging her future. Him n mike no difference abeg, him no sleep wit disame Amara n d sec using d excuse of exposing her... Y didn't he open up to claira dat mike has also slept wit getrudge if she means so much to him
Abeg Mk I go sleep jare

obindomanya:
'iamlynn' no dey carry last! Her response is usually epic. romanticnovella, na u 1st start o{ cant u communicate advices in a mild/subtle way without phrases like low-thinking faculty, agbaya etc

romanticnovella:
See bros apu maka that one,she doesn't know the trauma behind rape. Her own na to insult people and their unborn children. :3

iamlynn:
he raped her and she went back for more? why didn't she scream when he came into her room?

romanticnovella:
Chantel should stop all these pretense of teaching Michael and Amara a lesson because Amara's own karma is at home (Ebere)... She already has eyes for him and Claire will not forgive her if she finds out later..
Chantel wants to Bleep mike simple.
I have a feeling that Michael will end up with ebere because she does everything like Claire. She cooks and cleans even with her condition unlike Amara who is very lazy and also a bitch ...

I really don't understand Kelvin's aim at all... It's as if he prefers Phil to Michael... And he calls Michael his brother but won't visit him,he's in town planning something with Phil..

PamelB:
ehe!
Sure you know where the unfollow button is.

einsteinn:
i dnt like the story is ending......its not a crime for one's parents to insist on an educated lady or a lady insisting on dating an educated guy....the only thing i learnt from this story is that we are too sentimental in making judgements and we over religious which is bad

djon78:
Shewrite my first time of reading anything on Nairaland Literature, never before till this story was put on front page. Intact I don't read novels only motivation, business development and inspirational books.
I have to say, I have never ever come across a story this good. You are indeed greatly talented. Have you thought about publishing this particular Bukky story??

I also think this story can be turned into a very good movie. Getting the right characters for Bukky, Gbemiga Chike etc. It can turn to blockbuster if well packaged. I might be interested in turning this story into a movie. I will send you message to your facebook page. I already follow you on Facebook.

Concerning this work: I think this story is about Bukky and Gbemiga not Chike. Bukky is the helper ordained for Gbemiga. There destinies are intertwined and they are made for each other....that is what I think. I never liked Gbemiga but after reading the last two chapters I came to that understanding. I may be wrong though.

But SheWrites you are Genius in the making. Keep it up
You beat me to it, so d settle for a role in d movie, preferably the Gbemiga character.

Favour155:
oga park well joor,

what you should understand in the last two chapters is that,

Don't be in a haste to make a decision neglecting the person that was there for you in the begining,
there by choosing family before friends,

there are friends that are better off than family, which bukky happened to be one, she was ready to give her all to Gbemiga but he was ignorant of the future, he only thought about the present and what he stands to gain.

You said there destinies are interwined and he started the relationship with s*x, he choose his family over her, but was ready to have sex with her.

#Hear yourself sir.

Bukky and Chike are meant together, i know nobody is perfect, but give credit to the man that tries to be perfect despite his imperfections.