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Travel / Re: Handworks To Learn In Nigeria Before You Japa by toluvision: 7:52pm On Nov 12, 2023
lavylilly:
Blood money, my ex is doing well hat there, he went to their school there. He came back last month for vacation.

Please which country?
Literature / Re: You Need A Screenwriter? Here I Am by toluvision: 5:20pm On Nov 11, 2023
We4all:


This is a constructive criticism: Your sample screenplay contains some flaws. Firstly, you did not introduce your characters.

Secondly, you shouldn't be using present continuous tenses in screenplays.

There are other flaws, but let me stop here. If you perfect your skills, you will make a great screenplay writer. Cheers!

Thanks for the observation but I also need to correct and
inform you that Scripts are written in the present continuous tense because it allows the audience to listen and see actors' actions as they take place. Different from novels and other forms of writing that use any tense or flow, the script uses the present tense and the present continuous tense as they show ongoing actions in a given statement within a script that will continue to occur after the statement is mentioned, i.e., the action remains continuous in the present and in the near future. In other words, the present continuous tense allows the actor to continue with the action they are presented with in the script..

As for not introducing the characters , he/she only asked for samples and those were just screenshots.

Thanks once again.
Literature / Re: You Need A Screenwriter? Here I Am by toluvision: 4:14pm On Nov 11, 2023
joshkke:
Sample?

Phones / Re: MTN Apologises For Glitch, Customer's Debts To Be Restored. by toluvision: 3:17pm On Nov 11, 2023
Tolu181:
whats the meaning of tolu in yoruba guys


na for abroad dey born me

"Tolu from Toluwalope"
Ti Oluwa ni Ope (All thanks belong to God)

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Literature / You Need A Screenwriter? Here I Am by toluvision: 8:57am On Nov 10, 2023
INT. MY CREATIVE SPACE - ANYTIME

Ready to bring your story to life? Look no further! I'm your go-to screenwriter, I only craft narratives that captivate. Let's turn your vision into cinematic brilliance! 🎬✍️ #ScreenwritingMagic.
Celebrities / Re: Man Tattoos 30BG On His Forehead (pics/video) by toluvision: 3:54am On Nov 03, 2023
Mental health is real. This one has lost it.

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