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teamplayey:
@ Plaitex and Elparaiso:
If truly Nathan had mistreated Pamela, she is not supposed to be surprised by her mum and the stranger's 'activity'.
Shocked maybe at her mother, for making out with a stranger. But my guess is that she would have been aware of her mum and Niyi's closeness.
Psychologically, its hard enough going through such at 15 years. Hmm!

I'd tell you what I had in my head when writing that bit. 1st she was shocked to see her mother making out with the stranger - quite normal you'd agree. Next she is 15 and should have a fairly good idea of the sort of emotion sexual act would produce but don't forget she has been abused from a young age. Let's say her idea of sex and any associated emotion flowing from the act has been severely distorted.

Frankenstein:
He thinks crime can be solved by being nice and sweet.


I think Unique is a bit too gentle towards rude and grumpy Pam. An average Nigerian policeman will treat her differently for her so many lies.

Ehh, I'd like to think Unique should be the Nigerian police of the future somewhere in my head. He can be fair when he wants to be, but he is not perfect @ all. I agree a typical Nigerian police would not condone such behavior but then again I've tried to infuse characteristics of our police as we know them today.

Nmeri17:
am I the only one that hates this unique and his pesky tactics

Really, how you gon be hating on my protagonist? Do you want Unique to solve this case irrespective of who the killer is? Yall should be cheering him on.

Let's imagine he is not the typical Naija police, let's say he is a really good cop, won't you want him to succeed?

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Timothy3113:
Please i need a link to dat ugne abeg.
For primary skul, na 50 times ticha flog me b4 i sabi read edeet goes to skul.

Ehn abi did you post in the wrong thread.

teamplayey:
There are two chapters on the page. Be patient and scroll LOWER

thanks dear

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Morning guys. Sorry for the delay, update's gonna be a bit late these days cos i am outside my zone. Whenever i get the opportunity, i'd post something.

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drollster:
Glad I stumbled on this thread. @ touchmeder, you just got a new admirer of your works. Love the language, character development, logic and the realistic settings of this story. Kudos.

Thanks you're welcome. @all leggo.

omokoladele:
She knows too much but cant do much. 3-stabs on d chest from a baby? She nor get d strength na

You are quite analytical with your reasoning. If you are right in this instance is another thing altogether. Nevertheless I like the way you marshal out your thoughts.

candy:
Yea, go easy on him! Free him from that hell hole called naija prison, let him write his exams jor. Afterall, he is just a armless robber

Okay, okay.

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Like Agatha Christie's Hercule Poirot would say let me tease your 'little grey cells' this morning.

kanechimex:
Touchmeder happy new year. Your story is still nice

Thanks bro.

candy:
Me pity Nathan oan free am.

I'm curious why should he be free? I notice some readers are a bit sympathetic towards that character? He has confessed to being a robber so should it be any easier on him because he is a medical student? #confusedmuch

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I brought out my pink diary and began to write. I loved writing in my diary. It is one of the best things my father ever bought me. It's pink in colour with a beautiful ballerina in front. And its best feature is the small lock at the side. It's my most treasured item, I may be careless with something's but not my diary. I used to wear the key around my neck but after it got lost, I panicked and when I finally found it, I decided to start hiding it with the diary.

I know Osas wanted something like this but he can never have it. He does not like writing anyway and I know if he ever had a diary, he will spoil it with drawing those useless cartoon characters: Ben ten, Scooby doo, Sponge Bob Square Pant et al.

Any way back to the main gist; I still feel sad about what has happened in our home. My mother went to the station yesterday and when she returned her eyes were very red. She told us Uncle Nathan was never coming out of Oko prison. Uncle Nathan had confessed that he and Niyi were responsible for the robberies in our area. She could not believe it and I remember Osas was so shocked he could not close his mouth!

Unfortunately Niyi ran away and Uncle Nathan is on his own. My mother even reminded Osas about the danger of stealing and said that's why she had to flog him the other day. I don’t think it's really good to flog a child but Osas's head is strong like coconut so maybe it was okay to flog him.

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