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Its a great story; it caught my attention 4rm d 1st post and that's huge. Lol

Some mix up with present tense and past tense but you kept me spell bound. Your language is colourful and catchy too. Nevertheless @ some point I was confused.

Is the grandfather mentally unstable or diabolical? Cos dude thanked him in the hospital but hit him @ home in a fit of rage! It was like he changed the second they got home.

And why would the young man entertain thoughts of killing his father - why not the grand dad? At least they are the ones responsible for his father's misfortune. Oh well good luck with your exam

adjain:
It was an honor winning alongside Ruffhandu and Simonhabby. I wish you guys the best in your future writing endeavors!

I particularly enjoyed your story. I found it deeply moving and mind boggling at the same time. You must be a deep thinker to have come up with such a work. Well done.

Dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I was just getting warmed up. Awwwwwww mehn! Lol, I liked it though; just wish the story wld hv gone on a little bit more.

Lilyomi:
Touchmeder I believe u.nid to delete some part of ur story to prevent plagiarism. Writin ain't easy n sumone enjoyin ur sweat certainly ain't pleasant.

My dear I did that since yesterday. Its something I always do apart from the first story I wrote here. This plagiarism stuff is quite annoying.

gal10:
I started this story and didn't go beyond d first post...subsequently i tried to continue but couldn't...i just couldn't go through it .... Today i came and forced myself to read abd couldn't stop... I locked myself in d restroom at work n finished this..... Touchmeder you are A raw talent... Please never stop writing abeg....

I appreciate, glad you enjoyed it.

Elparaiso:
I no go lie, this is the first novel I've finished on Nairaland....

Thank God, It was worth it...
Touchmeder gha to pe e

You dey hail me Oba greeting? I beg ohhhhh! LOL Just curious are you bini?

@missterious, I will. You were the one always distributing likes on d story abi? That was cute.

lenmafon:
she did say that sometimss edugie behaves normal and when she(pamela) is happy that edugie is getting better, edugie will start behaving strange again. touchmender also did mention dat after pamela told her mother about the abuse, mama pamela took edugie for deliverance becos she think edugie needs spiritual deliverance than just the 'psychology' therapy she has been attending in the hospital. a little child like edugie that was abused at that age is bound to suffer such problem & i dont think she could be pretending. i hope i ve explained to ur understanding.

Very well spoken. Pop goes the weasel and Its raining; its pouring are nursery rhymes. Edugie was not pretending.

@Flakkydagirl I nor go find you make you write my foreward when I finally publish so? I think my locs grew longer after reading your comment - no kidding! LOL Thanks babe!

@yongi99 next time come out and talk. You guys don't know how encouraging it is when you just leave a comment after reading.

Trypa:
He would ave solved if it they was more time n his master did not scold @ him to stop his going to pamela's house nice one dear

N really love d poem

Yes, he was on to something and would have solved it but for an unsupportive boss, colleague (yes even Chichi join) and generally weak system. I'd like to think he would not have exposed her sha but then again Detective Unique is unpredictable!

omokoladele:
Wow. Interesting!
Love d poem!!!!

A lot of naughty people on this thread. LOL thanks everyone.

Queening:
Hurray i am so happy dat pamela nd pippi were not caught

Choi make una see this girl o! LOL
Please support police o, next time Unique must solve d crime

I hope you enjoyed this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Massive shout out to my wonderful readers; I really appreciate. I wanna thank people who constantly took time to keep me company with their hilarious and motivating comments. Teamplayer, Elparaiso, Lenmafon, Timothy3113, Omokoladele, Nmeri17, Costlybabe, Candy, Charijee, Flakkygal, Toeyean1507, Lilyomi and co

Beyond the thrill of catching the killer/Killers, the moral of the story is quite simple - please take care of your kids. If you don’t have yet then plan to take care of them when you do. It's not that child's fault that one is busy, poor or a single parent. Communicate with them and encourage them to be open with you.

The right age for sexual education is quite controversial and I will not go into it. But if a 6 or 7 year old child can be sexually abused, then trust me that child is not too young to know some stuff. There was an insightful thread (on the front page a while back) on this same issue. Above all pray for them and commit them to God.
Thanks for reading guys.

By the way @Lenmafon no one correctly answered the question so your recharge card is safe.

When I finished reading the poem she started laughing then she did something that surprised me. She leaned forward and kissed me on the lips. It was very quick; so quick like it didn't even happen. I bent my head sideways and looked at her in surprise then I did something that surprised me greatly. I stared at her in amusement then I moved closer and we kissed tenderly…[/i]

The diary slipped from my hand and I stared at it as tears ran down my eyes. I poured the kerosene, struck a match and watched it go up in flames. The flames licked it clean and it reduced to nothing. Now I could move on with a new chapter in my life.

UOS

THE END

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Queening:
Lol @ "he z our special project nd he needs no form of disturbance at dis stage" . But touchmeder why was d slepping dose not detected in d autopsy report

Good question, don't forget a thorough medical examination was not done because the case was not regarded as top priority for the police. Remember Unique mentioned it would have been good if the stranger's family came around because they would have been prepared to pay for a private autopsy.

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Great read, i thoroughly enjoyed it. I always knew he was not going to get the money so the end suits me just fine.

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She said she was attracted to the pretty usher who kept smiling at her after handing her an envelope and walking her to her seat. I was shocked; of course she had to smile, SHE IS AN USHER FOR GODSAKE! THAT’S WHAT THEY DO; THEY HAVE TO APPEAR HAPPY AND WILLING TO HELP!

However Pippi does not agree with me and when I ask how she knows the usher is also into women, she said ‘’deep calleth unto deep.’’

I swear I can't deal! LOL
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The Pink Diary Reveals its Final Secret

I was tired of standing on one spot reading this diary. It is getting late and the mosquitoes are beginning to feast on my legs. I'm tired of stamping my feet on the ground so I move further down to the past few months where it all began.