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kitnah:
Wow!!

Mine is on 4,wen is urs??

What?!!!


Seriously, mine is 4th too.


Wooooow!

SexySapphire:
Lovely updates Kizzy. By the way, I didn't knw there are so many April babies in the house VanTee20, kitnah, kizzykeziah and me!!! Well today is mine, so happy birthday to me. It will be an honour to av the last update dedicated to me(just hoping sha)

Happy birthday SexySapphire. Wish you long life and prosperities.

#aprilbabiesrock .

Honestly Keziah, I can't think of the appropriate adjective to qualify this story. I immensely enjoyed every bit of it. I'll say, not as a mentor now but as an unbiased reader, that this is one of the best stories I have read in this section in a while. Thanks for writing this story.

kitnah:
I'm through with reading,all i can say is WOW!!

Nice one keziah

Btw,you born in april?? well me too

Me too .

kizzykeziah:
VanTee20, thanks for the endorsement. I really really really really really appreciate that.

You've been an awesome mentor indeed.

You are welcome Keziah.

You have been a wonderful student yourself.

Good evening dear moderators, I wish to use this medium to endorse/recommend this thread for frontpage (I used to know of a thread like that for frontpage nomination and stuff but I can't find it anywhere now).

The writer has done a great job so far, penning a story this splendid as a debutant, then the story itself is near the end so there is no issue of the writer abandoning the story half way. Also, it's been quite a time since a story from this section made frontpage. This story is certainly a good option to fill that lacuna.

I'll be glad if this request is seen to in due time (before the story ends). Thanks.

Tags;

Obinnau, Mynd44, Cuddlemii, Ishilove, Humbledbygrace.

Oluwafunmilayo95:
Vantee, how are u doing? Hope all is well?

I'm doing fine and all is well. I'll continue this story very soon. Thanks ma'am.

Thanks for updating. It was quite a splendid read.

You've got mail .

LarrySun:
Thank you so much, brother. I'm glad you liked what you read.

you are welcome sir.

kizzykeziah:
You know love is blind, messes with peoples heads at times .

Yeah true.

Nice update btw.

Just finished reading the last set of updates and well, I think I'm loving the course the story is taking, but Peter sha. . . I'm afraid he's going to be smitten like a kitten.

kizzykeziah:
Thank you so much.

And don't turn your brother's birthday to 'birthnight' next time o

You are welcome.

Lol. I won't.

Both the prologue and the first chapter are impeccably written. Well, I wasn't expecting anything less from the nonpareil writer of this section. Ride on sir. I'm so following this to the end.

Finally, I'm up to date with this story and I have to confess that I've been held spell bound by the brilliancy of the updates. Why, this is way beyond my expectation. Can't wait to read more about Mike, Sophia and poor Pete. . .

Thanks for the dedication. I haven't really been chanced to read the last few updates, but from the few pointers I've seen, you have improved a lot. You are such a wonderful student. Keep it up .

I see you have taken to the corrections posed by myself and Larrysun, that is good of you. The updates are interesting as usual. Thumbs up.

kizzykeziah:
Thanks vantee,I was just going to ask you to help modifying.Seems you're a mind reader now .

I wasn't exactly aware commas should come before quotation marks.So thank you so much again.

You are welcome .

1. 'I think somenone is at the door',Dammy observed. . . (line 1)

The comma you placed after the second quotation should actually be before it and then there should be a space between the second quotation mark and the next word. Thus, your line 1 should look like this;

"I think someone is at the door," Dammy observed. . .

2. 'Why does sound like bribery,'?Peter asked. . .

Just like your comma in number one, your question mark should be between the two quotation marks. Another important thing is that there is no need to use comma when characters are asking question.

"Why does this sound like bribery?" Peter asked. . . is more like it for number 2.

Nice update by the way, more pleease.