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SexySapphire:
Thanks for the invite. Will be back to comment after reading.

You are welcome ma'am.

kizzykeziah:
Sorry,dear mentor for not inviting you since o.Biane but notin still spoil.

This is my first writing ever and makes me an amateur compared to professional like you so I'm still trying to improve myself with criticisms from you guys.

And thanks for the invites too......a lot

No problem. Biane? Is that french, igbo or korean? .

Professional kini? We are all learning jor, even though some people may have more to learn than others.

Actually, you are not doing badly for a debutant. Infact, the story has been great so far with impressive plottings, interesting characters and convincing dialogue. The only ish I have with the story is the punctuation bit and perhaps the fact that some of the updates looked rushed thereby taking some gloss off the story. Do not be in too much of a hurry to post your updates. Take your time to read and re-read what you are about to post. It helps in making you spot your random mistakes.

All in all, you are doing a great job and I am so proud of you. Write on, nothing do you.

Okay let me pull a few strings of errmmm invitation.

Larrysun (my own mentor), Redmosquito, Royver, Therock5555, D9ty7, Whitemosquito, Chistar01, Princesa, Divepen, SammyHoe, TiffanyJ, Stuff46, SexySapphire, Fatalveli, Kinwayne, Aydesmond, Haydot95, Nuges11, Mariemummy, Iebanehita,
Neduzze, Oluwafunmilayo95
Ayo99, Mightyfortress,
Foxyflow, Oyestephen.

Kizzykeziah! You started this story three weeks ago and never bothered to inform me of it. Why? . You are making me look like the unworthy mentor that I am.

Anyways, nothing spoil. I have bookmarked this page already, will come back to read after church.

I noticed something as I was scrolling down though; your punctuation. You should really work on it amidst other things that Repo pointed out to you.

As for the lack of comments, well I have been there. I know exactly how it feels to post an update and get virtually no feedback. However, you shouldn't let that weigh you down. Focus on bettering your craft, on sharpening your writing skills and everything else will fall in place. Mark my words, a time will come when you will have far more comments than you will know what to do with.
My humble advice, for now, is write on!

kizzykeziah:
Vantee,how is sch?
Hope thou hasn't forgotten us here.Hwaiting!!

School is school, hectic as ever. All in all, we thank God.
Oh no, I haven't. Next update coming soon.

Dsparker:
Vantee please update, we are missing your updates oh

I'm missing your comments too. Let's see what this coming weekend brings.

Oluwafunmilayo95:
patiently waiting... Just take ur time and cook the very best update...

Wow! You are so understanding. I'll do just that. Thanks.

stuff46:
baby new yea. lol
am just reading this updates

btw nice updates

Thank you sir

Tovot:
Switch let me see na . Very very Lovely story .

Thanks ma'am. I'm glad you like it.

Tovot:
Hmm. You are using that your fake Australian accent again (yew) . Thanks Tee.

I can switch to Canadian if you like . You are welcome ma'am.

princesa:
The three nominations for the 'best new comer' are:

Kingwayne

Err, the moniker is rightly spelt "Kinwayne". Kindly modify so he can get the mention.

My votes;

Best Newcomer - Kinwayne

Writer of the Month -
1. LarrySun 2. Repogirl
3. TiffanyJ

I see we are long due for another update, so I have to appeal to everyone following the story to be a little patient because my school has resumed and I simply haven't had enough spare time on my hands to pen and drop the next update. Hopefully, I'd be able to squeeze the time to do that very soon. Thanks for understanding. You are the best.

Signed,
VanTee.

iebanehita:
I finally got a mention from the quoted post.
Doing a local search? Would do that whenever such problem resurfaced.
Thanks for the analysis bro.

You are welcome sire.

Tovot:
Vantee20 , where is the chair I asked you to reserve for me At the front? *reading mode activated

It is there na. I think yew should have seen it by now.

Welcome on board ma'am.

*Following*

Continue please . .

BabieGhagha:
licking my hand...glad we made it together to dis new year.i hope dis new year brings u more fortune,ability,knowledge nd increases ur pocket greatly.nice update.d part were d prince was forming mancho got me..lwkmd!

Amen and the same to you.

The Prince can continue to form macho as long as people like Finn and Frasser are not involved .

donPhill:
@ vantee20 .....u rock, those updates gat me going...keep doin u good work, more ink to ur pen

You rock more, your comments keep me writing. Thank you sir.

Oluwafunmilayo95:
"....needles don't do me nothing.." I so love this part. Nah dagger the guy dey call 'needles' abi?


splendid as always. Nice work Vantee...

LOL! That is probably one of the reasons why the Prince got scared when he heard that they would be facing each other again.

Thanks ma'am.

Fatalveli:
Happy New Year bro! Hw have u been.

Note: Na Update Wey Sure Pass ooo.

Been good. You?

Note: Na so. I no even wan vex person like you wey dey act inside assassin's creed. Who knows what you have learnt from Xavier?

kizzykeziah:
Thanks for the update,Vantee.You're now officially awarded my role model in writing though I doubt I'd ever match your dexterity.But there's hope for me......hopefully.

Wow! Thanks for that award of honour. I'm glad you appreciate my work that much.

You can easily match and surpass my humble level of writing (I'm still very much a learner). All you need do is to have the right frame of mind and give writing your best shot.

iebanehita:
Wow! Am Impressed.

This is It! Drop it like it's Hawt!
Since this is a new year, hope we won't be seeing any piecemeal update from you?

Happy New Year to you. Glad you made it.



In other news, I have had 3 mentions but nairaland no longer notifies me. I dnt get to see it on the top of the homepage when I logged in.. What's happening?

Yeah, no more piecemeals. That is one of my new year resolutions .

Same wishes sir.

Emm, it could be one of these three things;

1. Another character was added to your username without spacing e.g Iebanehita(m) or your moniker was misspelt.

2. You have already viewed the post before the poster modified and mentioned you.

3. You have offended seun. Lol.

And there are times when none of these happens and you still don't get the mention, it has happened to me a couple of times. The way out is to do a local search on your username every now and then in order to prevent missing what could be an important mention.