thankx @fejiluv.

I'm sorri, i only wanted a comment abt d storyline if it worth it, 2 write it as a movie script or nt @fejiluv.

thankx @timpake.

I have been adviced to turn this my story into a script which i'm workin on, bt i want to knw if d story is worth writin as a script. The story is all abt a teenage grl who was raped 2 death by some group of guys, afta raping her den abandoned her in d bush. Afta dat her ghost see's hr bdy lyin on d floor dead, she was surprised nd tried 2 recall d cause of her death, bt she couln't recall anythin. She lata den ran out of d bush nd found herself in an unknown place, where she met a grim reaper tellin her dat, she has only 3months 2 find out d cause of her death. But hw will she succeed in findin out the cause of hr death within 3mnths? When she fell in love with a human who has d gift of seein ghosts bt pretended nt 2 see her becus he wants her 2 complete her task nd becum a human again.

the story is funny.

This a story based on two teenage siblings a male and a female who were both separated at childhood and at their teenage age they both met as friends and fell in love with each other unaware that they were both siblings. All this started when jessica and simon lost their father mr david james in a car accident! by then jessica was just one year old, while simon was three years old, so after the death of their father their mother mrs racheal james. Who could no longer bear the suffering she was facing in the village, decided to go to the city to look for a job. She then left jessica under the care of her grandmother! and took simon with her to the city, were she got married to a wealthy business man. Simon got everything he wanted by his step father and biological mom but still, he wasn't happy he missed his sister so much. And same goes to his mother who was also worried about her daughter jessica. Life in the village wasn't easy for jessica especially now that her grandmother is now too old, she then decide to look for money to enable her and her grandmother go to the city to look for her mother and brother. After jessica and her grandmother had left for the city it wasn't easy for her searching for her, mother and brother in the city both her and her grandmother slept on the street. Without good food,clothing and shelter which made her grandmother felt sick. After fifteen years of jessica and simon departure simon was now eighteen while jessica was now sixteen so, simon and his mother decide to go back to the village to see his grandmother and sister! but when arriving at the village they couldn't find jessica and her grandmum, so they decide to ask the neighbour who was living in the same compound with jessica and her grandmother. But unfortunately when the neighbour saw how rich jessica mother had become, the neighbour then told their only daughter mabel to pretend that she was jessica, simon's sister and mrs racheal james daughter bu,t when simon asked of his grandmother! mabel parent then lied and told them that jessica grandmother died of stroke and left jessica under their care. Pls cast ur comment if my story is gud so dat i can continue frm where i stopped.

i still can't see d full details of ur fiction.

I hope to make my story a movie someday,to help our teenagers fufill their dreams/talents in acting.About my story - THE WRONG IDENTITY.How terrible it is when the senator's daughter ''monica'' turns out to be the orphan,while the governor's son ''eric'' turns out to be the senator's son and the adopted orphan ''benita'' turns out to be the governor's daughter all because of the governor's wife past mistake..................The governor hoped for his child to be a male just because he was the only son of his parents,both the senator and the governor are best of friends 9months later the governor's wife and the senator's wife were both rushed in to same hospital for delievery and that same time a pregnant woman was brought by an unknown taxi driver,claiming he does not have any idea of the pregnant woman relatives,the three women gave birth same time.But all these happened when the senator's wife was unconscious after delievering,the woman who was brought by the taxi driver begged a nurse (nurse 1)to give her baby to the taxi driver who brought her to the hospital the woman told the nurse to tell the taxi driver to take her daughter to the orphanage and the nurse(nurse 1)promised to help her and afta that the woman died..................When the governor's wife discovered she gave birth to a female child she took off her necklace and put it on her daughter,so that when the time comes she would use that as an evidence to get back her daughter she the called the nurse(nurse 2)who helped her in delievering to exchange/switch the male child of the senator's wife with her own female child promising to pay the nurse(nurse 2)a huge ransome of money,the nurse(nurse 2)then took the governor's wife baby and went to the ward were babies are kept and exchange/switch both babies after the nurse(nurse 2)had left the babies ward,the nurse(nurse 1)who promised to help the woman came to the babies ward and in a hurry not to be caught she mistakenly took the governor's wife daughter,thinking it was the woman daughter and she went ahead and gave the woman daughter to the taxi driver to take to the orphanage,when the senator's wife recovered from her unconsciousness and asked of her baby she was told by the nurse(nurse 2)that she gave birth to a baby girl and the senator's wife was given the poor woman daughter..................Will Eric and Monica learn to accept the truth when it comes out? especially Benita who have gone through lots of hatred in the sight of wealthy people and sufferings in the hands of Monica who despice and hates her because of Eric and her status,find out if Benita will ever forgive her biological mother. Please i need a good script writer, who can translate my play to a script because am not good in script writing, and i also need some one to help me make my story a movie you can mail me at vivicamadawa@ovi.com or contact me with this number 08027454172 thank you.