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CONTINUED SCENE: OKOKOH POLICE STATION The duo of detectives are going through some paperwork before they get a knock on the door. DETECTIVE SUNNY: I swear if it's one of those bloody officers I will deal with him or her. DETECTIVE JOHN: relax sunny, it might just be something good ( stares at the door) come in ( a young man walks in well dressed in black coat and smelling nice with a folder in his hands) Wait (stands up as he stares at the face as if trying to recollect something) you are detective Okhideo Samson from AREA 2 ( stretches his hand to shake the young man) SAMSON : (shakes him smartly) junior detective sir, I was assigned last week to team..... DETECTIVE SUNNY : (stares at him awkwardly) to team what?..listen young man, firstly don't get your hopes up I am still trying to get the commsioner to send you back home or whatever or wherever he picked a rookie from, this is serious business... DETECTIVE JOHN: (cuts in) He has slot on his mind why don't we take a walk, welcome ( escorts him outside the office and returns back shortly (stares at sunny with a grin) sunny you have to calm down friend, come on we should be lucky we have someone to help us work this thing out, we aren't getting any younger you know, plus I have heard good things concerning this guy, he is incredibly intelligent and smart you know. DETECTIVE SUNNY : whatever, just don't get involved in my work I hate this rookies acting all tough and all when they got no experience and no sh*t to prove, trust me give him something to bark at just don't get him involved with me , you are too nice to everyone. DETECTIVE JOHN: that's because you took all the anger with you ( walks out laughing as he joins Samson) SAMSON: with due respect sir, I want to say it's a big honor to be working with the most elite detective duo in criminal investigations. DETECTIVE JOHN: (laughs as they both walk) that's ridiculous, come on we are not that good we just do what we can plus i have heard nice things about you too young detective, it's great to have you join us here for the time been. SAMSON : I will do my best to help solve this case . DETECTIVE JOHN: speaking about the case, I believe you have been briefed already may I ask what you think about it? SAMSON : Ivy is one of the smartest and most intelligent individuals in the whole of criminal investigations if I may say, her exploits as an undercover agent is something we young detectives like her at some point hoped to be like, but she is human and humans make mistakes and when they try to cover up their mistakes it only results to more mistakes. DETECTIVE JOHN: (nods his head ) very true and her accomplice what do you think about him? SAMSON : that's the thing sir, we have no idea if it's a guy or a girl sir, no records, no ID, no nothing, this person is the real ghost not Ivy, not even a single alias we know of this other person but we know someone is out there and that's why we need to find Ivy and I think her brother the only survival of the family massacre... DETECTIVE JOHN : the blind fourteen year old who lives in calabar with some relatives? SAMSON : yes sir, sir I have reasons to believe Ivy might still be in contact with her brother and I would want to check out a few things out myself if you will let me. DETECTIVE JOHN: oh please do if you want to, you are not a junior detective here with us, you are a detective just like us you don't need our permissions okay plus I think you should take it easy with my partner for now, he can be a crazy son of a bi**ch sometimes but he will come around okay? SAMSON : (smiles) thank you sir, I was told to clear my gun and file for it's use here in this station I need to go do the paperwork now, thanks again (walks away) DETECTIVE JOHN: (stares at him and smiles slowly) look at that, a young smart detective just like I was during my time ( walls back to the office) CONTINUED |
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CONTINUED SCENE: LEKKI AVENUE, EKO SPAR Elijah maverickrolled the wedding ring off his hand slowly before throwing it off the sink, he starred at the mirror in front of him, the huge scar just above his left eye was daunting as usual. He grinned as he seem to wipe something off his face before picking his phone. ELIJAH: what is it? RE: We have a hit on the disc, we couldn't get the exact location, the hacker was good ,are you interested? ELIJAH: What about the rat? RE: Bashi has some unfinished business to attend to ELIJAH : blacky, what about her? RE: We haven't been able to get to her after the incident, she is ghost for now and for her best interest we will leave her like that ELIJAH : (sighs) send me what you have, am on my way CALL END. SCENE : IKOKOH PRISON, BLACK GATE the prisoners are arranged in line as they are about to be served breakfast, the two wardens arrive with the cook and her female assistant to help share the plates of watery beans, the wardens are stunned by Caleb's undeterred presence . WARDEN 1: (draws warden two closer) Oga is right oh, see him there (points a hand towards Caleb who is sitting quietly at a corner) they did not even touch him at all. WARDEN 2: but what if he threatened them, I mean this guy took twenty five criminals down under thirty minutes , me I can't even imagine how he did it. WARDEN 1: no nah even as at that this is the black gate, even devil no want free enter Here , something is seriously wrong, have you given Oga this man file? WARDEN 2: I checked for it oh yesterday but I haven't seen it at all ? WARDEN 1: you have not seen it , how?, new batches of file are I. the left corner now is easy to find WARDEN 2: I know even the officers at the department have also tried to locate the file they could not find it but am sure they will today. NARRATOR : I sat up right as I watched the cook dish out the plates of beans to everyone. COOK: (happily) make una chop this one well, one good Samaritan donated bags of beans to the prison two days ago and other items, make una enjoy this one eh. NARRATOR : I told you I had a plan. caleb walked up to ELVIS THE DON whose boys had gotten his plate of beans to. CALEB: don't eat that . ELVIS THE DON: (confused) Bros have you seen this before ( shows him the plate of beans) there is actual oil inside beans, this has never happened before. CALEB : don't eat that, do you want to get out of here or not? ELVIS THE DON: but how does eating stop me from escaping or you want to have double portion ( tries to take a spoon) NARRATOR : idiot, I couldn't let that happen. Caleb flung his leg up just below Elvis the Don hands throwing the plate of beans and the spoon off his hand , his action draws the attention of everyone; inmates ready to pounce on Caleb. ELVIS THE DON: (stares at everyone and then smiles slowly) I dont feel like eating beans . (gives a grin at Caleb as he walks closer to him and whispers into his ears ) the next time you try that I will tear your skin off your bones and then make a mat out of it. (walks away) NARRATOR :Well that could have ended badly for him. the cook and the wardens walk out discussing. WARDEN 1: what was that about? WARDEN2: i don't know the Elvis I know would skin that bastard alive, we have to get to our informant within the cell, something is fishy. WARDEN 1: (coughs) definitely anyway let me go to the clinic bay I have been having this reoccurring cough now. WARDEN 2: no wahala and try and get their numbers, the new boys haven't filled in their report since they arrived yesterday, the government is very confused how can you send two small doctors to handle abig prison like this? WARDEN 1: well how can they also let you and I who have no certificates to operate at this level in a prison. WARDEN 2: (laughs) I see your point anyway shall please get me paracetamol make I drink down with my own beans. CONTINUED |
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CHAPTER THREE OLD WOUNDS SCENE : LAGOS, BANANA ISLAND, PURE GROOVE ESTATE Alabi Castro flenched and winced involuntary as his hands worked on all three systems right before his desk but the flinching wasn't because he had been working on this super jet hybrid computers but because of his d**k which was been slopped in and out of his girl's mouth where she comfortably kneeled In front of his chair just under the desk. ALABI CASTRO : (winces) hah God you are killing me ( stares down at her with a smile) I should pay you more honestly . GIRL : (smiles at him before continuing working on his d**k again this time taking the whole shaft down her throat and then proceeding to bring it out) arrgh , have you done it yet? ALABI CASTRO : (stares at her) oh yes that didn't even take a second, I hacked into your school system and polished your results not even God can fault my work baby, you and your friends are good to go, your school system was pretty easy like totally outdated easy to hack ( smiles at her) can you put that back inside your mouth I think I was starting to feel like bursting. GIRL : (smiles at him before grabbing his di*k and letting it slide deeper into her mouth) ALABI CASTRO : ( closes his eyes for a few seconds to enjoy the feeling before he opened them after one of the computers gave a beep) yes (screams louder) GIRL: (releases his di*k from her mouth) what, don't tell you busted so soon? ALABI CASTRO : (stares at her) oh no I told you, I wanted you here for the next two hours before you go anyways I just cracked the second disc , my boss would be happy about this ( stares at her) now put that back in between that sweet lips of yours. (stares at the system a bit confused as a set of algorithms run through all three screens ) what the f**k is this? CONTINUE.... |
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CONTINUED. Deep within the ikokoh prisons, inmates of the black gate are up about discussing a few seem to enjoy their silence more such as Caleb. NARRATOR : I found a convenient space to sit in, my minds going through every face, action, words each inmates spoke, I needed to find the mole day two meant I only had five more days to work to get my target out. Don Elvis walks up to Caleb with a joint in his hand. ELVIS THE DON: (hands it over to Caleb) here we don't always get much in this place. CALEB : (sits upright) thanks but I don't smoke. ELVIS THE DON: (surprised) really (chuckles) what type of criminal doesn't smoke? CALEB : the type he needs to get a kingpin out of high maximum prison , did they let you keep wearing that bag pack inside the cell? (points to the bag pack around Don Elvis waist) ELVIS THE DON: (laughs) I am the boss in here, I do whatever I want well that's for the next few days I have here. CALEB: you are not dying this week, you have my way into the Association. ELVIS THE DON: (excitedly) oh yes I do but am curious what is it you want with the association? CALEB : (grins) if I told you I would have to kill you first (stares directly into his eyes) ELVIS THE DON : (laughs as he walks away) you are really one mystery man, I hope your plan works for the both of us. NARRATOR : He is right about one thing I needed my plans to work. SCENE : LAGOS MAINLAND. Bashi Aliu drove up the high way accelerating at a constant speed just as his mind went through tiny details that revolved around his one little mistake, He wasn't the one to make mistakes rarely unlike the average killers or so called assassins he saw himself as a specialist in the dark profession. But for now he had other things too to worry about, his son was coming home from today after finishing his exams , how he had missed the little devil, he grinned slowly as he swerved into a corner and got into a super market to get a few things for the boy. His Cart was filled up as he rolled it up to the cashier. CASHIER : ( successfully scans each item) sir your total is N124,000 , are you paying in cash or card? BASHI ALIU : Cash ( he brought out bundles of cash from his jacket which he placed on the counter just as the TV at the shelf started airing the news of the explosion at some eatery downtown, a grin smile on his face) , what do you think about that? ( he turns to the cashier) CASHIER: ( confused) about what? BASHI ALIU : the bomb blast, it's news ( points at the TV) CASHIER : oh that well nah it's not a bomb blast, everyone knows that eatery has had two incidents In the past ,one was I think with a cylinder and the other with pipes underneath it, it's just unfortunate people died this time, I hope they close the eatery for good. BASHI ALIU : (smiles) there's N135, 000 right there, you can keep the change of bill. (he proceeds to walk away with his items into his car before getting a call , he starred at the number with some confusion, there were only three contacts that had his phone contact ,this wasn't one of them he hesitated for a minute before deciding to pick up) BASHI ALIU : hello? RE: (little boy's voice) daddy help me (sobs) daddy please help me BASHI ALIU : (recognizes the voice as his son) Jeffrey? RE: (adult female voice) do you really think I would not find you , I have your son.... BASHI ALIU : if you touch a hair on my... RE: i am not a psychopath like you I don't enjoy killing but I promise you if you as much as act smart, your twelve years old boy will be on the next news . BASHI ALIU : what do you want? RE: your life (Ends calls) Bashi Aliu stood there for a few minutes before dropping the shopping bags on the floor and made for his car . END. CHAPTER THREE TOMORROW |
CONTINUED SCENE: LAGOS, AJEGUNLE Matthew rolled up a joint quickly, he was sweating so rapidly he was finding it hard holding up anything . "damn it" He muttered much to Dayo's amusement who jeered him to try and relax. "I am trying to relax , I just don't do well with police stations , it's a long story you can say it's family history " "(chuckles) that reminds have you gone to see your elder brother and his wife lately? " dayo replied. "a big F to them both, what did they do for me when I had nothing , they can enjoy their sentences In prison, they killed that bastard me am just enjoying been smart" Matthew said breathing hard as if to calm himself. "are you serious about what you said? " His friend replied. "Listen to me (heightened voice ) I have a mom in a psychiatrist hospital who bit off the ears of another patient and swallowed one of them two days ago that cost money, I have a girlfriend who constantly demands money from me that cost money too , I have an education to pursue am not thug you know and that cost me money, this hands and feets are going nowhere near a police station no matter.... " Matthew halts as his phone rings , he checks for new message and scrolls through the new one with disgust on his face. ".....sh*t, we are going to police station, drink some water lets go! " stands up to leave. "what, what do you Mean we are going to the station, didn't we have a job at hand? " Dayo asked. " Yes and the job details just arrived, get your system we have just about fifteen minutes to rehearse our shit, come on let's go " he walks out of the restaurant. SCENE : IVY'S RENTED APARTMENT "sh*t , sh*t !" She muttered as she struggled to get up from the bed, she had slept off longer than she needed to. Ivy ran up to to the bathroom this time with a pair of scissors she took from her bag, she dragged a mirror out from the back of the door and proceeded to cut her hair down to a low cut after which she applied white dye. She then proceeded to remove her contact lenses from her eyes and proceeded to test the glasses she had in her bag, she have a grin at her appearance in front of the mirror and then made way for the kitchen cabinet ,there a nylon of bread laid, she took four slices with a sachet of pure water before bolting for the bathroom again with a small bottle in hand. She looked at her neck tattoo ,one last time before applying the liquid to her neck, thankful they weren't permanent tattoos, they soon fade away as ink right down her neck. She wiped a tear off her face, before she returned back to the room to get some clothes on, inside her bag was a fake ID card, with her gun inside she made for the door. SCENE : OKOKOH POLICE STATION, MAINLAND The duo detectives had just finished with the autopsy report on their victims which they received sooner than they had expected. DETECTIVE JOHN: he died a very painful and slow death, that's cruel. DETECTIVE SUNNY: I honestly don't care about how he died, he is a criminal, he knows their is no heaven for his kind , my problem is the information that he is for us. DETECTIVE JOHN: oh come on , he was also an informant, out go-to guy for information in some way he was paying his debts back, people change you know. DETECTIVE SUNNY : (chuckles) people change? listen my friend I once caught my ex-wife cheating text messages and then I said okay it happens you know what people change I said so I turn a eye doctor you know what she did next , she brought a man to my house next, people don't change my friend, the devil is the devil 24hrs, 365 days just like every damn criminal out there, so spare me the gospel crap, God can believe that shit but not me. DETECTIVE JOHN: okay detective judge and jury, have you thought of how we can get our girl? DETECTIVE SUNNY: we do what we always do, we go to starting all over again, no one is perfect, Jesus left foot prints wherever he went she is no different. DETECTIVE JOHN: i don't get it really, I mean I don't understand her deal in all this, a brilliant A+ genius and proud prodigy in criminal investigations , a girl who was breaking records in fields even top detectives couldn't even stand out from , one of the best undercover agents in Nigeria just Wakes up one day and decided to turn murderer , I don't get it really DETECTIVE SUNNY : (thinks) she lost her twin sister to an assassin , that was her breaking point but I don't care really we are going to get her and her colleague altogether, I know it. CONTINUED.... |
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CHAPTER TWO: THE ASSOCIATE SCENE : LAGOS, MAINLAND, WINEY'S EATERY Bashi Aliu sipped his wine slowly, well dressed in black coat with a body to die for, he seemed like the top male models well nurtured and highly Intelligent at first appearance. his eyes steadied on his target, a target; a local Chairman or whatever he was told he was not that he cared, for him he only needed a down payment and a photo. Lagos most deadly assassin they say, a modern day ghost man whose works speaks for him throughout the underground circles. He starred at the man who seem to be enjoying his day with his girlfriend, something reflected in his mind; this particular moment always had a way of getting to him. he wondered how is it for a man to go about his day with no care in the world and no sign he was going to be dead before the end of the day, how is it that people don't know when or the fact that they are going to be killed the next minute. He started at his watch as soon as the target got up and headed for the bathroom though accompanied by two bodyguards, Bashi Aliu seemed not to worry as he optioned to make his call to his associate , the middle man who is responsible for giving him his jobs. " it's done, he is dead" REP: "very good, I have another job for you, this one you're going to like it" "send me the photo" Bashi Aliu stood to leave before a deafening explosion sound rocked the bathroom and the building itself , Aliu walked out amidst the crisis of a explosion which came right from the bathroom. This days he hated using the gun, more noise more attraction, if he was to remain a ghost he needed to be innovative like paying off a restaurant worker to plant purge medications inside their favorite customers food and setting up a DIY bomb to clear out the target once the purge medications take effect. His phone rang quickly, he stood still right there as people ran out and in chaos of the explosion, he cleaned the dust of his phone, he couldn't believe it, this was not possible. The one mistake he had made all his career as a professional Assassin was right there on his phone again. he muttered slowly to himself. "IVY OSARODION,AGE 26" he smiled slowly, today was apparently going to be a good day. CONTINUED.... |
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CONTINUED SCENE : IKOKOH PRISON, BLACK GATE. Caleb walked in before his handcuffs were released by the warden who smiled wickedly at him for no reason. WARDEN 2: i will soon be back to collect your body after dem Don use you reach ground .... NARRATOR : I took one vicious look at him which I could tell scared the living out of him as he took his area back and decided to leave me to my fate. Caleb turned back just quick enough to dodge a blow which came at him quite unexpectedly but he was prepared for everything, ducking low he delivered a painful blow to these midsection of the inmate who was bare chested at the time, his counter sent the inmate coughing blood as he landed cold to the ground. CALEB: (stares at the inmates who seem to be highly conscious of his presence and about to mob him) I came here for Don Elvis, I am his mystery man, is Don Elvis here? NARRATOR : my eyes slowly moved from left to right, scanning every details I could make out for my target whilst my fist were up high in my defensive posture. ELVIS THE DON: (walks out of the crowd) who are you? NARRATOR : short, fat, black bearded scarred face ,we're not the features I had thought my man was going to have but nothing really mattered. Caleb : (relaxes his fists ) I am your mystery man, we have much to talk about. ELVIS THE DON : (shouts at the inmates) get the hell out of my way you idiots and go check on pawpaw, he looks like he is about to join the gods of his land ( he said pointing to the semi conscious fella right in front of my feet) come with me ( smiles at Caleb who follows him to a corner) where you the one who has been sending me messages about me getting out of here before my due date? Caleb: yes unfortunately I can't do anything from the outside, your death sentence can't be bought apparently thirty criminal assaults including mass murders can't be waved off easily ( starring at him in the eyes) but there is another way. ELVIS THE DON: and how does that work with you inside this jail with me, the guy you need to rescue? caleb : (grins) getting you out is the easy part, I have a plan you have been scheduled for the firing squad 7 days from now I intend to get you out on the sixth day (pauses) actually you and I out. ELVIS THE DON: (laughs) you are crazy, aren't you? Caleb : we passed crazy when we made the deal, your escape for the disc , I always keep my promises. ELVIS THE DON : (seriously) you're serious about this? Caleb : stay alert, I know you run this place but you have a mole within the cell, my informants couldn't help me pick out the rat but for now just be prepared and wait for my signals. THE END OF CHAPTER ONE. CHAPTER TWO TOMORROW |
CONTINUED SCENE : LAGOS,MAINLAND. Just under the bridge within the mainland, Lagos a cluster of police van with two separate patrol van cluster around a semi nude corpse of a man with his stomach ripped open and the guts all exposed outside, The two detectives assigned detective John and Detective Sunny, two duo who have been working at the main police branch arrive at the scene. DETECTIVE JOHN: (walks into the midst of the police men and sights the dead body) cover this thing up. POLICE SERGEANT : ( walks up to the detectives) Oga shey it's a dead body? DETECTIVE SUNNY: (angrily shouts at the sergeant ) no it's not a dead body, it is a man who is pretending to have his stomach ripped open under a briged ,now will you get out of my presence before I add you to the list of corpses we would have to take down to the station? DETECTIVE JOHN: ( laughs hysterically ) detective sunny come let's get out of here before you kill a man in uniform. they both get back into the car as detective sunny angrily slams both hands on the Steering let it horn loud as the police men stare at the car from the distance. DETECTIVE JOHN : detective calm yourself man! DETECTIVE SUNNY : (shakes his head ) that's our informant who has been missing for the past 3 months (slams the steering again) dammit this case is driving me crazy. DETECTIVE JOHN: you seem to forget I too am working on this, listen.... DETECTIVE SUNNY: you don't get it do you John, we are one of the most elite duo in this business, we get a case we crack it , it's our policy it's our fire but this damnned curse has been on our back for long and the only person who could have made things less gritty for us just got his sac opened (sighs) this is frustrating. DETECTIVE JOHN : we have to find the girl, she is the only one who is and can help us figure out who the hell this ghost is. DETECTIVE SUNNY : how on earth do we do that, she is more elusive than a witch , no one has seen her since the events, she is more of a ghost just as our man is, I Mean we don't even know anything about this two, no family, no friends, no jobs to trace, no nothing. DETECTIVE JOHN: (laughs) oh come on like it never happens to us, listen we will get this guy one way or the other. The detectives zoom off the scene. SCENE : IVY'S RENTED APARTMENT , LAGOS ,EVENING Ivy glanced at the four large Ghana must go fully stacked with foreign currencies , she rubbed a sweat off her forehead as she lit another cigarette, if she was certain of the total sum it would be 32.5 million dollars in raw cash. She was lucky, her plans worked though dangerous her idea to move the stash at midnight was perfect. She left the cigarette on the table and headed for the bathroom to clean up her wounds and bruises; slight cuts she had incurred nothing serious. She did it carefully and then optioned to get her phone which she smashed to the ground before proceeding to dump the pieces into the toilet and optioned to flush it immediately. She was going to sleep naked tonight, three weeks without good sleep was already messing her up badly, for tomorrow she needed that rest, her list had just five names remaining. she starred at it before putting it under her pillow alongside her polished pistol fully loaded. CONTINUED. |
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CONTINUED The two wardens run back towards the direction of the cell half an hour later as violent screams shattered the air within the prison. NARRATOR : they came just quick enough to see me punch the tooths of an inmate into his throat as he went to the ground cold amongst a pile of unconscious bodies and few still struggling to overcome the pain WARDEN 1: (painfully screams ) what is this one ? WARDEN 2: you kill them? (confused ) CALEB: (wipes the blood of his fist) I told you to bring painkillers now will you take me to the black gate? WARDEN 1: (turns to warden 2) this one na craze oh, you own Don finish reach ground once you enter black gate if God no go fit save you. NARRATOR : if they knew who was coming for them maybe the warden would have been worried about them. WARDEN 2: this one own Don die reach ground (opens cell and walks past the Unconscious bodies in fear) oh boy na 25 people you just use take fill malpractice form so oh ( expresses his worries in his local dialect before taking Caleb out of the prison) eh (turns to warden 1) go call ambulance make them go repair them, chai na people children you just use blow take design like this hah black gate na your calling jhare make we dey go. NARRATOR : just like they say easy peasy! CONTINUED |
CHAPTER ONE MYSTERY MAN NEWS REPORT ".....the blood gang was caught after a three hours gun duel with the combined Armed Forces of Nigeria police and It's Army with all eight now behind bars serving various consecutive life terms for the streak of violent and disturbing crimes which ended in total death of over 121 people, one is left to wonder if life jails terms is what this murderers truly deserve....." SCENE : IKOKOH PRISONS NARRATOR : You don't want to be here, your religion talks about hell but I tell you if hell was real , I just stepped in to it. Caleb starred at the inmates within the cell block and paused immediately making the two inmates behind him to wonder about his decision, apparently the day had been very strange from a willing offender turning himself in to pleading guilty and even more requesting a jail and the number of years which he wanted even though he was to be charged initially for less time within the prison. WARDEN 1: Oga watin happen? Caleb : this is not the jail I want, take me to black gate ( turns and stares at them directly in the eyes without flinching) NARRATOR : they call it the black gate, a prison for prisoners not worthy to be in prison, call it the devil's bed space, call it a prison in a prison, call it hell's hell. WARDEN 2: eh you sure say you value your life so, even devil no go green enter that area oh and you con feel say na where you want your burial site be that? Caleb : take me to the black gate now! (this time a bit more intimidating) WARDEN 1: (laughs) Oga we no fit do that kind thing jhare see no be your kind of small small criminals dey there na ogas and masters full there and people way do really bad things jhare. NARRATOR : my plans was not going to be halted anyways my goal was black gate and black gate I was going to get. Caleb: So what can I do to let you know I am more danger to the people in there than they are to me what can I prove I am more dangerous than every criminal you have ever put a way ( stares dangerously at them as he presses his demands again) WARDEN 2: Oga watin you want do, see just maintain yourself oh (draws out his Barton) WARDEN 1: ehm okay see if you really want do press up with death no wahala see na people way no still behave well for where them day we go carry enter their, so if for your prison you dey make trouble then..... Caleb: (walks into the prison) you two will be back here for me within the next thirty minutes and bring some pain killers along. NARRATOR : I was 6ft tall, masculine, eyes which showed no expression of life, skills no one else possessed and what I saw immediately I got into that cell were body bags, one.. two.. three.. four... five... six.... I grinned slowly , I could see their fears in their eyes it was time to unleash some pain. CONTINUED... |
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