₦airaland Forum

Mustay:
It is a nice way to sell yourself, this is more like a cover letter in the body of the email but general tips for you here:

1. Make it brief. Particularly for an unsolicited application, people generally scan through the first few paragraphs and the last sentences.

2. Grandioseness: Inasmuch as you are trying to impress the recipient, remember the golden rule, KISS. KEEP IT STRAIGHTFORWARD & SIMPLE. Don't use unnecessary grammar or jargons.

Your introduction could have been more concise than it is. You do not want the reader to lose interest in the first few sentences.

Another example is this:



"I am a graduate with strong interest and succession in acquiring bachelors in engineering ( Water Resources Engineering)"

Which one is it Have you 'acquired' or not? In the process, you have left the reader confused as to whether you're a graduate or an undergraduate.

3. Punctuation: Your first paragraph is so long that seeing the period was like achieving eureka state of mind. Breakdown your sentences to be readable and understandable. A lot of your sentences are too complex. Use commas, periods and semicolons appropriately.

4. Tautology: Nigerians like to emphasise and in this process, we repeat words unnecessarily. Some words we make use of in our sentences are redundant and add up to the word count.

5. Getting Personal: Whether it's business or employment, avoid the "we vs them" syndrome; adopt "us" instead. I see you using 'The Company', 'this organisation' or 'the firm'. Use the name of the firm, adopt their language and make it look like you're part of the team. In fact, you ought to be making use of the firm's values etc and tweak it towards your own strengths etc.

6. Salutation: Since you're using Dear Sir/Ma, it should be 'Yours Faithfully'. Use 'Yours Sincerely' when you know the name of the addresses which you should or can actually find out.
Nigeria will be a better place if every other person becomes responsible.lnstead of insensitive comments,u fancy helping a brother...All observations towards pinpointing relevance and importance to areas of emphasis,the young man need to thank you.

vanida6:
Awww wish am d one


HML

Cityfirstborn:
This prophet again!
'I see a woman sworn in as the new Us president'

Everybody knws exchange rate of naira to dollar ill soon reach 600naira, and we definitely knw it ill get better. So go and rest sir!

zainabxel:
This fool probably never listened to "for instance"
or "E be like say"

For instance
Say na me be one wey dey give chance
Say na me be one wey dey make plans
For all man to benefit
Abi to make we disagree
Abi na to create chance
But now am not of importance
Cos now I am looking from a distance
That's why you give them the chance
To turns us ...to turns to victim of circumstance
Them just dey ignore our existence
Them just dey use excuse buy chance
Like them no know say we dey
Them dey use us dey play
...
When we stand for resistance
All in the act of exploitance
Abi we just be living in a trance
Ayi oh! my God!
Ala Oyi e!

This thing that am feeling
Is a feeling of love
And you know say is so... Ala Oyi e!
This thing no go go
Then u know I go slow... Ala Oyi e!
This thing is affecting your thing
And is killing your soul... Ala Oyi e!
See this type of thing we we dey feel
They make me dey want to dey... Ala Oyi e!
Even if I want to dey cheat
I go still dey want to dey... Ala Oyi e!
Stand look around you
I bet you go dey want to dey... Ala Oyi e!
Ala Oyi e! for the thing wey u see wey make you Ala Oyi e!

For instance
Say na me be Baale of Nigerians
Say na me be one wey dey make plan
Say I go create a scenery where better go plenty
Make we dey give chance
Instead to dey pack the money go France
To make suffer to full in abundance
To make me run run away
To a place where ebi say
I go feel like Europeans
Where them go respect my skills for instance
Where them no go dey play pranks
Ontop people wey work the way
Wey give them the key
To chop substance
As them know say we be freelance
Their looting no dey give us assurance
Repentance no dey their plane
E dey create annoyance for my heart
So Ala Oyi e!


Make we dey give chance... Ala Oyi e!
Instead to dey pack the money go France... Ala Oyi e!
To make suffer to full in abundance... Ala Oyi e!
Ala Oyi e!... Ala Oyi e!... Ala Oyi e!


E BE LIKE SAY

Looking back through all the years
That you and I have spent together
It seems like you’ve been playing me all along
So many times, you asked me to put the whole of my trust in you
So many times, you betrayed and played me for a fool
Why don’t we work together so the future will be brighter
Cos, e be like you and I
We dey need each other all the time
All the time
Another year has come
And now you want my trust once more
Oh no

E be, like say you want me to tell me another story again oh (e be like say)
E be like say you want to act another movie again oh (e be like say)
E be like say you want to code another coding again oh (e be like say)
E be like say you want to dance
Galala na di new dance, again oh
You want to sing another song again (e be like say)
E be like say you want to code
You want to code oh

See, all I want to say is that
They don’t really care about us
Because all they want to do is to get in touch with big bucks
Because they think the money gives them the power
But the power is nothing
If your people cannot get quality education
The power is nothing
If your people keep on dying of disease and starvation
The power is nothing
If your people have no peace (no peace)
The power is nothing
If your people cannot live in unity (eh)
See, why do you keep deceiving the people, my brother, my sister
See, why you make all this people to dey fight one another
Only God can judge you now [x4]
Another year has come
And now you want my vote once more oh no

I dedicate this one to all of the shady politicians
Wey go promise and fail and make the people live in harsh conditions
I dedicate this one to all of the shady politicians
Why don’t you change your ways
Change your ways now
Make the people live the way they are supposed to live
E no be small thing o
As you see me so (no be small thing o)
I no send, I no send you oh (no be small thing o)
All of the shady politicians (no be small thing o)
As you see me so (no be small thing o)
I no send, I no send you oh (no be small thing o)

When was tuface quiet? This fool should shutup

sarrki:
Wetin I do again brother ?

TrapQueen77:
Ooh hi... well, I never see u around.. Hope u doing great...

dre11:
http://punchng.com/wife-demands-n500-sex-man-tells-court/

favourmic:
A man was starved of sex for months because his wife had put to bed through caesarean section.
One day, the wife said, my Love, I know how you must be feeling because of my condition; abeg take this N3000 and look for someone, have sex and satisfy yourself.
The husband collected the money and left, but returned after 30 mins. The wife said, Haba! So soon? And he answered, "I no go far, I just enter this our neighbour house; Mama Blessing in particular!".
And the wife asked, I hope she no collect money? The man said she collected and the wife said, Abi she dey craze? Abeg hold this pickin for me, make I go meet the idiot. "The time wey she born pickin, I help her husband for free, why she go collect money from YOU?"

TrapQueen77:
Is it?

TrapQueen77:
Yaaaas... Nice and holy

I will not only give u a damn day... I can take a wk or 2 break from my work

TrapQueen77:
Abeegi, don't suffocate urself eehn..

Juz breath in, breath out till I come knocking on ur heaven's door and sell u some of these sleeky and sexy lipsticks

TrapQueen77:


Really? Aaaww.. That's so kind of u babe

sarrki:
I Disagree your highness

It should be if he did not perform

sarrki:
I Disagree your highness

It should be if he did not perform

TrapQueen77:
Honestly when I saw this on my IG feed for the first time , I was gagging to death
Imagining myself having a retouch in a public washroom(that full of ladies queuing too pee) using this kind of lipstick called LIPDICK ...and then last nyt, it was trending as well on my FB timeline

So, out of curiosity I did my little research.. This sexy lipsticks got a lot of different shades like from pale beige to fire red.. U can choose if u want a matte or shimmery

But u can only get this from Amazon or some online stores or sext0ys shops & it's very affordable..According some beauty bloggers, this is a great presents for bachelorette parties

So, ladies if this is available in the market near u ,will u get urself some?

For men, will u get ur pretty girls this very slicky & sexy lipstick?

onexile:
Even if you collected bribes, we are okay with it sir. Until the criminal in Aso rock accounts for his criminality, every other person remains not guilty.

Gofwane:
Gold digger alert!

dacblogger:
just say you're looking for sugarmummy .

SexyBabe001:
Nigeria's lawmaker, Dino Melaye is a politician you love to hate. The Kogi-born senator celebrated his birthday yesterday in COZA church. He met with the senior pastor, Pastor Biodun Fatoyinbo. According to the pastor...

Senator Dino Melaye's humility is amazing. Yesterday was his birthday he showed up in church today to give thanks to God.It's amazing how someone can be both a lion and a lamb, a lion at the senate, a lamb in God's presence. You're humble, gentle and kind. Happy Birthday, I celebrate you!

Source:
http://www.ajayiwrites.com/2017/01/birthday-boy-dino-melaye-celebrates-at.html

TrapQueen77:
Okies... I'm coming... don't close the door..