Nice one dear!
Raises my voice* clara leave Alex oo! U old.
Miz nelly We need MORE

I love this story...u only know your true friend during the time of trouble..to hell with Louis..Alex thank you for your understanding ...I love guys like Alex

Gbemi the betrayer, Lenora the hater, Clara the sugar mama and Louis the fool. God pass all of una.

Thumbs up MzNelly.

very interesting story by a talented writer..... keep it up.....am loving this

(Alex’s house)
(Kayla barges into Alex’s room)

Kayla: How can you even let those two witches inside this house?
Alex: Well, how was I supposed to know that Clara of a woman knew where I lived.
Kayla: You should’ve kicked them out the very minute they stepped their disgusting feet inside this house!
Alex: Well, I tried…
Kayla: They tried to take my sister away…
Alex: But they didn’t! And they wouldn’t. I’d protect her with my very own life. I love her like she was mine too, you know. (moves to hug her)
Kayla: (moves away) What? You’re sweating.
Alex: Girlie’s Magazine said it was a turn-on.
Kayla: (chuckles) Well, it’s not.
Alex: What is then?
Kayla: (maintains eye contact with him for a minute) When you keep those two witches away from my sis.
Alex: Oh! You just HAD to ruin the moment, didn’t you?
Kayla: (smiles) Go take a shower.
Alex: I was about to do that till you rudely barged in.
Kayla: Oh, what? I’m supposed to knock.
Alex: It wouldn’t hurt to be courteous for a day.
Kayla: So I’m not courteous?
Alex: Duh.
Kayla: Well, you’re a pervert.
Alex: (holds his hand to his chest) Guilty as charged. But for you, I can make an exception.
Kayla: Don’t tease me.
Alex: I don’t tease.
Kayla: Pffft. Who do you think you are-Mr. I’m So Perfect With Every Word I Say?
Alex: (grins) I’ll take that as a compliment.
Kayla: Well, I don’t give compliments. (walks out of his room)

(The studio)
(Lenora is talking with some girls in front of Luke’s office)

Lenora: Remember your story girls? (they all nod) Tricia, remember what you have to say?
Gbemi: I know, I know, just shut up already. We’ve been going back and forth like for hours now. We get it!
Lenora: Okay, I just wanna make sure. You were Kayla’s best friend; your story would be more relevant than the rest of us.
Gbemi: Well, rest assured, I won’t rest till I kick her out of this industry and tarnish her name for as long as she shall breathe.
Lenora: (smiles) That’s the spirit!
(Ms. Clara comes along)

Ms. Clara: What’s going on here? What’s with the meeting? C’mon, break it up and get to your photo shoot.
Lenora: No, Ms. Clara; this is more important. This is Operation Bring Down Kayla.
Ms. Clara: (interested) How?
Lenora: Well, I have some witnesses here that proves she’s just as cheap a ho.e as any other in the streets.
Ms. Clara: Witnesses? (raised eyebrow) What are their story?
Lenora: (smiles, pleased with herself) Witness 1, Sandra step up and tell us your experience as regards Kayla..the sllutt.
Sandra: Well…I overhead Kayla talking with Debra; telling her she was going to make a lot of money out of her new catch-Alex. She’s staying at his house currently and sleeping with him for his money. This isn’t proper behavior for any single, young lady; talk less of a representative of this modeling industry.
Ms. Clara: (smiles) Credible. But I don’t think Kayla is sleeping with Alex for his…
Lenora: (whispers) Did I mention these are FALSE witnesses; except for Tricia of course. All we’re after is bringing that low-life down.
Ms. Clara: Well, in that case; I want my own share of the story too. What do I say?
Lenora: That’s good to know. Well, you could say…
Ms. Clara: Actually, I went to Alex’s place with Kayla’s mom yesterday. I could say, her Mom came to take her home so as to avoid further disgrace but she insisted that the money she uses in wh..oring is ten times better than any she gets at home.
Lenora: (smiles) Brilliant! That’s exactly what we need. Confessions from the big boss herself.
(Kayla, Debra and Michelle comes along)

Debra: How come we’re the only girls available for the photoshoot?
Lenora: We’re busy; Leave. And Michelle, it’s in your best interest to side with us on this one, you know.
Michelle: If it won’t give me a credit alert, why should I care?
Lenora: You want to get kicked out of this establishment, I see.
Michelle: Save your threats for all these ones scared of you. (points to the other girls)
Sandra: (steps out from them) I wanna go to the bathroom.
Lenora: (holds her by the hand) You’re not going anywhere till we’re through.
Michelle: (laughs) She looks like a frightened mouse. Let her through.
Lenora: We have a deal, Sandy. Don’t even think of backing out!
Michelle: (chuckles) Let’s go guys; we’ll eventually find out what they’re up to anyway. (they leave)

more plz

Oh how the mighty will fall. Even Clara too, stooped as low as to join the girls!
OK, diarisgod!

Kayla's God will catch all of you.

Keep it coming MzNelly.

Kudos!

(Bryan’s house)

Bryan: I told you brother, that business wasn’t gonna fail.
Louis: (chuckles) I’m happy for you, brother. Seems you came back ten times richer.
Bryan: (grins) Absolutely! Now, I have to renovate this house. (looks around proudly)
Louis: Well, will you stop trafficking then?
Bryan: (laughs) I’ve only just begun, Louis. Remember what you promised me?
Louis: (shakes head) I changed my mind.
Bryan: (surprised) Huh? Don’t you need the money?
Louis: (sighs) I already have more than enough.
Bryan: What-did you win a lottery?
Louis: I’m marrying Gbemi.
Bryan: (laughs) Gbemi?! That fat pig?!
Louis: Hey, don’t be rude. She’s changed…a lot.
Bryan: (laughs) For the first time in my life, I’d side Kayla over that-
Louis: She’s now skinny; even skinnier than Kayla.
Bryan: (surprised) Come again.
Louis: I don’t know what she did; but whatever it is, it worked perfectly on her.
Bryan: But there’s no way…
Louis: Here’s a picture (hands him his phone)
Bryan: Wow! Brother, she’s HOT! Is that why you swerved?
Louis: Well….the thing is…I found out something about Kayla
Bryan: And what’s that?
Louis: She was wh.oring around with The Don.
Bryan: (shocked) What?!

(Studio; Luke’s office)

Kayla: You called for me, Sir.
Luke: Have a seat, Kayla. (she sits down) Yes, indeed, I called for you; for something of extreme importance.
Kayla: I’m all ears.
Luke: The girls told me…
Kayla: (sighs) I know what they told you
Luke: Well, what do you have to say about it? You do know that if this is brought before the public, this organization could crash.
Kayla: I know that all too well, Sir.
Luke: So what do you have to say for yourself?
Kayla: Nothing.
Luke: Nothing?! Kayla, is the allegation true or not?
Kayla: Just kick me out; isn’t that what you called me here to do?
Luke: Don’t be like that.
Kayla: You called me here to pass your ‘sentence.’ My version of the story is unimportant to you, I know. The only reason I ever came here anyway is because of my little girl, and karma will fvck ALL of you up! All of you who planned my downfall. (stands up)
Luke: Kayla, but I asked you to explain.
Kayla: The cleanliness of your pageant is more important, isn’t it? And to you and those skinny dumbheads out there, I’ll always be worthless and dirty, am I correct? (makes to leave)
Luke: If what I heard is true, then this if for the best. I can compensate you for all your troubles…and your little girl.
Kayla: Just shove your money where the sun don’t shine. (leaves his office)
Luke: Kayla-

(Bryan’s house)

Bryan: What?! Come again
Louis: You heard me. Kayla was a prossstitute.
Bryan: (laughs) Kayla? With all her pride? A prossstitute? (chuckles) Who told you that?
Louis: Well…Gbemi-
Bryan: Ahh, it all makes sense now. Listen, I dislike Kayla and all, okay but I know for a certainty that Kayla would rather DIE or even hawk pure water than let that old, disgusting pot-bellied Don of a guy climb her for a miserable sum of money; and if you didn’t know that, then you’re more of a fool than I thought.
Louis: Now you’re defending her?
Bryan: (sighs) You know, come to think of it; I actually kind of feel pity for her. You wasted her time from like, when she was born up till now and then broke up with her on some baseless claim that she’s a prossstitute? Or is it just Gbemi’s money you’re after?
Louis: Well, you’re a fine one to talk. You’d do anything for money.
Bryan: I wouldn’t toil with a woman’s heart for money.
Louis: (stands up) Don’t judge me! What do you know about love?!
Bryan: (stands up) I know that you’re incapable of it! And you know; maybe I actually hated Kayla because I envied her. I envied the way she strived to make her own money honestly, rather than sit at home doing nothing. She called me lazy and pathetic because all I did was traffic drugs, while she did everything to get her own dough. I hated her because I wanted to be just as hardworking as she was, but couldn’t.
Louis: What’s this? You're sounding like you're in love with her
Bryan: You know, if I had her heart, I wouldn’t throw it away like a shameless coward.
Louis: (grabs him by the collar) Don’t you dare get close to her; I swear I’ll kill you1
Bryan: Your threats do not scare me, Louis. You don’t know what you lost. (Louis leaves his house, fuming)

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etisei

Hmm dat was hawt MzNelly tanx 4 d update nd bryan z so right louis does nt know what he lost i hope dey don't get back 2geda

At least Bryan has way more sense than Louis. Louis is such a wimp. I dislike guys who can't think for themselves or fight for what they believe in.

Kayla though... I like her principles and the fact that she's got attitude but she is kinda rude. Something like a vicious circle. You say people don't like you or understand you but you never even try to make them understand and or like you.

Thanks for the update MzNelly.

lizzyslaw:
At least Bryan has way more sense than Louis. Louis is such a wimp. I dislike guys who can't think for themselves or fight for what they believe in.

Kayla though... I like her principles and the fact that she's got attitude but she is kinda rude. Something like a vicious circle. You say people don't like you or understand you but you never even try to make them understand and or like you.

Thanks for the update MzNelly.

It's called "tragic flaw" in Literature- The protagonist's weakness that will bring about his/her downfall.

Thanks for stopping by.

(Studio)
(Kayla walks out of Luke’s office, visibly shaken and stumbles into Alex)

Alex: Hey, what’s wrong?
Kayla: Nothing.
Alex: But…you look upset. What happened in there?
Kayla: Nothing.
Alex: Hey, common; why do you look like you’re about to cry?
Kayla: Stop asking me all these questions.
Alex: Well then, tell me.
Kayla: I…just don’t know. (Alex hugs her against her will) You gotta stop attacking me with hugs.
Alex: You gotta stop proving tough.
Kayla: And do what-cry on your shoulders?
Alex: That doesn’t sound like a bad idea.
Kayla: (disengages from his hug) I can handle my sh1t. (clears throat) Luke kicked me out.
Alex: The rumours got to him?
Kayla: Yeah.
Alex: But they’re false! You didn’t do anything!
Kayla: Well, he thinks otherwise. And if I tell him what really went down, the news will go viral; and my sis will find out. I don’t want it to scar her the way it did me.
Alex: (sighs) I’ll make sure you don’t get kicked out.
Kayla: It’s not possible; it’s not happening. It’s over, Alex and it’s all thanks to your girlfriend, Ms. Clara.
Alex: What? How’d you know?
Kayla: I know everything. (Lorena comes along)
Lorena: (smiles sweetly) Has he finally kicked you out?
Kayla: I don’t have to answer to you.
Lorena: A prossstitute has no place here.
Kayla: (grabs her by the neck) Call me that once again. Just call me one more time and I’ll show you what a real prossstitute can do to this pretty neck of yours. (lets go of her neck)
Lorena: (coughs and massages her neck) Why- (coughs) Why do you want to kill me? Is it because your sorry a$$ got kicked out? How is that my fault?
Kayla: Face me like a woman and don’t go backstabbing like a b1tchy coward
Alex: (holds on to her) Kayla, please calm down.
Lorena: What a sore loser. Did you really think you would compete in the pageant? That reminds me, Alex; the pageant is now this Saturday. So get all our outfits ready. I have a pageant to win. (leaves)
Kayla: This Saturday? Oh my God. Why did this have to happen now? If I won that money, I wouldn’t care about what those b1tches said about me.
Alex: Well, you’ll win then. I’ll get you back on.
Kayla: (sighs) I know you’re tryna make me feel better but just…stop. There’s nothing that can be done. I just…want to go home.
Alex: Should I drive you?
Kayla: No; I’ll take my bike.
Alex: Fine; go on ahead. I’ll meet up with you later.
Kayla: Okay then.
Alex: I Love you.
Kayla: What?
Alex: Yes; I do-a lot. A lot more than you think. Very much; more than life itself.
Kayla: Why? Nobody does; you know what they’re saying about me.
Alex: Kayla, I love you. I don’t care what anyone else says. They’re not the one marrying you anyway.
Kayla: (chuckles) Who’s marrying who?
Alex: You are going to marry me; whether I have to drag you down the aisle or do it under duress.
Kayla: (laughs) You’re crazy.
Alex: Crazy in love with you.
Kayla: Okay; bye then.
Alex: Kiss me.
Kayla: Yeah; that is never gonna happen. (chuckles and walks away)

* clap clap.

It seems Alex is one cheeky guy....a guy after my own heart. I love the repartie.

Thank MzNelly for the speedy update.

Nice one..,
Tragic flaw or not Kayla deserves a kick on her butt,must she be that insolent?
Anyway I love her 'give it to them hot' style

Chinweblinkz:
Nice one..,
Tragic flaw or not Kayla deserves a kick on her butt,must she be that insolent?
Anyway I love her 'give it to them hot' style

You nko that allowed Sophia to wangolo with David!

MzNelly:


You nko that allowed Sophia to wangolo with David!

lol....
Wangolo kee wangala ni

(Alex's house)
(Ms. Clara walks in furious after Kayla has ushered her in.

Kayla: He isn't home.
Clara: I came to speak to you
Kayla: Well, I'm not interested
Clara: I don't care, you're hearing me out,
Kayla: What is this about? Have you come to gloat about the excellent job you and your cohorts carried out today?
Clara: (chuckles) As much as I'd love to, NO. I'm here because of Alex.
Kayla: And what about him? (She grins) You wanna gist about the crush you have on him.
Clara: Listen,little girl, Alex and I have come a very long way. And I won't let anyone, least of all, a tramp like yourself destroy something we`ve built in years.
Kayla: (sighs) Okay....whatever.
Clara: We decided to keep our relationship on a low key so as not to raise eyebrows...
Kayla: What is your point? What do you want?
Clara: I understand that you are homeless and poor, however seducing a man just because you're a born slutt is really undignifying. Why don't you go out there and work something out for yourself,instead of thriving on another man's hard work and sweat?
Kayla: Are you done?
Clara: Don't just make me repeat this visit, okay?
Kayla: Get out
Carla: This isn't even your house, loser. You don't own one and you probably never will
Kayla: Leave now, or I'll do something we'll both regret
Clara: Okay then, I'm going, I don't overstay my welcome, unlike some other people. (Smiles and walks out)
(Kayla goes to get Chioma)

Kayla: We're leaving-Now
Chioma: What? Why?
Kayla: Pack your stuff Chioma. Let's go.
Chioma: But why? I don't wanna go
Kayla: We're leaving . End of discussion. (Starts packing)
Chioma: Where will we go?
Kayla: Just pack! Right now! (Chioma hurriedly startts packing)

keep it rolling sis......y r people no longer commenting?

Where will she go now? And to think the person responsible for all her problems is her mum and that idiot, 'the Don!'

Keep it coming dear.

Hey, nice story. Keep it up.

(Studio)
(Alex walks up to Debra)

Alex: The sh1t has hit the fan.
Debra: I know, right? I heard Luke kicked her out.
Alex: Yeah, but I don’t wanna let that happen.
Debra: What do you plan on doing?
Alex: Talk to Luke.
Debra: Kayla will flip. You know, her sister…
Alex: Yeah, that’s what worries me.
(Nnenna walks in)

Nnenna: Good morning.
Alex & Debra: Morning.
Debra: Luke kicked her out….because of you.
Nnenna: What happened?
Debra: Somehow that is irrelevant now.
Nnenna: Well, where is his office?
Debra: Don’t even think of complicating matters more than you’ve already done. Just leave!
Alex: Down the hallway, by the left. (Nnenna leaves towards his office)
Debra: What are you doing? Are you crazy?
Alex: I feel like she can sort it all out.

(Luke’s office)
(Nnenna walks in)

Luke: Excuse me? Who are you?
Nnenna: Kayla’s Mom, and I really need to speak with you.l
Luke: I see, what about?
Nnenna: About Kayla. Kayla isn’t who you think she is.
Luke: (sighs) Take a seat.
Nnenna: I’d rather stand. Kayla is a very decent individual. Everything that has happened; Everything…is my fault.
Luke: I don’t understand.
Nnenna: I sold off Kayla; my Chidinma to…prostitution when she was just 12.
Luke: (stands up, shocked) What?!
Nnenna: Yes; and the reason she didn’t tell you was because of her younger sister. She didn’t want it to affect her. Yes, my daughter isn’t as cowardly as I am; and I’m so very proud of her.
Luke: Wow
Nnenna: You have to get her back. She could be, no, She would be the best model there is.
Luke: But, do you know the implication of what you’ve just told me?
Nnenna: Yes; I may have to turn myself in.
Luke: That really wouldn’t be the best for your younger daughter.
Nnenna: I’m afraid I’ve already made up my mind.
Luke: I doubt Kayla would agree to your decision.
Nnenna: It’s the best for her; It really is. Call her and give her back her job. She doesn’t deserve any of this.
Luke: Well…I’ll think it over then.
(Nnenna walks out and goes to meet Alex)

Nnenna: Call Kayla. Tell her she’s gotten her job back.
Alex: What did you tell him?
Nnenna: Just do as I ask. (she leaves)
(Alex picks up his phone and dials Kayla’s number ; it isn’t going through. He goes to meet Debra)
Alex: Kayla’s number isn’t going through. I need to go home and find out what’s up.
Debra: The poor thing; she must be really upset.
Alex: Well then, I’d have to go meet and comfort her. You can handle everything here, yeah?
Debra: Sure, take care.

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Lizzyslaw, my shadow thanks baby
Spacefreak, thanks

(Bryan’s house)

Kayla: I don’t even know why I followed you down here.
Bryan: (chuckles) First, you have no place to stay. Second, my cute puppy dog face impressed you, no?
Kayla: (sourly) Shut up. I guess what those ba$tards say is true. I must be one hell of a h.ole.
Bryan: Shut your mouth. Don’t let your sister or me hear you say that.
Kayla: She’s fast asleep.
Bryan: Humph. Must have had a rough day, huh?
Kayla: Yeah…
Bryan: Still don’t believe Alex’s tramp made you leave.
Kayla: She didn’t; I just didn’t want to be depending on a person-Alex.
Bryan: (grins) And now you’re dependent on me
Kayla: (rolls eyes) So now you count as a person?
Bryan: (chuckles) I miss that bitter sarcasm of yours.
Kayla: Good to know. Now, remember to throw away your sh1tty drugs…cause of my sis.
Bryan: I’ll completely stop doing drugs if you ask me to.
Kayla: What am I-your girlfriend? Nigga, do what you please; knock yourself out. Just don’t influence my sis.
Bryan: Hey, don’t talk to me like that. I could kick you out.
Kayla: (laughs) And I’ll have you reported to the police, huh? How’d you like me now?
Bryan: (chuckles) Are you threatening me?
Kayla: You know me, if I say it, I’ll do it.
Bryan: I’m glad to have you here, I’m glad you accepted my invite.
Kayla: Woah, I’m not used to you being nice to me. I like the meany Bryan.
Bryan: Really?
Kayla: Yeah; you’re the only person I insult who doesn’t take offence.
Bryan: What makes you think I don’t take offence?
Kayla: Well, it’s even better if you do? (grins)
Bryan: The only thing I want to hear from your lips are romantic expressions.
Kayla: Okay then; I LOVE to beef you, I LOVE that you’re the laziest person on the planet and I can point it out to you.
Bryan: You know, if you want I can become hardworking for your sake.
Kayla: Okay, what’s with you today? Stop being so cheesy and sentimental. (stands up) I need to rest.
Bryan: Kayla-
Kayla: What?
Bryan: I think along our fights, hate and craziness, I think I fell for you.
Kayla: (genuinely surprised) What?!

Haha this one is strong. Bryan should take it easy. Na so heart break dey take start.

Lovers are always gonna love and haters....keep hating OYO will be your case.

bryan shld take it easy jawe.#teamkaylaandalex

I like Kayla but why is she moving from one guy's place to another?

orluuchi:
I like Kayla but why is she moving from one guy's place to another?

, I guess she is running away from her mum to protect chioma and girls are just naturally envious/jealous of her curves?

(Alex’s house)
(He is on the phone with Debra)

Alex: She left, Debra. Kayla left. She picked up her stuff and left.
Debra: Oh my God! This is serious. And guess what’s worse-Kayla’s Mom had an accident few minutes after she left the studio. A car ran her over.
Alex: Oh sh1t! This is not happening!
Debra: I think you better go find Kayla; while I tend to the matter of Kayla’s Mom. Oh, and don’t forget to keep on trying her line.
Alex: Of course; thanks. Bye. (hangs up)

(Chineme and Son’s Limited)
(Louis and Gbemi are seen conversing at the reception)

Gbemi: Relax
Louis: I am relaxed.
Gbemi: You’re obviously sweating and fretting. Just chill, she won’t bite.
(The secretary comes out)

Secretary: You may go in.
Gbemi: (to Louis) C’mon, let’s go. (They stand up and enter Susan’s office)
Susan: My dear, you’re welcome.
Louis: Good afternoon, Ma.
Susan: Afternoon; have your seat. (They both sit down)
Gbemi: Well Mom, like you well know, this is Louis; the man I want to marry.
Susan: (forces a smile) Young man, what is it you do for a living?
Louis: Well…I err-I…
Gbemi: Mom, I already told you-I’d support him in any way I can.
Susan: So you have NOTHING doing? And you want to marry my daughter?
Gbemi: Mother? What is this? Did you have a penny to your name when you married Dad?
Susan: The case is different here, and you know it.
Gbemi: I don’t see how.
Susan: Okay, fine, you’ll support him. Now tell me, how long ago did you separate from Kayla?
Gbemi: Mom!
Susan: Let the young man answer my question.
Louis: About two weeks back.
Susan: And how long did you two date?
Louis: Very long. She was my first girlfriend.
Susan: And just how much did you love her?
Gbemi: (hits the table) What is this? I thought you wanted to get to know him.
Susan: (smiles) I am. (leans forward) Forget the last question. Just answer this: Do you still love Kayla? Gospel truth.
Gbemi: Mom, stop; this is ridiculous.
Susan: (to Louis) Kayla, with all her curves, her attitude, her fierceness, her beauty; and other things I’m sure you know better than I do.
Louis: Yes, yes I do. I love Kayla; I still love her very much.
Susan: And do you leave a person you love because of a false rumour?
Gbemi: Mom!
Louis: No! (stands up?) No, you don’t. I love her and I’ll probably always do. I’ll have to fight to win back her heart. (to Gbemi) I’m sorry.
Susan: (smiles) I want an invite to the wedding.
Louis: Yes Ma’am, thanks a lot. (leaves)
Gbemi: (stands up) Gosh, I HATE you! You’ve always chosen that prossstitute over me.
Susan: Kayla is no prossstitute; and you and I know that. I won’t fold my hands and watch you ruin that girl’s life. Plus, you’d be unhappy in that marriage; Louis clearly doesn’t love you. You heard him.
Gbemi: (groans) Damn you! (walks out)


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Fatalveli

I love gbemi's mom buh z it nt 2 late 4 louis. nice one mz nelly

Wow i am so happy now let d begging begin...MzNelly thank u