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F U C K E D Up by Nobody: 12:48am On Feb 20, 2013
*Probably some of the most twisted shyt I've ever written, had to self-censor more than half of it.*
*Everyone should explore their dark sides from time to time - Just don't stay there*

To my Dead Mother,
To my Dead Father,
It's your son here,
Not your good daughter

They say the Evil men do lives on.
What did you do dad?
Why was I born?
Am I really yours mum?
And not the Devil's spawn?


I am fuccked up
A drug abusing reprobate
No Moral compass
The landscape of my mind is desolate

I enjoy getting in fights
I enjoy stealing
I dream of murder
I care not for human feelings

Do as thou wilt
I learned from the best
As above so below
Dad you piqued my interest

I am fuccked up
Because you were
My streams of debauchery
Fed by your headwaters

I need attention
But you're dead
I need compassion
Your corpses stay rotted

So I'll keep being me
Keep being the best bad person I could possibly be
You had your chance to save me,
But ultimately Mum and Dad,
You made Me....Me
Re: F U C K E D Up by Cuddlemii: 3:58am On Feb 20, 2013
I must confess - you make bold statements!

You always leave an impression!

How do you do it?
Re: F U C K E D Up by Nobody: 12:20pm On Feb 20, 2013
Cuddlemii: I must confess - you make bold statements!

You always leave an impression!

How do you do it?


This was actually very uncomfortable to write especially cos I adore my parents who are very alive.

I just try to capture images in words by writing stuff you can see in your head...,

If that makes sense
Re: F U C K E D Up by Cuddlemii: 12:29pm On Feb 20, 2013
jackbauersballs:

This was actually very uncomfortable to write especially cos I adore my parents who are very alive.

I just try to capture images in words by writing stuff you can see in your head...,

If that makes sense

Ok, fair enough.

Disturbia comes to mind, lol!

I have seen 3 or 4 of your poems and I am just curious.

Do you write any other genre(s) apart from poetry?
Re: F U C K E D Up by Nobody: 12:36pm On Feb 20, 2013
Cuddlemii:

Ok, fair enough.

Disturbia comes to mind, lol!

I have seen 3 or 4 of your poems and I am just curious.

Do you write any other genre(s) apart from poetry?

I don't know really....

My 1st ever poem was written hurriedly on my iphone and uploaded here only a few days ago...

I suppose I should try other stuff...
Re: F U C K E D Up by Cuddlemii: 1:07pm On Feb 20, 2013
jackbauersballs:

I don't know really....

My 1st ever poem was written hurriedly on my iphone and uploaded here only a few days ago...

I suppose I should try other stuff...

Yeah, you could!

Stick to the genre that makes you happy(.i.e. passion and fun)

Keep up the good work!

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