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Re: Ask For Feed Here by HYBRIDX(m): 7:33pm On Aug 25, 2008 |
@wordsmith u caught that kid "red handed" man . . . . j-unit my d!ck . . . the kid's a scam . . . .see what am talking 'bout . . .when u having kids below thirteen bleeping around hurr . . . . .hey yo!! shaz . . i think its about time we have a creche for up-toddling netceess like j-unit . . . |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Crude(m): 8:13pm On Aug 25, 2008 |
That was some Kleptomaniac dope. . . . . . . . .getting mocked getting murked. . . . . . . .Ohhhhhhhhhhh!!!! I cant feel my face. . . . . isht. . . . . . .Lol. . . . . . .hahahahahahahahahahahahehehehehehehehehehehehehhohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohahahahahahahahah. . . . . . |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 9:06pm On Aug 25, 2008 |
Thanks, 'Smith. . I must admit I wondered about that verse - I mean the lower bit. I googled the first line then I just let it be. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 3:09pm On Aug 26, 2008 |
lol so wordsmith caught junit biting, just because of lyrical dosioo's tourney, lol, anyways shaz when r u gon analyse the remaining battles . pls check them in the previous page, hybrid and wordsmith , thanks for catching the biter for me. j-unit koo. junk unit nee.\ @shaz we are waiting for the other feeds o. thanks gurl |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Riskie(f): 8:53am On Aug 27, 2008 |
Hey I'm really new to this whole rap thing. LOL! It's kind of silly actually cuz of how I started. I know that I'm not that good but I'm trying. Anyway let me first tell you how it started. I was in the forum games section and I was playing this game where you just have to give two lines that rhyme. So I tried it and as usual there will be people who will make fun. So as I started going back and forth with ppl I found that I got better and it was a lot of fun. Not as good as some of the people here but still LOL. Anyway I'm going to paste some of my lines here and I want to know what you think. Elenu apere! You give so much lip But when it's time to deliver you always trip, slip, Like a banana peel, you're far from the real deal. Like a pig in mud all you ever do is squeal. Sorry that you got not no appeal. The more you push, I keep getting iller, You just get uglier than Michael Jackson in thriller. **then this one girl said something like 'for rizzy my sizzy' and then I said this:** If you think words ending with 'izzy' are still major I bet you're stuck in the 90s, still using a pager If you'D allow me I could upgrade ya Like antivirus software Ima update ya Show me more than two lines if you think that you run this Then I'll show you I got lines deeper than an abyss. I'll turn you into a praying mantis On your knees begging me to to stop this. So as a beginner how do you think I am? |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Wordsmith(m): 4:07pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
You have the potential. Just worker further on rhyme schemes i.e have a clear cut theme for your rhymes. Like the one in your post is a battle verse (the likes of eminem's "8 mile" and Smack DVDs are good examples of battle rap). Oh, and another advice - be versatile. Explore other areas of rap -story telling, conscious rap, politically inclined rap, Gospel rap (if ye are Christian), hell even Science, if Canibus can do it, so can you. just do you, express yeself. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Riskie(f): 4:29pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
Thanks for the feed. I'll work on it |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Caliente(m): 6:15pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
[size=13pt]@ Riskie Your lines are not bad, not weak like limp biscuit Practice like mad and your flows will be hot Riskie[/size] |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by HYBRIDX(m): 6:38pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
@riskie practice makes perfect . . . . . just keep on exploring em words amd listening to good rap tracks as well . . . . and keep on visiting the rap thread . . .u definately gonna learn something . . . . .ma bro wordsmith already said it all ma |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Riskie(f): 6:47pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
@ caliente and hybrid-x Thanks for the feed. I'll make sure to visit this section more often. I know there's a lot to learn. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 8:41pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
@Riskie, Nice one. Just keep on practicing. @edosioo, Been busy - gimme a few more hours. Sorry for the delay. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Wordsmith(m): 9:18pm On Aug 27, 2008 |
@ Riskie, oh, before i forget, listen to legendary mcs. . .i'm talking about the Talib Kwelis, Immortal Tech's, Pharoah Monche, the Roots, the Commons, the NaS', heck Canibus, and a host of others. Analyse their lines, notice the way they construct their verses and spit them, this is one of the best ways. . . |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Riskie(f): 7:54am On Aug 28, 2008 |
@Shaz and Wordsmith, Thanks once again. Now I know where to come when I need help. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by bjpumpin(f): 1:58pm On Aug 28, 2008 |
@riskie those peeps wordsith mentioned are actually the ropot, if u listen to cruk you will be starting on the branches, nice try gurl .we need more females up in here.and u got a great starter rhyme. just do it. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 6:15pm On Aug 28, 2008 |
ok shaz its you am still waiting for |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 7:55am On Aug 30, 2008 |
shazzzzzzzz |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Crude(m): 8:25pm On Aug 31, 2008 |
@Riskie Take these cats advice, it works, u see, i'm talking from experience, when i first got here, i was as wack as u divided 4. . . . . .i got so disappointed in myself that i was finna quittin. . . . . .but erm. . . . .Hybrid asked me to work harder, Wordsmith said "u got the potentials son", Then Mama(Shaz) did it all she fed me with some needed elements in rap, thou i'm still taking tutorials but my lyrical Silo is a bit upgraded now. . . . .i guess i can battle Hybrid, Wordsmith n Shaz at a go. . . . . .(Lol). . . . . .hahahahaha. . . .dont be looking at me like that peeps, i was only joking. . .hahahahahahah. . . . .lol. . . . . .so Riskie. . . . . .I believe u'll be bursting real fire in no time if u put ur mind and effort into it |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by trex007(m): 4:30pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
@edosioo what kinda human are u.wen u started dat thread u said there was going to b a pollin booth,now its shaz data gonna judge.*$&sighs and shakes head |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by trex007(m): 4:32pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
@shaz i guess u know w are waitin 4 u? |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by JUNIT1(m): 5:31pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
she busy on nigerianhiphop.net, mite as well check there |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 9:51pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
Yo. . J unit, some of us have lives outside the net, iite? And yeah, check when i posted last on NHH. @y'all, Yeah, sorry but I've been busy, God knows and I didnt want to do no rush job but i'll just 'NIKE' it. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 10:22pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
CRUDE@T-REX Mic-checkin got this fake Giant shitting in his pants I strike the "G" from this Giant burst the "I" leave him the "Ant" Nice meta+wordplay I know ei' way on the rap labyrinth, like i'm the son of the soil Check it, i'm most expensive to rap-nation, call me Crude oil Errrrrrrrrr . . Flowing gas-o-line, through my rap-line, and spray your ass I've got this match i'ma strike it, n burn u to ash The next line's dope - wordplay Leave u lookin like u got entwined with an ignited Nitro 'Fo u freestyle use your Stylo, lest u post bulk of typos erm . . . your tight flow reveals your're tyro, now i'm lyrically psycho Dont be stupid take heed, go and update your lyrical Silo lyrical silo - dope - first line, unnecessary I did the Math .'. T + Rex = Nil On your ass i'ma spit tipex n wite u out of this tourney First line was shit . . like no meaning . . the next was OK Here is my liter bin, u can drop some of your tightest there You're as good as Nothing, it's like i'm battling an open air 'like i'm battling an open air' - dope You Sound like guitar without strings, i'ma pluck your vocal Chord You get kicked arround all the time, u aint got game u're the ball ok, i guess . . but the closer did not hit hard in my eyes T-REX@CRUDE i'm about to murk this cat/so start countin your loss imagine an apprentice who wants to battle da boss pretty elementary wordplay - infact no wordplay because apprentices challenge their bosses and win in real life so . . battlin me u know is worse than sucide this fool is a plus to my list of my lyrical gynocide [color]Irrelevant[/color] u aint gat game/ like an empty zoo i'm too tight mayne/u can't step in my shoe If flippin is not allowed in the tourney, then this bar earns you a straight DQ. But if it is, why - that was a SICK line - i mean the 'u aint gat game/ like an empty zoo' - dope. the second dampened the bar. u sure need a transformer to step up your weak lines u aint on top but u still gon decline First one was okay - the next was wack when i mic check/then its sure your games over because u against me is like a beetle to a rover erm. . . plus your delivery is poorer than nipost in rap u can't move foward like light poles 'delivery is poorer than nipost' - sick. . the next line was sh*t i've gat bars to lock hiphop violators lyke u and i'm a lyrical bot u don't want to screw hjsdgjgsdklgjsdlkgjgjsdojbvsdobjsdosgfsd . . sorry, that's what happens when i'm bored i brought a big trash can were u can spit your garbage next time u flee/because like earthquakes i wreck damage hmmn. . not cool VERDICT Metaphors - Crude Wordplays - Crude Rhymes - Both Structure - None Vocabs - None Punchlines - Crude Personals - None Flow - None Creativity - Both [center]My VOTE - Crude[/center] |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 11:30pm On Sep 01, 2008 |
OLDSYNC VS MAKAVELE Bleep, Bleep, am back with my axe, ready to mark this veil, Am stuck into this a*se, rock steady to make tha fool wail, You just dissed ya self Y'all know I've got my respect, that's still a reason y'all hail, I kick shit easily, I don't mind if it stinks to dig out a dead one, gfhjhggvjhiuhfxpgsp. . sorry I need to kill easily that is why am paired with this misfed con, Makavele aint a nu looser to me, he only won the battle against his bi*ches, Where's the rhyme and the flow? And no disses or elements employed. I'm not too happy that am only adding your win to my riches, Edosio called men out for a show, a ni99a without attitude is coughing enh?? Am still vexed, that I lost the chance to use Tai Chi(tIANSHIE) as a stepping stone, Now the damage on your face will be like that on Katrina zone, omG . . sync, what's wrong witcha? Sure man, I aint got no clone, I kill all creatures, even those with bones, Never got much time to use on this chicken, I need a battle with beef *somebody wake me up* I'm from the west, i diss you like we dissed deaf with leaf, Fore i take my leave, i need to make an arrangement for u a bus with a flag of leaf Rhyme with the same word?? Thief can excape my wrath better don't Bleep witha king that disgraces thiefs in public Incomplete closer . .No SIR! MAKAVELE @oldsync i'll diss you in no good manner, because the fakesync, you's the epitome of BABARISM u need to step your this-illusioned game, that's why you're nicknamed PHANTISM nothing on me early in the /MORNING/ when u'll still be /SLEEPING/ me be doing ma' /DISSING/ i do it without /CEASING/ to u it ain't /PLEASIN/ you's a faker dropping lines without /REASON/ erm. . slashes? they didnt count . . and these are empty lines. am da greatest lyrical boxer, even mike tyson can't stand 1 punchLINE oldsync is fake, he got spanked and pouts his lips saying: punch MINE Erm . . i've got 99999 lives, been shot at by bleeping wackstas, yet i LIVETH erase u from history, spit on your grave n' inscribe: Fakesync whom da Maka KILLETH irrelevant am so full of flows, am capable of causing a dynamic ECLIPSE send out disses like laser beams, u'll get peforated like a patient wit ulcer PEPSIS okay - one metaphor i'll glue your neck to the basement, and let go off the guillotine, get ready for EXECUTION kick ya butt straight to hell, no hope for next life, even Jesus won't grant a RESURRECTION no! i deal da real /PUNCHES/, no time for lame /BUNCHES/, ma' lines are superior like HI-FI even 3.5g of dope won't make you syncronize, my game's got connectivity like WI-FI lame am the ruthless executioner, while your'e on my list of fakers bout to get KILLED your claiming valor, but have only got paper-tiger, u don't stand a chance even after doping DEAL sgdfgcfv8tut7354t3x6r65675 v567v5 7t6t576 vt76c 576 t7 am dusting your ass pretty fast, u gon' be selling ex-punchlines on da HILLS you's a fake actor, aint getting a part in this thriller, so how u gon' pay your BILLS? *yawn* am bloodthirsty like a vampire waiting to render your SPLEENLESS da oldsync reps /FAKENESS/ this /NAMELESS/ cat's brain is full of typical /WACKNESS/ i'm really bored, serious d fakesync's like engine with only 3 revs: slow, slower n' SLOWEST come wit a batallion of soldiers, u still wont defeat me, i remain invincible because am da BRAVEST *skip* i;ve got a prison with punchlines bout' to get RELEASED your sure to get hit n' come up wit da /DISEASE/ that will leave u /DECEASED/ . i'll leave u battling for the death row, u cunt-SEEKER/ d*ck GIVER/ bring doom like evil /NEMESIS/, u just read the /GENESIS/ of MAKAVELE the death-DEALER Do you think using swear words means you've arrived or what? And to be honest, this verse is way below par. Less than expected. MY PERSONAL VOTE= None. For posterity reasons: Metaphor - None Wordplays - None Flows - None Structure - None Punchlines - None Rhymes - Makavele Vocabs - None Creativity - None Multis - None winner -Makavele |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 6:08am On Sep 02, 2008 |
lol @shaz feed on makavele oldsyn battle, your comments really got me going gaga.always fun to read shaz feeds. @shaz thanks for honoring that ma, and 4get about j-unit talking trash , he a dumb ass. like chiogo called him. , and j-unit shaz has a right to go anywhere and to anysite its none of ya biz boy. yall always hate a star, thats why u getting jealous cos she gets to be called by all the sites . j-u not!!! maybe i can come back with the semi fnals battles for fair judgements and equality because there is a lot of prises to be won in edosioo torunament. thanks gurl |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by JUNIT1(m): 5:08pm On Sep 04, 2008 |
shaz just kidding, u a great moderator. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 5:49pm On Sep 05, 2008 |
ok shaz good work done . we need u to judge the semi finals ,, the 1st semi final is pastd below. pls feed and judge who the winner is CRUDE@FLOWSHOW Ok. . . .It's somthn like huh huh. . . . . Who the fukc is this Burger(bugger) let me quickly eat him up You're cold? I'm cool with it, husslers don't eat when it's hot If this n!gga rap with his asscrack, he still wont spit shit Punch? Yeah! You got it whenever u snatch one from Judy This jack's son munchin popcorn, watchin me like i'm the thriller Bulldozin your rap mansion n u fall helplessly like u aint got pillar Son, your Flows don't Show with u postin epistles that don't even commensurate with a verse in my rap bible You to me is like a little-brittle-weevil to an eagle Play millions of violin yet u came 1st playing the 2nd fiddle With all that thimble my flow still pickle like a needle It's as piercing as lights and as sharp as thistle My fist n his cheeks got nuptials, they kissed n leave him with gingivitis Lost 3 teeth, he lisps, now he don't talk much, he's got tonsillitis If he talks, he'll be gasping like "Crude's sitting in my voice box" Toss this salmon in my grill, he came out a fine lookin lox I'm filled with the Game to the gills, Kini big deal? If i win 50-nil Deal pills still i'm so ill that Bill Gate can't pay my Doc's bill Standin upright like a column, I turn this cat to my plinth Look up to me like the cloud, i just casted on your rap dream FLOWSHOW @CRUDE FLOWSHOW @CRUDE i don't do drugs ~but i will abuse this child like i am fuckin cocaine flowshow da showstopper~u gotta respect me cuzz my verse is sweeter than sugarcane save us d crude oil story~your chit-chat sounds like d ghanian group tic-tac flip flap~my multis smacks ass~ flows' bouta rip crude's pussi like a cheap snack like your mom's vagina posing butt naked~flowshow's got her stinkin pussi clapped my uzi claps like automatic glocks~flow multis leaves this crude face slapped can't tell why this 'petroleum jelly' is acting d fool wit his slippery rhymes similes & metaphors ~who else but 'crude' got lines as 'slippery' as 'crude oil' i got his birthday present ~ama 'wrap' him up like an aluminium foil don't u get the drill~flowshow rhymes are sicker than d terminally ill i punch lines that pierce 'crude' harder than d niger delta 'oil' drill crude 'oryell' even if u sucked shaz feeding bottle you still wouldnt 'feed' lines say RIP to big poppa nairalanders sit back as i send crude to his grandfathers graveyards heard u wallow in abject poverty~your entire verse is nothing but vanity upon vanity ask chiogo flowshow drives cars wit rims that can feed your entire family u think your heavy?~watch how shaz punctures your weight like a rapper on slim fast like a referee who missed his match,crude oil is nothing but a fucken mismatch like eddy& eedris abdulkareem~ i got the remedies to solve your entire family problems d stakes are high~d semifinal needs more than rhyming,dissin,yabbis& punchlines like d shameless pussi you are~cover your face in self pity like a newly disvirgined cunt am sicker than your mothers pregnancy gettin aborted on d last day of d 9th month like easyE & little wayne~flowshow's a rapper rappin easy like little weezy call me murda mook~cuzz i just murdered this nigga in a way thats eeeeassssyyyyy! |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by Shaz(f): 9:14am On Sep 06, 2008 |
Oi, this is the last one i'm doin for ya tourney, I'm far too busy. CRUDE@FLOWSHOW Who the fukc is this Burger(bugger) let me quickly eat him up You're cold? I'm cool with it, husslers don't eat when it's hot Nice opener If this n!gga rap with his asscrack, he still wont spit shit Punch? Yeah! You got it whenever u snatch one from Judy Nice bar This jack's son munchin popcorn, watchin me like i'm the thriller Bulldozin your rap mansion n u fall helplessly like u aint got pillar Cultural inference - the next line didnt hit in mine eyes Son, your Flows don't Show with u postin epistles that don't even commensurate with a verse in my rap bible . You to me is like a little-brittle-weevil to an eagle Play millions of violin yet u came 1st playing the 2nd fiddle multis are poppin in . . and a metapunch With all that thimble my flow still pickle like a needle It's as piercing as lights and as sharp as thistle damn! My fist n his cheeks got nuptials, they kissed n leave him with gingivitis Lost 3 teeth, he lisps, now he don't talk much, he's got tonsillitis The first line was dope, the next was erm . . ok If he talks, he'll be gasping like "Crude's sitting in my voice box" Toss this salmon in my grill, he came out a fine lookin lox Erm . . I'm filled with the Game to the gills, Kini big deal? If i win 50-nil Deal pills still i'm so ill that Bill Gate can't pay my Doc's bill Dint feel em Standin upright like a column, I turn this cat to my plinth Look up to me like the cloud, i just casted on your rap dream Lol FLOWSHOW @CRUDE i don't do drugs ~but i will abuse this child like i am fuckin cocaine flowshow da showstopper~u gotta respect me cuzz my verse is sweeter than sugarcane The first line is played - cant rmbr where from . . the next was dry save us d crude oil story~your chit-chat sounds like d ghanian group tic-tac flip flap~my multis smacks ass~ flows' bouta rip crude's pussi like a cheap snack WTF? chit-chat sounds like ghanian group tic-tac? you coulda made a comparison with the racket a box of tic tac makes but not what you got up there cuz it dont make sense. . rip crudes pussi like a cheap snack? There is nothing like A SNACK. like your mom's vagina posing butt naked~flowshow's got her stinkin pussi clapped my uzi claps like automatic glocks~flow multis leaves this crude face slapped Aint u fed up with the Uzi - pussi thing - u overplayed it. and yeah, the bar was uninteresting can't tell why this 'petroleum jelly' is acting d fool wit his slippery rhymes similes & metaphors ~who else but 'crude' got lines as 'slippery' as 'crude oil' that didnt rhyme - and it was about to make sense in the first line before you lost it i got his birthday present ~ama 'wrap' him up like an aluminium foil don't u get the drill~flowshow rhymes are sicker than d terminally ill filler bar i punch lines that pierce 'crude' harder than d niger delta 'oil' drill crude 'oryell' even if u sucked shaz feeding bottle you still wouldnt 'feed' lines Erm . . what was ^^? I mean the bar - it dont make sense to me, honest . . i was gon get it but when it came to 'wouldnt feed lines' that was off-track say RIP to big poppa nairalanders sit back as i send crude to his grandfathers graveyards heard u wallow in abject poverty~your entire verse is nothing but vanity upon vanity ask chiogo flowshow drives cars wit rims that can feed your entire family hmmn . . nada u think your heavy?~watch how shaz punctures your weight like a rapper on slim fast like a referee who missed his match,crude oil is nothing but a fucken mismatch Okay, Shaz was not battling - how come she gon puncture his weight - that should be your name there, punk! and the next wordplay was absent like eddy& eedris abdulkareem~ i got the remedies to solve your entire family problems d stakes are high~d semifinal needs more than rhyming,dissin,yabbis& punchlines Grow the Bleep up! like d shameless pussi you are~cover your face in self pity like a newly disvirgined cunt am sicker than your mothers pregnancy gettin aborted on d last day of d 9th month Aborted pregnancy sick? that's not the right relation and the bar was s-h-i-* like easyE & little wayne~flowshow's a rapper rappin easy like little weezy call me murda mook~cuzz i just murdered this nigga in a way thats eeeeassssyyyyy! Opposite day, I guess . . that closer was not good enuff Punchlines - Crude Personals - Flowshow Metaphors - Both Wordplays - Crude Structure - Crude Rhymes - Crude Multis - Crude Vocabs - None Creativity - Crude My Vote - Crude |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 5:08pm On Sep 06, 2008 |
flowshows gets a lot of criticism from shaz, so flowshow loses and crude advances to the final . thanks shaz |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by JUNIT1(m): 6:53am On Sep 08, 2008 |
that wrap up like foil is my line flowshow, and also the crude oil story, that was my rap against crude in hyrbrids tourney, copycat flowhoe. |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by edosioo(f): 10:27am On Sep 08, 2008 |
shaz here is the 2nd semi final , pls feed and choose a winner so that u guys can start ur tourney .thanks ma EDOSIOO@MAKAVELE @makapussi , like lupe ~am a ''superstar''~ yall are welcome to my fiasco! call him corn flakes ~the way am eating this nigga like nasco! when i rap i drop hiroshima bombs like saddam ! u battlin me is a mistake like the US in vietnam ! this rap shit aint nothing to me ,cuzz if we were twins u wouldnt look like me ! my punchlines makes makavele see more 'red' than the 'devils' in manchester! fake 2pac wannabe, battle lyrical dosioo and get clapped the Bleep up when u face me never talk smack/ else like dvds u would get smacked the hell up i aint a republican ,call me MCcain the way am 'caning' this pussi ! stepping up to me will leave your career cut short like electric circuits i will leave this 'clown' humilated like he was performing in his ''1st circus'' your style is incomplete,like jigsaw puzzles makapussi bitch your just a missing piece lyrical dosioo da illest ,makavele is a 2pac wannabe,nigga you gotta rest in peace call me mama no regret/ cuzz i ''whoop'' more asses than whoopi''goldberg'' ! i aint a gunner,but my metaphors shoot more shots than freddie lungberg ! rhyme on high ratios like microsoft visio, makapussi bitch u can't see the visuals paper pistles like that used in toilet tissues/watch me pistol this into his blood tissues i aint biggie, but makavelli(2pac) is the best MC in the dead rappers hall of fame respect me makapussi cuzz your about to be lyrically inducted into the hall of shame time to face your death,u got shot 5 times? now take 55 more shots from edosioo's bazooka aint u a disgrace to all the nairaland boys? gettin your ass whooped by a female onlooker scared of defeat/so this bitch hires clutches so he could stand on his feet wordplay supernatural/ am so high, u couldnt reach me even if your name was ''MI'' ! lyrical dosioo vs makaveli is like the dead battling the living~no contest! u against me is light against darkness,nigga u can't pass the litmus test ! dosioo's flow is insane ~my rhymes are like drug doses~thats why am called da ''lyrical dose yo'' ! confuse me with noboody/cuzz u couldnt change colours even if u were a chameloen @SHAZ -AMAMA GET THIS MALE VIRGIN OUTTA MY FACE ! AM FAR ABOVE HIS CLASS AND MAKAVELE'S VERSE @EDOSIOO Father, i've got a confession to make." "what have u done this time, makavele"? "I told this bitch called edosioo that i don't need a whole . . . . . i don't need a whole encyclopaedia of lines to rap cool with hi-definition punches and metas, makavele leads the new school beware! no fuxxin punchline fashioned against me shall prosper i got flows capable of causing an earthquake immeasurable by the best Reichter Tell u da truth, edosioo, readin your wacks verse gives me a fcukin-little-giggle Niggie wants to read ma lines, he uses a freakin-brittle-goggle am way too dangerous for you than a house full of flying daggers like a starved gunman, facin me makes me more hungry for the trigger I'll leave ya on slippery grounds, like a skater caught on thin ice rain punches on your fuxxing face, call me mr. ruthless, i ain't 9ice i'll leave u helpless like an infant left to play on a busy macadam now u've got fear running down your spine, i to't u was braver than Sadam, madam? i've got more shots at the title, like Spongebob i'll leave u battling for bikini bottom t'is a star war, am da menace u scared to face because u think am your dad's phantom like Obama, i'ma vanquish this republican even if u teamed up with George Bush youz on the edge of a cliff, i've got da words u don't want to hear: "Push" your I.Q. aint developed, i guess your momma never fed u wit Peak 1-2-3 makavele won't trade punchlines for your fuxxin infected p*ssy, can't - you- see? swimming in bill gates' pool didn't fetch u a bucket - full - of - dollars shaz's bre*st milk won't feed your lines bitten from a pocket-book - of - blunders i'm going to stampede on u because your destined to lose like Johnny Tucker u going to wish i was pretendin, when u get hit by my Big Mutha Truckers your verse portrays mumbo-jumbo, u aint cordinated like a patient thats got apraxia u fear to face me, kid, stand up to the sight of something worse than Medussa's Am known for being ruthless, i aint got mercy for p*ssies like Eric Bischoff You'll only end up derained and glued to a bible seeking salvation like a bishop Lo! I got more shots at wearing the crown than liverpool's Fernando Torres am afraid your lines aint shit, it sounds like another piece of martin lawrence "Makavele, that's murder on 8-counts charges. I'm afraid i'll have to turn u in to the cops." "But he isn't dead is he, i only gave him a ill-dose-yo!" "Silly boy, after spittin on him like that; he'll be long gone, MURDER." |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by ganjamind(m): 3:34pm On Sep 08, 2008 |
@edosio i guess u been watching too much yo mamma on mtv n u wanna clown dat on errbody, even if broke-bolaji is ur boo it still dont make him gud he is wack n word for u i rap(wrap) netcees |
Re: Ask For Feed Here by JUNIT1(m): 5:33pm On Sep 08, 2008 |
didnt u see that shaz said she not feedinh any rap again. |
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