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Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 5:52pm On Aug 24, 2005
Here you're to compose a poem for your lover.

Should not be too voluminous.

Here's mine:

I am glad to have met you and fallen in love with you.
I am glad we agreed love terms together.

Since I met you live has been so sweet.
You're a jewel, I love you.
A kiss from you sends me to paradise of love.

No one else like you.
You are Indispensable in my life.
I will continue to love you. kiss

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Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 6:01pm On Aug 24, 2005
Drifting

I feel like I'm wandering,
drifting at sea
looking for something
oh, what can it be?
With the sun in the sky,
and the moon awaitig it's turn
my life floats on by
aching, what is this something I yearn?
Have I found it, is it you
who can save me from drifting
or must I say adieu
and keep wandering and wishing...

V

grin

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Re: Original Love Poems by terry(m): 8:17pm On Aug 24, 2005
nice poems
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 8:54am On Aug 25, 2005
Never Felt

I don't even know what you do to me
But it feels so good
You take over my body
Like no one ever could
I've never felt this way before
I never want it to end
If feels so good the way it takes
Over and over again
You don't even have to touch me
Just say a single word
It lifts up my day
As if I am a bird
One day you'll get that feeling
Of both pain and joy
And when you do you'll tell me
Cause you'll always be my boy !

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Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 5:37pm On Aug 25, 2005
Do they have to be OUR own poems?
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 5:43pm On Aug 25, 2005
Write a love poems you know.

Try and compose one and let's feel you and your world of creativity.

I can recommend you from here.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 5:44pm On Aug 25, 2005
Stop the grammar. Just say yes or no. Does it have to be MY poem?
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:10pm On Aug 25, 2005
HA why yabbing your friend now?

Ok Yes.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:13pm On Aug 25, 2005
I wasn't yabbing. cheesy

Okay i'll form a poem later.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:18pm On Aug 25, 2005
Good you Hotangel.

Please make it as your name implies, "Hot"

Make me trip!
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:22pm On Aug 25, 2005
rolleyes rolleyes i'm not good at poems. i simply suck.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:25pm On Aug 25, 2005
Ok let's feel you.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:26pm On Aug 25, 2005
feel my suckiness.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:29pm On Aug 25, 2005
Whatever let's have a feeling of your anything!
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:31pm On Aug 25, 2005
Okay

The love i have for you
is true love
the love, i have for you
Is real love.
I love you With all my ass
And i wish you knew, that
The love i have for you
Doesn't mean, i cant dump you anytime.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:33pm On Aug 25, 2005
Ha! HA the last sentence is truly sucky. Why that?

You've sounding so real and romantic until you dagger it with the last sentence.
Pls don't dump him.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:34pm On Aug 25, 2005
You wanna know why that? Because that's me.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:39pm On Aug 25, 2005
Ha! Ok read this.



True love never fails neither does it fade.

My love for you is total and complete.

Till death do us part I will love you.

I will cater for you and defend you agaist the world of jealousy and hostilities.

I just love you because I love you.

The reason why I love you is because of love I have for you.

You're a Jewel of inestimable values.

If the world does not value you I do.

This is the token of my love receive with all pleasure.

I am eternally yours.

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Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:43pm On Aug 25, 2005
Good Job GP.

My love for the you is like the stars in the sky
Uncountable is my love for thee.
The waters in the ocean never dries out
So will my love never dry.
If i could count the Sands on earth
The amount would be the amount of the love i have for you
I wish words could tell u the way i feel about you
My love, my life, My special gift from heaven.

I suck at this.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:50pm On Aug 25, 2005
A round of applause for Hotangel.
Good one babe please more.


Some people say love is a temptation.
But this one we are is a world full of excitement.
World without end we shall be.
I will be your angel even though in heaven.
The death you will die just let me.
the sickness you will bear let me.
i can do anything for you to keep you forever.
You're more than millions.
No one else like you.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:54pm On Aug 25, 2005
Angry woman in Love.

i sit everyday and ask myself, WTF is LOve
I came to realise Love is what i have developed towards you within the past few years
Love is when i feel like being close to you
Love is when i think of you and you r not there and i wish i could kill you for not being there
Love is when i think of something and divert my thoughts towards you
Love is you and I
Love is complete when you are in it.

I wish i would be with you every second of the day
It pains me when We are apart
It pains me when i cry and you are not there to comfort me
I am an angry woman and i Love you with all my ass.


haha.... cheesy cheesy

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Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 7:06pm On Aug 25, 2005
Let's hear the poem of an angry man too.


When I found you I thought I found gold.
When i whispered to your ear that very cool and romantic night I thought i found a jewel.
Now I know that hydra lives in you.
I was happy the night we had our first kiss and our first outing.
Now I know that women could be green snake under green grass.

Now I ain't need you in my life.
You make me sad,sick and feel lonely even amidst of lovely people.
God deliever me for i found trouble instead of love.
i waited enough to have a happy relationship but ended up
in picking this devil incarnate.

You will go i am tired or I die!
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 7:14pm On Aug 25, 2005
shocked shocked shocked

U don't like her at all.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 7:21pm On Aug 25, 2005
Poem of a hurt, confused woman:

What Now?

Heart crying, feelings dieing
Soul sighing wondering why,
All is lost, what's the cost
To make your feelings defrost?
Can't let go, needing my passion to flow
Thinking my life and love is just a show.
Nothing I like or want to see again
Loosing my man, my lover, my friend.
Mind tearing, mouth swearing
Numbness surrounding, not caring.
What now?

V

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Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 7:24pm On Aug 25, 2005
God, You are good. smiley
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 7:28pm On Aug 25, 2005
Me? Thanks!
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 7:30pm On Aug 25, 2005
Yes you. You are welcome.

I suck at poems.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 7:37pm On Aug 25, 2005
No, you don't. Poetry is only a way to express youself. However it comes out of you is how it's meant to be.

You are honest and so is your writting. Therefore it's really good wink
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 12:08am On Aug 26, 2005
Now don't just walk away
Pretending everythings okay
And you don't care about me
And I know it's just no use.
When all your lies become your truths
And I don't care
Could you look me in the eyes
And tell me that your happy now
Would you tell it to my face
Or I have been erased
Are you happy now ?
Do you really have everything you want ?
You could never give something you ain't got
You can't run away from yourself.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 12:11am On Aug 26, 2005
You write very well littlebaby!
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 12:29am On Aug 26, 2005
hihihi cheesy Thank you ! mwahh! kiss
Re: Original Love Poems by Ra(f): 12:47am On Aug 26, 2005
Shattered, broken, splintered, fractured
The trinkets all fell from my Xmas tree
Did I see it happen or was it merely mentioned
I’m a bit confused, I feel lost at sea

On a cold winter night
With kids about in their colourful scarves
Shrieking with joy, moulding snow for a fight
On the night that hope was carved, the night a dream was stabbed

I saw my love, the one to whom I was promised
Did I see it happen or was it merely imagined
She stepped off the train elegant in all her splendour
He had a jacket waiting to complete the glamour
I stood as if transfixed, perhaps I really was

Not a casual greeting, No, not a friendly kiss
This is blatant passion, this is smouldering heat
Stepping back behind the closing door, as the train made to pull
I watched them fade away, I saw them hand in hand
What were they all doing, staring at my feet
Oh, it's only my heart, I said, as I bent to pick the pieces.

Staring at my wall for comfort
I could not help but think
He had said it was over, he had said she was gone
He knew I would be there, yet he bade her come
Still clutching the pieces, I resolved to myself
Never again, No, Never again!

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