A respective bow to all creative writers(veterans and amateurs) in d room. After learning fron gifted writers,i feel obliged to start my own write-up too.
I want to startup wit a collection of poems before i go into the real deal(prose work). Your comments,observation and constructive criticism will b appreciated as it will help me become a better writer.
My first poem 'I MISS YOUR VOICE' is written to honour my late mum and to express how much i miss her. This work is dedicated to everyone around the world who share the same predicament. Stay tuned!!!

M sori 4 d late in updating d poem....m fone iz jhez kinda disappointing......plz exercise patience as i try tew fix d problem

Beside your groundly little house I lie, Recalling your last truthful lie,The voice that deceived me to go outside, that I might not watch you die, That tender voice is what I miss. That voice that scolded me when I did wrong, That voice that praised me when I did good, That voice that advised me when needed, That voice that thanked me when needed, That honest voice is what i miss. Yea, a deadly disease stole you away, No, Ignorance was the murderer, That voice that would urge me to fight them both, That courageous voice is what I miss. Diamond are your words in my heart, Gold are your advice in my mind, Silver are your praises in my head, Invaluable are your voices in my ear, All of them, I miss them all. Life exist after death, it's doubtedly sure, How small or big that world is, I surely doubt, Either way, I'll look for you and hear your voice again, Until then, I really miss you, Mum.

Ur constructive criticism on d above poem wil be welcome

Great job bro!! Bravo.

Nice poem.....bt can u try paragraphing so as to make d stanzas distinct

D paragraphing tin iz d prob, i cudn't fix it@ghyft....any1 wu cn help?

Mehlena: Great job bro!! Bravo.

gracias bonita sinorita.....expecting ur update...#teamonelastminute#

Nice one. . .so sad.

Miscellaneous: Nice one. . .so sad.

thankz boss