Nadia_SA1: Can yall please rate mine..

My name is nadia
I come from canada

I love cats
On the mat

Rap maestro: Rap Maestro watches y'all..
@G.O.M- it has a bit of off & on rhymes with little flows.. Can't connect tho lines. Try harder

johnwizey: 1/10

Nadia_SA1: Can yall please rate mine..

My name is nadia
I come from canada

I love cats
On the mat

Marthosky: nice..... me likey..... i hate raps with rhymes tho.... itz for kidz..... oya lemme consult d rap god for ideas.... brb

rap with rhymes is for kids?

Girl, its no longer a RAP if it ain't got rhymes.


@quote 6/10 for commercial.. I see no beef in there,since 'you you you' weren't directed to anybody specific
But erm those line enh?! Make i sha no talk

yousee:

Why did you continue with three words? The four words were cool

"My name is nadia
I come from zambia

I live in pretoria
And sometimes in barcelona"


Word!

Nadia_SA1: cool me likey
I was running outta words

girl i loved your vn..

deejay_harry1:

girl i loved your vn..

Nadia_SA1: not fair joor!!

Make I drop a voicenote ..I swear it will b better

god_of_music: Please, y'all should just read and rate these lyrics. I know some or maybe all of you are Rap heads and you can give it the best mark,
Criticize it like you want, and then correct some of the lines. . . Help me plant some d0pe lines and metaphors in it.
About to record the song 'BANGING HARD'
I'm just a commercial rapper, not all HARD like y'all. . . . Please don't ignore

Thanks. . .


BANGING HARD

Cat in the bag. gotta take it out
na me tight pass. yeah i say it out
haters bring their teeth out like they wanna bite
i know you bitchy,buh cool down no be fight
drumrolls,cock crows,the boy flows
seconds before you gotta blink. . .the boy blows
i'm comin' up with a plus no minus
yeah niggaz we the majors we ain't minors
Chei! This boy napiazikwanu dope bars
takin the whole damn town with just one verse
yhu hating coz i got the street popularity
now yhu wanna talk your own beez untop poverty?
Sit down Nigga,sit down!
When real niggaz up y'all haters shutdown
Talk about down i'm taking this city down
if yhu 'on like me, nigga yhu go down. .Sugar
Jedi jedi for my rhyme o
Look down on me get the vertigo
My rhymes hit your ship bang like it's torpedo
inshort i'm gonna make your walls flat like it's Jericho

2nd verse coming. . .


#TeamGOM

Psychedelia:

It's alright. You try no be small.
The rhymes are cool. Wordplay is alright. However, I feel the message is just all about bragging, bragging, braaaaaagging

All in all sha, 7/10

Psychedelia: Oh, by the way, I think you should upload just a short sample of the instrumentals so I can get a clue on how your lines should flow.

god_of_music: Yeah thanks for the comments and ratings! I can't quote y'all but HEY! I see you

the rhymes ain't a beef, just a street defence. . . I.e i'm a street rapper so i'm defending my street O town. . .

Check out the 2nd verse, i an't done with it tho. . . Still working on it.



Now this year i got haters all over my grill
tryna pull me down still, but i get em' deals
be on the street top chart with my fellas
yeah atleast a real nigga can brag for some nairas
i had a vision. . .
Me was in a mighty mansion
with a girl in my arms looking like Kim Kardashian
Damn!
They say me kinda bragadocious
cos i got the whole chest out in my pictures


That's where i stopped tho. . . I'm still writing, y'all can help me fill in some lines sha
and correct me too. . . . .



#TeamGOM

quivah:

god_of_music: Yeah thanks for the comments and ratings! I can't quote y'all but HEY! I see you

the rhymes ain't a beef, just a street defence. . . I.e i'm a street rapper so i'm defending my street O town. . .

Check out the 2nd verse, i an't done with it tho. . . Still working on it.



[b]Now this year i got haters all over my grill
tryna pull me down still, but i get em' deals
be on the street top chart with my fellas
yeah atleast a real nigga can brag for some nairas
i had a vision. . .
Me was in a mighty mansion
with a girl in my arms looking like Kim Kardashian
Damn!
They say me kinda bragadocious
cos i got the whole chest out in my pictures

Sexy Fox: Check out my lyris( I sing only)


I'm not rapper
cause I'm just a singer
my voice is just like Alicia
but my voice is much unique
cause I own my own Technique
don't underrate me
my voice so cool so embrace me
they tryna sing like me to be like me
I'm so cool like that
so my fans all outside
so that they can see me



Sexy f

quivah:
.....
All my money in the bank,all 9
figures
And the ladies in the back with nice figures
10 to my right,10 to my left..who says I can't have them all?
I have a crooked smile, you can see it from miles away
So hell with the hates, the street love ain't gone fade away
I'm gonna resist this shi.t and will never scream mayday
Before seeing all these boys creeping by my feet and have nothing to say
But here is a word for you
Imma build my web,go build your own dude
Ya street king,i'll just stab him in his jugglar for calling me a clown
And then proclaim myself the king after he abdicates his crown.."

Sexy Fox: Check out my lyris( I sing only)


I'm not rapper
cause I'm just a singer
my voice is just like Alicia
but my voice is much unique
cause I own my own Technique
don't underrate me
my voice so cool so embrace me
they tryna sing like me to be like me
I'm so cool like that
so my fans all outside
so that they can see me



Sexy f

god_of_music: LOL, you try


#TeamGOM

Sexy Fox:
Atleast I attempted.
Your lyris aint bad either.