I will be right here waiting for ur nxt update ma'ma

Queenxstar: I'll try updating by morrow.

. May we witness more morrows #byHisgrace

@queenxstar, babe u so good. i started reading GTG yesterday and didnt drop the phone till i got to pg 14, u got me glued to my phone, i cut cap 4 u.
i hope u wont mind if i point out some error spots to u. i read the story and write them out on ur request. nice meeting u on NLand. congrats on ur success. we'll pop red wine for u later or which one u want?

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Azubuike Ezeugo filled the tumbler with McDowell brandy and went ahead to seat on a stool at the bar wing of his expensively furnished sitting room.

The lights were off except that of the bar, so he couldn't barely make out the hands of the large clock in the sitting room which was 1:30am, even if he knew, it wouldn't have made any difference.

He gulped a mouthful of the brandy and sighed as he wiped his mouth.

He allowed his mind drift to the event of the past eight hours.

He and his friend had barely sat through their first bottle legend extra stout in their favorite bar when he was called by his younger sister that his wife was in labor and had been rushed to the hospital.

His friend, Uche had scrambled to his feet and ran out of the bar and he followed suit after paying their bill.

By the time they got to the hospital in an hour, she had already been delivered of healthy twin boys.

When they were ushered in to see the bundles of joy and their proud mother and despite Uche's wife coaxing, he wouldn't carry the pink sleeping babies out of guilt laced with disappointment.

When Uche joined in the coaxing, he took one of the babies from his brimming with happiness friend and when Uche's wife began prophesying into his life concerning conception, he wondered if she would have done so if she knew that he objected to their marriage because she was petite and didn't want his friend to marry a woman with an incompetent cervix.

He sighed and gulped down the remaining content of the glass.

Life was indeed a b*tch as some say.
He reminisced, he that had married a woman with a competent cervix had not missed seeing her menstrual period for once in six years of marriage.

He poured himself around drink and took a sip. Tears formed in his eyes.

'Honey...' Ngozi called softly and approached him, clutching her night tie. 'I woke up and... ' She stopped short startled on seeing the bottle half drained. 'Is everything okay? '

'What kind of nonsense question is that! ' His glared at her with eyes red from sleeplessness, shedding silent tears and deep thought.

'But it's barely... ' She began.

'If you don't get from here, your parents will not recognise you anymore!' He thundered and got to feet.

Ngozi stood rooted with jaw dropped like a statue before a fountain. Her husband had never raised his voice at her.

'Get out! ' He hurled the tumbler at the wall before him.

As the smashing sound, she did dialogue with her feet.

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It feels good to be unrestricted.' Katherine expressed and pressed her face against the door glass.

Kelvin gave her a glance but maintained a blank expression as he continued driving.

He turned on the radio.

After five minutes of peering outside, she turned to him. 'This way doesn't lead to my house.'

'I want you to see my house. '

'House...?' She tried to read his facial expression which was unreadable.

'I don't want to believe you're in such a hurry. ' He smiled at her.

Katherine didn't bother to reply as she sat back and closed her. Something was amiss, she concluded when it suddenly dawned on her that he had been unusually quiet since he came back from the doctor office earlier in the day.

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lenmafon: @queenxstar, babe u so good. i started reading GTG yesterday and didnt drop the phone till i got to pg 14, u got me glued to my phone, i cut cap 4 u.
i hope u wont mind if i point out some error spots to u. i read the story and write them out on ur request. nice meeting u on NLand. congrats on ur success. we'll pop red wine for u later or which one u want?

Indulge me already with the corrections.

Welcome on board dearie. I don't do alcoholic drinks, a fruit wine will do.

Toeyean1507: . May we witness more morrows #byHisgrace

One is here.

kennylizzy: I will be right here waiting for ur nxt update ma'ma

I see you dearie.

Queenxstar: I see you dearie.

What about me?

queenxstar babe, thank u for ur story, am reading it for the 2nd time. i learnt that to get favor from people, relate and speAk with them in a language they understand, never look down on anyone, give people a change to give their best & a lot more. i pray to train my kids to be like katherine and to ve self-confidence to be able to face the likes of yemisi and patrick. pls before u publish ur book, get a good editor to edit out all grammatical errors. i like the way u put the thoughts of ur characters - </em>. u indeed a good writer. will send u ur fruit wine later

SammyHoe:
What about me?

I see you too dear

lenmafon: queenxstar babe, thank u for ur story, am reading it for the 2nd time. i learnt that to get favor from people, relate and speAk with them in a language they understand, never look down on anyone, give people a change to give their best & a lot more. i pray to train my kids to be like katherine and to ve self-confidence to be able to face the likes of yemisi and patrick. pls before u publish ur book, get a good editor to edit out all grammatical errors. i like the way u put the thoughts of ur characters - </em>. u indeed a good writer. will send u ur fruit wine later

Thank you.

queenxstar, in chpt 19 u wrote that olaide asked kathy to help him pick a dress for his wife but then in the hospital, he speaks of a fiancee who is a psychiatric nurse or are the two different olaides? pls check and see. cant wait 4 de xt update

Painstakingly short and suspense filled! Come and update o

Yeah right..*sad*

Toeyean1507: Painstakingly short and suspense filled! Come and update o

Heeeey finally Kelvin wants to propose. I'm happy for him. I pity Eze smal but it's not his wife's fault now

Tnx for d update dearie, it was kool

nnekamezor: Tnx for d update dearie, it was kool

nne mu I hv been searching for u today

chimerase2: nne mu I hv been searching for u today

Really Any p?

nnekamezor: Really Any p?

easy naa nna nawa oh, re we fighting

chimerase2: nne mu I hv been searching for u today

Really? any p?

chimerase2: easy naa nna nawa oh, re we fighting

nope, nt @ all

nnekamezor: nope, nt @ all

nne u frightened me, fear been hold me

chimerase2: nne u frightened me, fear been hold me

u dont say. I dont bite ooo.. So feel free

nnekamezor: u dont say. I dont bite ooo.. So feel free

dnt wori I will mention u tomorrow so time to sleep nw

lenmafon: queenxstar, in chpt 19 u wrote that olaide asked kathy to help him pick a dress for his wife but then in the hospital, he speaks of a fiancee who is a psychiatric nurse or are the two different olaides? pls check and see. cant wait 4 de xt update

That was not Olaide but the production manager, Mr Kings.

Toeyean1507: Painstakingly short and suspense filled! Come and update o

Some days are like that Sweetie.

crislyn: Yeah right..*sad*

Don't be na.

Ziziola: Heeeey finally Kelvin wants to propose. I'm happy for him. I pity Eze smal but it's not his wife's fault now

Hmmm
...

nnekamezor: Tnx for d update dearie, it was kool

You're welcome Sweetie.

Queenxstar: Some days are like that Sweetie.

. Of course I do know. Dat was d Oliviette twist in me. Do put a smile on our faces today...............*winks

gudmorning queenxstar, sounds like u are mad at me pls just try and check first to see what i mean cos i had to read those pages three times.
will u update today? cos i've been hungry since yesterday for more

I want more!!!!