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My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 10:40am On Aug 02, 2014 |
Loading..so here I am..this has been on my mind for quiet sometime now buh d lazy part of me is saying no All tanx to my oga at d top sammy hoe...nd kingphilip...also to missyhorlah bestie of life for the inspiration So m calling u all: Xtarxhyne Lanicky Cheriepet Charijee Kelvingraphics 3dimension Logodwiz Harlos Naijaboiy Dre11 Omotorlah Seanrhodez NB:Am not promising a constant update oo and it is just a fiction 3 Likes |
Re: My Life,my Fate by JigsawKillah(m): 10:46am On Aug 02, 2014 |
This post is Ebolaic! Beware! SAW |
Re: My Life,my Fate by naijaboiy: 10:57am On Aug 02, 2014 |
is this going to be a true life story? |
Re: My Life,my Fate by BoiledCorn: 11:03am On Aug 02, 2014 |
So I was not invited The story better be sweet. One of these days I will tell the story of my life. But with another moniker of course |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:44am On Aug 02, 2014 |
Prologue: I must have fallen into a deep sleep. Rolling out from under the table,I looked around What! everywhere is so deserted and this is so unusual considering the fact that this is the most crowded place in the palace. My head keeps aching.Yeah,now I remember what happened,the chaos,the running,the shoving.Mama's voice as she shouted our names.the men on horses,the one with veils,the ones with swords and the one's with bows and arrows. Now I remember how I was shoved into the room by the slave,making me hit my head on the chair.Now I know what I was doing under the chair. "Hahahaha"I heard the voice of the wicked witch.scared to d wits nd almost urinating on my shorts. No!I should not be scared.My father will be sad to see me scared..Been d only son,and next to be king.But cut that short.I am just six. Summoning all the courage I had,I went out and no,what I saw got me running back.To hell,with courage.What do I know about life,my mum still feeds me,bath me. "But,why are you doing this"That was my dad voice...strong in front of danger. "Why?..are you seriously asking me why"I heard the evil queen's voice.so soft and innocent you could fall for it...."Do u think,u were lucky to have killed my late husband?oh,no baby.It was planned by me,that is how I go around killing everybody" "But why do u do this,what do u stand to gain" "Hahaha"that laughter I have always hated since the 1st day I laid my eyes on her...."I LOVE BLOOD,I LOVE BLOOD" peeping out I could see her stabbing my dad as she repeated d word over and over again. And looking at that man whom everybody had loved,the once bold man I had always envied sitting vulnerable on the chair.I had no idea when the tears came out from my eyes.looking up to my dad I can see him staring at me nd then I can see d smiles forming at the two edge of his lips.and there and then I spoke to my heart I passed the secret passage to the entrance.looking around I feel bad.the once loved and cherished environment now covered with bodies,blood was everywhere,heads were divorcing the body. Woman,children not even spared from this but nobody noticed me,nobody could see me and then I remember what I said in my heart Death,I had called,do not take me away today but after the day of my vengeance and there and then a veil covered me. 1 Like |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:45am On Aug 02, 2014 |
JigsawKillah: This post is Ebolaic! Beware!Hian |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:46am On Aug 02, 2014 |
naijaboiy: is this going to be a true life story?Nope |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:47am On Aug 02, 2014 |
BoiledCorn: So I was not invitedoops!my bad Its not d story of my life |
Re: My Life,my Fate by BoiledCorn: 11:50am On Aug 02, 2014 |
Lorlaahlozz: oops!my bad Now I remember how I was shoved into d room by d slave,making me hit my head on d chair....this story go get better action. |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 11:53am On Aug 02, 2014 |
Bestie,I dey ur back ooo..move on dearie |
Re: My Life,my Fate by papindinho(m): 11:58am On Aug 02, 2014 |
interestingano |
Re: My Life,my Fate by LogoDWhiz(m): 1:26pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Reporting In.. My moniker is logodwhiz not logodwiz. Lovely story sis.. Keep it up.. I dey your back.. |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 1:47pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
birra dey ur back gadagba |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 1:48pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
missyhorlah: Bestie,I dey ur back ooo..move on dearieTanx |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 1:49pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
LogoDWhiz: Reporting In..Tanx egbon 1 Like |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 1:49pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Xtarxhyne: birra dey ur back gadagbaBirra mi..tanchu |
Re: My Life,my Fate by seanrhodez(m): 2:03pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Nice story hon....the update better be constant |
Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 2:14pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
i see im nt relevant here.hmm [walks out whistling] |
Re: My Life,my Fate by 3Dimension: 2:20pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Lola u've decided to start............ Oya now make I sit. Cheriepet come and have your sit beside me. |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Cheriepet: 2:33pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
3Dimension: Lola u've decided to start............ Sitting beside u dear.... Lola i neva knew u are a storyteller.... lol JeffreyJamez, Charijee, Kinggphilip, frankben our girl has started a story... *druming for support* |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 2:41pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Cheriepet:but she refused kissing me i'll always support you lorla |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Dygeasy(m): 2:43pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Nice feel of the introductory passage but there are bits of abbreviations here and there all over. Punctuate correctly and eliminate the use of "..." and insert your breaks in the right places. It's not a text message. Still following. 1 Like |
Re: My Life,my Fate by harlos: 2:46pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
*Crashed in and hits head on the wall* My head Who threw me here like boko haram bomb |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Cheriepet: 2:54pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
frankben: but she refused kissing me Na by force to kiss u? Nwanne how u dey |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 3:01pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Cheriepet:no be by force buh at least, she should have given me a peck Adim Okay ..... Kedu maka Ndi be-unu? |
Re: My Life,my Fate by charijee(f): 3:09pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Cheriepet:Here I am. ....Following |
Re: My Life,my Fate by LogoDWhiz(m): 3:31pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Lorlaahlozz: Tanx egbon Uwc aburo. Show then what you've got.. |
Re: My Life,my Fate by dre11(m): 6:29pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
Abeg shey nah narrative story u wan write or discriptive story self....... I was here and c the room empty |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:21pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
seanrhodez: Nice story hon....the update better be constantm blushing oo swthrt..tanx for reading this..am happy |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:24pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
daveP: i see im nt relevant here.hmm [walks out whistling]pls m so sowi..thought I did..pls pls nd pls |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:26pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
3Dimension: Lola u've decided to start............Tanx..sit nd enjoy Still expecting sammyhoe 1 Like |
Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:28pm On Aug 02, 2014 |
harlos: *Crashed in and hits head on the wall*Ebola welcome |
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