THUNDERBOAT VS BEN Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 20 lines. - Deadline is 11:59pm, wednesday 10 September 2014. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. - Only judges are allowed to vote!!......goodluck!!!

Checked. . .Dropping On Wednesday

lapoga: - A no show attracts a ban. -

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Checks...dropping ASAP

Witness da killin of an "ill dude" by me Doctor Quack/..then "T.B" Trynna fork wit me,display "prophetic" qualities of a gay/..he n his barz re "All In"..That's Fact/..bt ama wreck 'em till d damage z even felt in Camp Mulla's Rap_Track!!/
Murder of dz dude a Crime?/well 3shots "tarrah tarrah tarrah"..4rm my revolver,datz right_Fam/..if thunder boat makes such loud sound/..means he's bk 2hz duty of chasing away birds in a Rice Farm!!..
Dz mumu hawks pandol wit "wheel barrow" 4 Hold_up/he now claims he dey openly '"push drug"//he's weakling/few chabs at hz chin..felt his "cheeks Floopy n Sagging"..that even vets mistook him to b a Bull Dog!!/
am so high..i could even b seeing_God/lyk "reckless lab assistants" i kip spilling_Blood/bt thunder boat state of "J.J.C" rings so loud..like it's Okocha's attention Being_Called!!//..(Jay Jay See)

lyk landlords pissed at his tenants,"i knocked at ya door" wit no intention to Please..you/left u Dead..as i gave ya "some alien" punches lyk a boxer 4rm Mogadishu..!!/

Hz b!tch in terms of price..wen compared 2 salt is a lot Cheaper/..like "Gaza"..d word "strip" z attached to her name,hey mister/even pamela anderson sees her as a role model wen it cums 2being a Stripper/..

listen up mister/..deal wit ya impotence...'cos ya b!tch's "brain cells" re now gluttons/ cos of d amount of "food 4 thoughts" ya state of impotence gave Her/..even kompany of man.city turned blind spot 2her big a§§ nd B¤¤bs nd screamed "ur b!tch's head is a lot Bigger!!//

told hz girl "to raise ya arms/ i was lyk "what an evil forest u gat @ya armpits/..d mumu blush oh//guy no near ur girl wit fuel as she dey on heat/..'cos u will start up "a burning bush oh"..nd if God calls moses 4rm there..my guy go Dodge oh//

all verses read/..all ye hungry for punches are all fed//...like i did murder thunder wit by da stiching of needles...i leave him dead on this "Thread" !!// ..

Dropping soon

Issokay

I wonder wats comin afta 'B' dat made him lift his head up …maybe he' tryna 'C' God/ you'ld mistake him for 'suya' wen ma punches smoke his Jaw/ destroy his 'genesis & revelation' …tell me wat is bible gon rely on/ he await d law lik 'Moses' on 'Mountain' …so wen I press 'charges' he'll b fast to break the LAW/



He gat blunders & na annualy he dhe write waec cos he yearly fail/ lapoga tnks for this ram …ma punch re brutal so watch Gayou slay/ He kicked a hen & said tz just a mere foulplay/ He's just 17 …but the mumu stil dhe fix date of his 10th year BIRTHDAY//



Am d boss here …cum 4wad & tell me bonjour/ cos if u dnt, I'll be 'crucifyin ur christ' & u'll tink I was 'born jew'/ Ben attacked in 10(Ben10) …bt the way av been tacklin him it was lik I attacked x2/ He's the typ that licks 'baba blue' …jst to spit & send punches via BLUETOOTH/



Am always attackin wit a bloody-package/ 'rolling stone gathers no mud' …d ffag say na muddy-adage/ ur death is now! …get ready to go down goldie-passage/ cos wen ma punches pierce ur skin …engrave d son of a b!tch on it …& pple ask wetin b dis …he go say na body-language/



Dis game …Tz all 'unda mai feet' lik d planet is gettin 2 much sun, we nid to 'cap earth'/ dis ffag wanted 2 'trade smal word' wit me so ah killed him in little market/ punches left him in 'cuts' afta jus a single arrest/ ur death is in ur hand, so ah wonda if u av ur hand lik CASKET

My verdict...

Opener-Thunderboat(u weren't straight up tho, 2 many ideas in 1 bar aint cool)

Closer-IdikaBen(nice effort)

Flow-Tie(both verse is funny sha)

Metaphors/simlies-IdikaBen

Rhymes-Tie(fallouts)

Wordplay/nameplay-Tie

Punchlines-Tie(to me, Thunder edged this, but Idika's verse was funny. . Lol)

. . .Na him go put panadol for wheelbarrow, dey for hold up they tink say him dy 'push drugs'
. . It's cool, but wasn't rili constructed well

Personals-nil

Creativity-IdikaBen(funny)

My final vote goes to-IdikaBen

Idika nd Thunder nice, but not good enough

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more verds pls. .captainflash and stinstuntz

kinda funny say i no get methz . . .i edge punch (but u tied it) . . . ittokay

Thunderboat: kinda funny say i no get methz . . .i edge punch (but u tied it) . . . ittokay

Metaphors aint all bout using likes pls...nd about the punch? U shud be greatful, u were direct, yl Ben was creative, if not he got punch...

Geoxpress:
Metaphors aint all bout using likes pls...nd about the punch? U shud be greatful, u were direct, yl Ben was creative, if not he got punch...

who's talking about like? . . . ittokay sha

Thunderboat: who's talking about like? . . . ittokay sha

Ok

Nö Long story. . .
Ge0xpress said it all!

hmmm. . .nice punchline @ ben. .but weak brawl indeed. . . . . vgt-ben. . . . . . . . . . .