Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Personals - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point

Rules- 10bars

- Deadline is 9pm, Tuesday 13
January 2015.

- Verses should be posted by both
battlers on or not later than
deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching,
feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any
bar OR biting accusations without
proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a
bar or verse - please put it in your
vote. Vote and state what you found
wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say
in defence of your verse please save
them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets
OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject
between votes and voters should
just vote and leave it like that.
Goodluck!!!

this shit ought to be a no personal battle..
nice work bro, i'll post by six

JOEmystic:
this shit ought to be a no personal battle..
nice work bro, i'll post by six

Ok Check!

When we posting bro?
Inbox me bro when ur bars are ready

Hello bbitch! My name is G'IYAZ
and I'm here to kill you!

Listen...

Dopium Lava, i come with bars that be made of stones/ no
fictions like Seven kingdoms unlike you made your own/
Every glad on here be aware i ain't no movie fan like K' or
'chon/ so when I'm murking J niggas know it's not Game of
Thrones!!

I'm sick with the flow, call me Pac's Sequel/ unbeatable, boy I made alotta
wacks see Hell/
A lame nigga like you wouldn't punch me well/ so like you bouncin holdin' hands with Lamont
Coleman... bbitch be certain, you leavin' here with a BIG
L!!

Smoked a blunt before I scripted this one, brother/ puffed the
green, then sipped from a canned soda/
but you's a JJC.. you've never lit a juan, ffucker/ the only
time you've seen grams is back in the village visiting ya
Grandmother!!

He ain't real, nigga's just an old clown/ threw some jabs, no one got
me, the bro frowned/
He's a weaklin, gave up his lines, got 'em boned now/ but Nunquam cede!
imma keep landin him punches till Mystic Falls like Stefan
Sylvatore's hometown!!!

I hit up ya grill wearing a fake smile... you hardly knew here comes
trouble/ reached for greetings thinkin we buds, short fool!/ see
i don't accept handshakes from y'all muggles/
But imma let the saw cut off your wrists... Now That's how I
chop knuckle!!

Battling G'IYAZ at last, the pig can't believe/ but Phoenix elites hyped
him, sayin the bbitch'd get me killed/
I choked in laughter like; errm, errm, ha pftt! is the nig ready
please?/ now we battled! still JOE couldn't get me weakened/ or
damaged.. even after y'all got the imp paired with me!!!

Bbitch you wack and lame, your fonts can't fool us/
It's like a broken vehicle, your bars can't move
us!!!

Ghost writer for Ghost writers, i battle no fakes/ went
pound for pound with demons, murked bulls, no shake!/
Joe i ain't your league, been battlin castled known heads/ before NL!
But If you think you can catch up with me... imma break your head
with a bottle of Rozzay!

No long story, I'm above your level like Kelvin Book against Arnold,
Son/ niggas recognize me better compared to you, cos bars? Ah got
more!/
They hype me on FB and you get bitter like Alomo/ we ain't
disabled men, but ain't it ironic how my bars def and
yours dumb?!!

Remember this bout, how G'iyaz fed yo kid/ with enough beef/
Combined with arsenic punchlines startin with "hello bbitch"/ don't
forget this in a hurry. . . Cos if it mistakenly jumps out that
rusty brain? imma break your head with a chair to make it
sit in your memory!!!

blame it on ur looks'.
You're really gay bro.../
ur 'set up' as ugly as ya face.. U being a
vet? ..is a silly fable../
cuz ur line shows u lackin connectons´... I'll
wire' u slap to show 'd.v the picture' of ur
death... As i strangle giyaz with the T.v cable...////
.
.
:
It's a lion against a pusssy... Peeps would say
this a war of cats...
Here i'll run' a fist to his head to make his
heart sprint'...
Jst a 'gunshot' .. n u sure to die 'on ur macs'../
my gat here will rain cat n dawgs...
Bringin disatrous catalogues....
the fool has the 'balls' to face me? It's war... I
live a spartan world... I'll hit him with 'series
of hazards' n leave giyaz' with scattered balls.../ .
.
.
I'll have this gay man battered.../ with cruel
reception...
I'll 'undresss' the fool's intension.. Ur verse? Is
stale n wacker... than a fade agbada..../
in exchange rate... It wont worth 'clothing his
shame' if we down to a trade by barter!!!..../
.
U nt good in text or audio..
U foolish dear ......... Daring ya rabbi
u'll get schooled in here!
Strokes of Cain' to the Abel..
Am dark in skin tune
My brute attacks won't be fair!
Outlawed jabs... U a prey to this rebel! .........

Ur shidd are so 1960
dnt fink it's f'ucckin independence!
U a prey in my claws'
u getting devoured, son it's a penance .........
My cancer laced punches smacks ya head' ..n like damned convicts u'll struggling with a sentence!!

Best u retreat or act bitchy..
Call voters casts nill or void..........
Shidd is u ain't singing victory here,
m leaving ya with sore throat as i split ya cord!!
.
.
Done sorry for delay bro

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Open for Votes!

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Lookz like Joe scripted hurriedly...didnt look like it for me.

nice bars. Its good niqqas bringing in new style

Quality against Quantity



Joe got it for me
Giyazz prolly underrated the gee

that Coleman/ Big L and Lagunna/bottle of rozzay has already been played by rebel
.

notwithstanding MVGT -- Giyazz

Gay_àss fo' me

G'iyazz βε getting wacker errday, brb Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я my verds

Joe's verse is incomplete bt the quality of the verse can not be ignored...giyaz on the other hand packed alotta heat in his verse and he was more aggressive wit the punch,joe could hav bag the win here had he completed his verse so sorry gee anyway

MVGT: giyazz

giyazz put your money on the table
We could battle on cable!

I call you out.





Still on>> my vote goes---GIYAZZ

nice one from joe I like your punches.

bro is it jst anybody droping verds or tagged voters? And again yea i hurriedly post this shit like all of my battles bt i need a verd that has breakdown...
.
Forgive my bitchy act bt tagged voters should vote only n with breakdown if nt don't bother voting!

Giyaz takes this
.
Some annoying rhymes tho'
.
Imma say this,do not sacrifice rhymes and flow all for the sake of punch - its not the only criteria

.

nice show from both! but n0t withstanding giyazz got this!
.
vgt-giyazz!

okay

I hit up ya grill wearing a fake smile... you hardly knew here comes trouble/ reached for greetings thinkin we buds, short fool!/ see i don't accept handshakes from y'all muggles/But imma let the saw cut off your wrists... Now That's how I chop knuckle!!


Ur verse? Is stale n wacker... than a fade agbada..../in exchange rate... It wont worth 'clothing his shame' if we down to a trade by barter!!!..../.

Darkrebel:
that Coleman/ Big L and Lagunna/bottle of rozzay has already been played by rebel
.

notwithstanding MVGT -- Giyazz

Liar!

What you said was: "someone tell Lagunna that I'm poppin Rozzay!"

How does that connect with

But If you think you can catch up with me... imma
break your head
with a bottle of Rozzay!

Chai! Smh, you just love seeking for cheap attention!

Also give me the link where you played Lamont Coleman/BIG L

Attention seeking dumb liar!!!!

GIYAZZ:
Liar!

What you said was: "someone tell Lagunna that I'm poppin Rozzay!"

How does that connect with

But If you think you can catch up with me... imma
break your head
with a bottle of Rozzay!

Chai! Smh, you just love seeking for cheap attention!

Also give me the link where you played Lamont Coleman/BIG L

Attention seeking dumb liar!!!!

keep quiet pig..

Rozzay / Rose .. its still the same thing..

the puns outplayed--

.you just worded it another way...
you even admitted you heard it in my freestyle audio yet you still proceeded to use a Pun already used By another rapper.in a battle ...
if you didn't know bout the pun, it would be a different thing..but you knew..
stuppid recycler..



I used Big L in my brawl with Illness ....
Win/ Big L(Big Loss)- like the dead Harlem Rapper

why would I lie?
Abeg shut up and pack well and develop original punchlines.
all your stuffs are generic..

useless Wack Rapper
.
...

and don't ever tag me to vote in any of your filthy threads in your life again ...

You reek of immaturity ..
...

Darkrebel:


keep quiet pig..

Rozzay / Rose .. its still the same thing..

the puns outplayed--

.you just worded it another way...
you even admitted you heard it in my freestyle audio yet you still proceeded to use a Pun already used By another rapper.in a battle ...
if you didn't know bout the pun, it would be a different thing..but you knew..
stuppid recycler..



I used Big L in my brawl with Illness ....
Win/ Big L(Big Loss)- like the dead Harlem Rapper

why would I lie?
Abeg shut up and pack well and develop original punchlines.
all your stuffs are generic..

useless Wack Rapper
.
...

You're a lying nicompoop!

What's outplayed there? Something that doesn't even connect to yours?? Are you ok? This 17 year old fool!!

I didn't word anything another way and I never recycled your dumb lines!

Talking 'bout who recycles lines here, then it's you!

I've caught you steal alotta people's ideas and word it another way. You've even done that to me 2 good times!! Imma bring them up. . .

This is one you stole from Cassidy

Cassidy vs Dizaster (Ether)

- Imma make your heart go acapella, no beat! _Cassidy (Last year december)


Or " Acapella their Chests …...till their Hearts
stops Beating !! / _Darkrebel

_Darkrebel "shots" (just last week)



G'IYAZ "shots" (came before Dark's)

The only "Riches" you got are the flaws in your wordplays _Giyazz


(After some months)
But can Someone tell this Mistress/.... that a "Good
Name"...is better than "Riches" / !!!! _Darkrebel




See? You're a ffucking biter and you should be ashamed of yourself, niggas think deep and create punchlines. . . And all you do is bite them! God will judge you!!

GIYAZZ:
Liar!

What you said was: "someone tell Lagunna that I'm poppin Rozzay!"

Ehn ehn.. When did he say that?

Na thunder go fire rebel

Lagunna:


Ehn ehn.. When did he say that?

Na thunder go fire rebel

On an audio " pre-written freestyle" he did.

But bros tell me o

How does these two lines connect? Is there anything like biting or recycling here??

Dark said: "Someone tell Lagunna that I'm poppin Rozzay"

I said: "And if you tryna Catch up (Ketchup) with me, imma break ya head with a bottle of Rozzay!!

Download Ketchup_Rozzay to decipher

GIYAZZ:
On an audio " pre-written freestyle" he did.

But bros tell me o

How does this two lines connect? Is there anything like biting or recycling here??

Dark said: "Someone tell Lagunna that I'm poppin Rozzay"

I said: "And if you tryna Catch up (Ketchup) with me, imma break ya head with a bottle of Rozzay!!

Not the same at all..

Lagunna:


Not the same at all..

Guess I'm right. The kid is so dumb, he can't read the difference between lines. Smh


Meanwhile. . . GIYAZZ wins this brawl!


Thread Closed.