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Jimi I don't knw, bose I don't knw, writeup I can't understand. S it only me

Youngpol
Present!!!

Nice dialogue, Sharon

But...

The story doesn't sound natural. I mean, what man will tell a lady to her face he's breaking up with her because of her lack of natural endowments?

He'd rather make up some other excuses.

Well, it's your story anyway but that's my opinion.

Thanks to everyone for reading and commenting!

LarrySun thanks for welcoming me. I read your comment before the moderators deleted it. I'll take your advice and not rush.

Stuff46 you were right. I found some of my stories online reproduced without my permission, of course. Na wa!

only "olodo's" will not understand.

nice one Op

Bia, Op, u must finish this movie o. I don dey picture the next scene for my mind. Jimi go because of the fear of Herpes no date Bose again o and the shocking part b say she no get the disease.

I guess it is better to read movie scripts and imagine it than to watch Nollywood poo.

Weldone sharon.

awesome piece, nice diction and really a very short story

this is interestingly beautiful!
HBD,WULLNP

Where're those people asking for popcorn , Im here come and have your own share
Nice write up though !

I love the wey you started the story and i believe this would be a very nice write up. I would be waiting for updates

hhahahahahahahahah!

He got herpes . Nice better gift

Interesting story thought short. Just wen I was getting ready 4 d story, it finished. D guy no try oooooo, but I love d way d gal handled d situation. Hope part 2 is on way oo

Abeg I luv my Emerald like dat o..without the "attack and defence" she is blessed with brains which drives me crazy. A lady without intellect but with attack and defence is a"NO" to me.

thank God for d pop corn. Op com nak us more tori