spacefreak:


I'm not changing the title. A pacemaker is a specialized tissue that helps the muscles of the heart contract. Their are artificial pacemakers which could be internal or external. It is used as a result of cardiomyopathy.

Lool what I'm trying to say is Chiamaka has the effect of a pacemaker on him. Chisom had that effect but never as strong as Chiamaka. His heart shattered when Chiamaka left. Chisom got it beating at a point but never as strong as it was with Chiamaka

Now, I'm suspecting you

Is this an autobiography?

Nice one though it was brief, i think you can broaden it and make it into a novel.
You write very well, your descriptive and narrative style was superb.
But...
At least you should have mentioned what type of car Chiamaka drove.
And then a little about what she does to earn a living,you mentioned something about her been more financially balanced than you,i was expecting you say what she really does.
Conclusively,you acted quite rational.
If am a male and an ex tells me we have a baby,i would experience _shock_doubt and i would love to see pictures of the baby before anything.

~my points may not be relevant,but as the saying goes 'each person is a king of his thoughts.
Thats mine.
Thumbs up!
More ink to your pen

No short story, the ladies in here will just have to have that pacemaker effect on you if that's what it takes to write this novel.

Chinweblinkz:
Nice one though it was brief, i think you can broaden it and make it into a novel.
You write very well, your descriptive and narrative style was superb.
But...
At least you should have mentioned what type of car Chiamaka drove.
And then a little about what she does to earn a living,you mentioned something about her been more financially balanced than you,i was expecting you say what she really does.
Conclusively,you acted quite rational.
If am a male and an ex tells me we have a baby,i would experience _shock_doubt and i would love to see pictures of the baby before anything.

~my points may not be relevant,but as the saying goes 'each person is a king of his thoughts.
Thats mine.
Thumbs up!
More ink to your pen

That's it!

MzNelly:


Now, I'm suspecting you

Is this an autobiography?

Lool hell no!. I wish it was. You know, having two independent women that loves you. And of course having a son. I don't have a son and I don't have women that love me.

Chinweblinkz:
Nice one though it was brief, i think you can broaden it and make it into a novel.
You write very well, your descriptive and narrative style was superb.
But...
At least you should have mentioned what type of car Chiamaka drove.
And then a little about what she does to earn a living,you mentioned something about her been more financially balanced than you,i was expecting you say what she really does.
Conclusively,you acted quite rational.
If am a male and an ex tells me we have a baby,i would experience _shock_doubt and i would love to see pictures of the baby before anything.

~my points may not be relevant,but as the saying goes 'each person is a king of his thoughts.
Thats mine.
Thumbs up!
More ink to your pen

Your opinion is very relevant. Thank you. He did experience shock and doubt, that's why he went to the restroom to clear his head. I should broaden it but Im a lazy writer.

HumbledbYGrace:
No short story, the ladies in here will just have to have that pacemaker effect on you if that's what it takes to write this novel.

Lool Im not feeling it yet. I hope I feel it soon.

spacefreak:


Lool hell no!. I wish it was. You know, having two independent women that loves you. And of course having a son. I don't have a son and I don't have women that love me.

I could swear I felt relativity to the main character in question.

All good tho

spacefreak:


Lool Im not feeling it yet. I hope I feel it soon.

hopefully...will be waiting. back @ you.