Nairalanders, click https://www.nairaland.com/2167202 /main-story-thread-checkmate- competition-group to read our story.
Hit like if you like it, share it but comments are not allowed.

Cybershow thanks for kicking it off, Kusibe77 ur turn.

Evangelio:
Nairalanders, click https://www.nairaland.com/2167202 /main-story-thread-checkmate- competition-group to read our story.
Hit like if you like it, share it but comments are not allowed.

Cybershow thanks for kicking it off, Kusibe77 ur turn.

it my pleasure.. But why is kusibe77 not showing..... The link you edited modify it by putting -1 after the group

Evangelio:
Nairalanders, click https://www.nairaland.com/2167202 /main-story-thread-checkmate- competition-group to read our story.
Hit like if you like it, share it but comments are not allowed.

Cybershow thanks for kicking it off, Kusibe77 ur turn.

I am here. Am free since morning. I will read the previous and come up with something.

Cybershow:
it my pleasure.. But why is kusibe77 not showing..... The link you edited modify it by putting -1 after the group

am here o. you have to edit, especially the last chapter. But wait is like you don end the story.
Anyway make I think about.

Kusibe77:
am here o. you have to edit, especially the last chapter. But wait is like you don end the story.
Anyway make I think about.

kusi guy, you know what come to our group on fb.. So u culd get some hint on the story.. I may give some hint there okay?

thronekid:
I just dey read d last part of chapter 1 by Cybershow and though I'm not supposed to do this, I will.
Firstl, it seems you're yet to completely comprehend and assimilate this project. From the way you penned everything, its more like a yoruba movie with just one part boasting gigantly of a humilating duration of 10 minutes, you completed the story already, there's no way the preceeding writers would pen something on that same storyline. It would have been better if you had stopped the chapter at the point they married and end with something like this, "but as fate would have it, after the marraiage, the blissful union took a worse turn, people change, things get altered and yes, the union changed.", you know something like that would have granted the other writers athe chance to write on the story, shey u get?
Also, the grammar no be here o, work on it.
Just my 2 cents like boss D9ty7 would say!

oh thanks i will abide to that

Cybershow:
oh thanks i will abide to that

Just saying though

thronekid:

Just saying though

Oh is not just a saying but also compulsory because am still a learner.. thanks for the advice

Kusibe77 where are thou? said by the group1 members

Cybershow:
Kusibe77 where are thou? said by the group1 members

thou waiteth no more.

The story dey as e be self. But I came up with something. To be posted shortly.

Viewing this topic: thronekid

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Kusibe77:
thou waiteth no more.

Kusi this is not the place you are to post don't you see the main place to post

Kusibe77 i need your facebook id can you please forward that to me...please do that fast

Cybershow:
Kusi this is not the place you are to post don't you see the main place to post

I want others to see it and comment on it,edit it.

Kusibe77:
I want others to see it and comment on it,edit it.

Okay kusi.. but what about the facebook id i ask for?

Cybershow:
Okay kusi.. but what about the facebook id i ask for?

2go:kusibeO
i don't want to share my fb here.

Kusibe77:
2go:kusibeO
i don't want to share my fb here.

Okay you know what please add me my id is Cybershow emmanuel

Stuff46 why na? why? bt we said that comment is banned from the main story thread why?

Kusibe77:
2go:kusibeO
i don't want to share my fb here.

update it there, lets read from there

stuff46:


update it there, lets read from there

Stuff u gona take the chapter2 let kusibe77 take chapter3

stuff46:


update it there, lets read from there

k

Cybershow:
Stuff u gona take the chapter2 let kusibe77 take chapter3

he is taking his thing na. Let him update his chapter, i will take mine tomao

stuff46:


he is taking his thing na. Let him update his chapter, i will take mine tomao

Hmm i want u for chapter 2.me nd kusibe77.stil want to talk so post chapter 2 tomorow. kusibe77 wen wil you be online on 2go

Cybershow:
wen wil you be online on 2go

8 pm.
Have update mine. I doesn't need. Let stuff46 do his stuff.

Kusibe77:
8 pm.
Have update mine. I doesn't need. Let stuff46 do his stuff.

Alrit then.. we be online now.

Cyber, u see what i told u?

Evangelio:
Cyber, u see what i told u?

Yea kusibe77 is not just complying

Please review your chapter, it contradict what cyber wrote on his chapter. I have read and read, i could'nt assimilate what you wrote to correspond with the dude wrote.

Kusibe77:
8 pm.
Have update mine. I doesn't need. Let stuff46 do his stuff.

am sorry everybody. I lost my phone and i couldnt be online. Right now am chatting with another person phone. To what stuff46 said it will be very difficult to go back and edit. I had thought it will be clear. But i will still see what i could do.

Kusibe77:
am sorry everybody. I lost my phone and i couldnt be online. Right now am chatting with another person phone.

stuff46 is true with wat he said.. just try meet us on facebook or acept my 2go request