This is a true story of what i went through as a student in mubi... Make una bare with ma use of words o cause this is my first time of writing n its going b mixed wit pigin...

terrificjoe:
This is a true story of what i went through as a student in mubi... Make una bare with ma use of words o cause this is my first time of writing n its going b mixed wit pigin...

where the thing come dey?

2010

5000 comot for my body...

Ok

Kwontinu

Please try to insert paragraphs and take style reduce the pidgin na,shuo

I am interested in the story but this ur writing style is discouraging me o

Dat

Baebiehot noted... I will make amendment... Tnks

Ok))) am following but try to work on ur pigin some spelling no dey correct

Pinkycute noted n tnks for the observation

You welcome)))

But some little space on ur writeup wouldn't cause any stress.
Just try to space ur writeup and identify who and who is actually talking.

Like this)))
Me; madam bring me bowl of water

Madam; For what!! ?

Me; Make I take watch my hand.

Well, I'll stop here and I hope you understand me

Just try to space ur wirteup "that's it

Nice writeup though!

terrificjoe:
Pinkycute noted n tnks for the observation

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Late

Good writeup*****

But you made some spelling errors and I believe you'll work on that next time.
Just try to go through ur writeup again, before posting it..

Once more**** Nice writeup