OMA4U:
The poem is socko!!! I love it. Thanks for sharing, sir.

timpaker:

Thanks bro.
Okay, a quick guess.....who is the 'Pot' and who is the 'Kettle'?

laykorn:


Does it have something to do with APC and PDP?

timpaker:

Thanks bro.
Okay, a quick guess.....who is the 'Pot' and who is the 'Kettle'?

timpaker:

Thanks bro.
Okay, a quick guess.....who is the 'Pot' and who is the 'Kettle'?

joseph1832:
Nigeria the pot South Africa the kettle. Why? Tribalism and ethnic sentiment has been going on since the time we were amalgamated, even after then, the events of the civil war and post civil war speaks volumes about how we will murder our fellow Nigerians here in cold blood and feel good about it, only for us to cry wolf when we see them being beaten and murdered abroad!.

My opinion though!.

Wow!!! You just brought out the ambiguity of the poem.
You did great though as I would rate 6/10
Bravo!

Last one.... Who is the 'chef'?
Get this right and you'll chance yourself a recharge card (highest denomination) of your choice.

timpaker:


Wow!!! You just brought out the ambiguity of the poem.
You did great though as I would rate 6/10
Bravo!

Last one.... Who is the 'chef'?
Get this right and you'll chance yourself a recharge card (highest denomination) of your choice.

laykorn:


The West?

Nope. You've lost your chance.

joseph1832:
Nigeria the pot South Africa the kettle. Why? Tribalism and ethnic sentiment has been going on since the time we were amalgamated, even after then, the events of the civil war and post civil war speaks volumes about how we will murder our fellow Nigerians here in cold blood and feel good about it, only for us to cry wolf when we see them being beaten and murdered abroad!.

My opinion though!.

Ese Sir! Bawo ni na?

OMA4U:

Great analysis. Well done, sir.

I love the diction used in this poem. I doff my hat, Sir Timpaker.

timpaker:
THE POT AND THE KETTLE (rhyme)


[b]As water and stew fumble through the chef's nose

A flummoxed chef writhe in acerbic cries



Mirroring the xenophobic activity in S.A.

timpaker:


Wow!!! You just brought out the ambiguity of the poem.
You did great though as I would rate 6/10
Bravo!

Last one.... Who is the 'chef'?
Get this right and you'll chance yourself a recharge card (highest denomination) of your choice.

timpaker:
[b]The P0rnst*r Portrait

On my polished wall,
She gracefully stare.

Wanting to taint my pleasure,
and muck my flare.

Uneasy, I flatter
Here and there.

While I crave
Her careless care.

Under the covers
You imaginatively lay,

In my head,
Your prowess held me sway.

I'm making a movie
With you in play.

This is not dream
Nor a fallacious fay

The precept of play:
"A not to be freed slave"

Hedonistic snared,
My freedom i freely gave

Gag me with your lips
If i rave.

And punish me gravely
When I misbehave.

Make a coward
Off my bravery.

Like a seductive dominatrix,
Slink me to slavery.

Pluck out the lights,
For the day to gently tarry

Flirt with my mind; and
Forgive my debauchery.

For night after nights,
More moribund rounds

Ruffling of sheets,
As my 'bone' pound

When I scream,
For that pleasure I found

Passion in frigidity?
Silence is a sound.

You've purloined
My scintilla of scruples.

With your eyes
Faintly blue as purple.

Yet I lavish you with kisses,
It increases everyday on a double.

Now your picture is scarred
By the lips and knuckle.
[/b]

texanomaly:


Hmmm...it might be time to find a new picture and hobby.

You draw some very explicit pictures.

joseph1832:





The U.N. They guide every doings in this very world and still fail to do what they're meant to do. They sit and fold their hands when things such as race and tribe rear their ugly head, and most times when it leads to slaughtering of human beings.

The U.N are suppose to be the watchdog of the world yet they're in itself, weak and inadequate when it comes to securing lives and property because they sit idle and watch people get killed.
Just my thoughts once again. That is from what I can decipher from the poem.

timpaker:

Hi buddy,
You got it partly right. The answer is the UN.
I'm excited that you're very vast in International politics. Perhaps one day we could dabble into the issue of Gaza. I'd like to read your views on it but on the meantime, PM me with ur digits for the gift.

Cheers!

timpaker:
Heheheheheh. Please find that picture and paint beautiful poetry with it... I'm curious to see the outcome.

Explicit? And I was thinking of writing the part 2, I.e. d aftermath or the thought of the actress prior to when her picture was taken.

texanomaly:


Have you read any of my poetry? Many have explicit subject matter. You just may not notice it at first, or even till you think about it later.

timpaker:


Yeah i have read some. 'Startender' is one of the many I somehow memorized and could picture...

timpaker:
GIRLS

I see beneath the fashion worries, Buried in the colourful mask of beauty, As they look so crazily and perceptibly vain, Slinking and poising on a 6'inch heels, Uncomfortably comfortable... I just scream "girls!!!"