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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 12:19am On Dec 30, 2015
Renata and Bako struggled around the room for control of Bakos body,he was stronger than he looked and Renata wasn't finding it easy the way she had found it very easy with Nneka,whenever bakos spirit subdued her,he would shout and ask her to leave him,but whenever she subdued his spirit,he would be silent,this went on for some minutes before she finally subdued him.
She made him sit on the bed and stare at Nnekas body,poor girl,a victim of being at the wrong place at the wrong time,Renata thought,anyway now she was in Bako and she was glad for it,no time for mourning,after all in every battle,some innocents must die. Now the deed was done,she was surprised at two things that stood out though,firstly she was expecting someone to knock and ask what the commotion was all about but no one did,secondly,she noticed that she had a form,during the struggle,she was half in,half out of Bako,that means she could come out and go back into Bako,she didn't have that kind of power with Nneka, And she didn't know the reason for the sudden power,whatever the case,it was a pleasure,she decided to test her powers a little,she came out of bako and stayed at his back,and Bako quickly stood up,looking around,he looked confused and she chuckled,she stopped short when she found out that he was squinting his ears like he was hearing her,but he must have thought it coming from Nneka because he immediately ran to where she lay to lift her up, cuddle her and start crying all over again saying sweet nothings to her,she watched them for a long time till she noticed she was beginning to fizzle out,she ran quickly and entered into Bako,Bako dropped Nneka and struggled till Renata took hold of him. Renata wasn't finding it easy at all with Bako,he was hard to live in,she wanted to retest the power again before it occurred to her that she could leave bakos body but she couldn't stay out of it for more than ten minutes, if she did it,she would be lost forever,well she had taken note if it , It was time for her to try another experiment,to see if Bako could see and hear her,she left his body once again and stood in front of him
" Bako! Bako! Can you see me?"she asked
Bako was turning around to see where the voice was coming from
"Bako,look,I am here"Renata repeated and Bako stared at her straight on,yippee,he had seen her and she was glad
"Can you recognise me?"she asked and at this question Bako screamed and moved back to the end of the room,he leaped on the bed and squatted at the innermost corner looking at renatas spirit with fear
"Oh,u have seen me Bako?"
She asked filled with joy and gladness,now she knew Bako could see her,his torment had just begun
"No need to fear Bako"she said approaching him slowly and Bako whimpered with fear,she wanted to stay close to him so that as soon as she started fizzling out,she would run back into him
"Now you understand all,don't you?I was in your wife all this while,I killed your siblings and In Law and I am going to kill you, Asibi,the children and Mr Toke,did you people ever think you guys are going to go Scot free for my death and my sisters,no way,hahahah,your stupid seer couldn't even see clearly and warn you of the imminent danger I posed,now the remaining blood of your family would also be required at your hands, I will kill you all and you would be my instrument Bako,now come love,Mr Toke is the next, let's start moving Honey"Renata said gliding slowly towards bako.
"NO! NO ! Please Renata"Bako pleaded but couldn't stop her as she entered into him. He stood up,dusted his clothes ,went to where Nneka kept water to wash his hands off Nnekas blood,then he left the room quickly and closed the door Behind him,he needed to get home soon enough,him and Mr Toke were going out.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 12:35am On Dec 30, 2015
kizzykeziah:


Hallo OP, interesting storyline here and you really don't have to hurry writing. As long as it ends as amazing as possible.


You could try spacing up your work. Makes it more clear to read. And endeavor capitalizing necessary words.

And I'm definitely with this. #followingbumpertobumper
thanks dear,corrections noted,as for the story,its been more than four months now,I would really like to round up things faster so I could start another story ,
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 8:47pm On Dec 30, 2015
Thanx for update
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 6:49am On Jan 09, 2016
"Ah Bako,you are back so soon"Mr Toke asked
"Yes I am,you busy?"
"Nope,but why did you park outside and decide to knock at the gate?"Mr Toke asked
" I did that because my car is spoilt,I want you to follow me to go repair it"Bako replied
" Oh!OK,that's no problem,let me go tell Asibi to come lock the gate"Mr Toke said as he turned to go upstairs
"No ,no Mr toke,don't bother,please come let's hurry,so we would come back on time"Bako said stopping Mr Toke right on his track
"But the gate would be open"
"Not open,just not locked,just close it and hurry ,let's go,we have a long day ahead of us"
"Alright"Mr Toke replied and followed Bako out,he was surprised,Bako was a very meticulous person and careful too, he couldn't believe that Bako just asked him to leave the gate open,but he just followed him,maybe the car needed urgent care,moreover he was flattered that Bako asked him out,he had always wished that Bako would treat him like a brother and not as an inferior being. Mr Toke got into the first seat beside Bako and Bako reversed his car and drove out of the street
"What exactly is wrong with the car?"Mr Toke asked
"Ehmm,I think the boot door can't really open properly,plus I want to service the car,its been long I did that"
"Ohh,because ,I mean the car is moving fine and I am nit hearing any rickety noise from the car,that's why I asked"
" Ha ha ha ha,my car is quite alright,just the boot issue Mr Toke"
"But you were in a hurry,I thought the car needed immediate attention"
"Don't mind me Mr Toke,you see,I love this car so much,and any problem of any kind,be it very small,worries me,u know,it cost me a lot of money to purchase it"
"Wow,then I guess it must be running into millions"
"Yea of course"Bako replied and was quiet thereafter.
Mr Toke also decided to keep mute,he couldn't keep up a conversation with Bako because they have never being close,so he gave his full attention and listened to the slow jamz Bako was playing in his car,he watched silently as Bako drove on,it was some minutes before he noticed that Bako was driving along a very lonely path,he became a little apprehensive,Bako had told him they were going to a mechanic,he began to wonder if mechanics lived in the Bush
"Oh! Mr Toke ,I know,you would be wondering where we are going,it just occurred to me to check up a land,I bought it about four months ago,and you know that recently I have not been myself,so I haven't had much time to check it up"Bako said
"Plus I need to know what you think about the place,as man to man,maybe tell me if I made a mistake or not"
"Oh,that's no problem,after all,this is another form of sightseeing"Mr Toke replied and relaxed, Bako had really made him feel important,this is how it is supposed to be he realised,Bako should be relating to him as a man relates to another man,he shouldn't because of his wealth look down on him,yea he agreed,the man is quite rich,and here they were checking out another property, how he envied Bako,such a young man ,he himself was older than Bako with about 6-7 years but had nothing,nothing at all to show for it,he blamed his parents,his fate and his lack of education,anyway thank God he had a brother in law like Bako,he would never starve all his life and his children would be properly educated,the only issue here is the fact that if he married another girl,then he wasn't so sure he would still enjoy the luxury beside Bako,but could he continue living like this without a woman,never,he would need another woman soon,maybe later on when everything might have calmed down.
" Yea Mr Toke, here we are,come let me show you the boundary of the land"Bako said parking the car and getting out if it,he waited for Mr Toke to join him before he proceeded towards the plots of land
"This is the first boundary,the other one is by the other side,you know Mr Toke,this is three plots of land,and its so big,I just love the layout, can you guess how much I bought it"Bako asked
"Uhmmm,probably 7million naira"
"Chai,for where,in this underdeveloped area,kai,Mr Toke ,you don't have business skills o,they would cheat you well well if you try doing business with crooks"
"But,if you look around,you would find out that this place would be developed soonest"
"Anyway sha ,yes you are right,that was what I considered before buying this land,soon you won't even get a plot for 7million, it is going to be far above that"
"So how much did you buy it"Mr Toke asked
"2million"
" For all of them?"
"Of course"
" Wow,very cheap"
"Yea,but I was lucky though,I am close to the real estate agent,am not sure,its that cheap for others"
"Ah!connection things!"Mr Toke joked
"You are on point, very soon Mr Toke,I would introduce you into the business"
"I would be glad o"
"Why not,come this side Mr Toke,come check this area,what do you think about this area of land?"Bako asked moving a little ,creating space for Mr Toke to stay in front of him
"What area?"Mr Toke asked,straining his neck to see what Bako was referring to
"This" Bako said and struck Mr Tokes head forcefully with a big Stone,he had sighted the stone from afar and had drawn close to it, so that when he had the opportunity ,he would strike. Mr Toke fell to the ground and held his head,blood was dripping at a fast paced speed,he stared up at Bako in surprise and anguish
"You think I didn't know Mr Toke"
"Bako,what are you doing?what is all this?"
"You have been sleeping with my wife,do you think I wouldn't have found out?"Bako asked
"Am sorry Bako,your wife seduced me,I didn't mean to do it,I am sorry,please stop this madness"he said trying to crawl away from Bako,but Bako was too fast for him,he bent and hit Mr Toke again and again and again till Mr Tokes head split open and he was sure that Mr Toke was very dead . Bako looked at his clothes,Mr Tokes blood was all over them,how was he going to pass the police check points,in his hurry to come and kill Mr Toke,he hadn't thought about a circumstance like this coming up,well he was going To try his luck and drive home and pray no force man would stop him, he hopped into his car,cleaned his face with the inner part of his shirt,reversed and drove out of the place,he knew before anyone would find Mr Tokes body,it would take a long time and then it would be unrecognizable, he had chosen His spot well.
* *
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 7:01am On Jan 09, 2016
Renata led Bako to the sitting room and made him sit down,she was in the mood to play games,it was a week since she got rid of Mr Toke, and since then she had not left bakos body,but now she felt like torturing him a little,it was evening and Asibi was in the kitchen humming and cooking,silly girl, now she is enjoying herself because Nneka is no longer around,well she was going to be next,so she had better enjoy all the time she has got Left .She began squirming, turning Bakos body around purposely before leaving him,then sitting opposite him smiling, Bako just stared at her,he looked weak and sad ,after some minutes,he stood up,went to the fridge,opened it,took a wine bottle and a glass and came back to sit,he began drinking ignoring her
"Why are you ignoring me Bako?"Renata asked
"Why shouldn't I"Bako replied
"You shouldn't poor dear,u know I control you"
"Oh really,should I give you a medal for that?"Bako asked and kept on drinking heavily
"You must have been shocked to hear that Mr Toke was sleeping with your wife,how do you feel knowing that slut you loved so much was cheating out you?"
"I feel only pity for her,just as I feel pity for myself,I know you made her do it,you are callous and you are a beast,I hope you rot in hell for all this"
"Easy there Bako,we both would rot in hell,remember you killed Mr Toke,so stop acting all innocent"
"I didn't kill him,you did"
"No you did Bako"
"SHUT UP! I DIDN'T"Bako shouted and Asibi ran to the sitting room in fear
"Brother,what is it?"she asked and Bako turned to face her
"Nothing Asibi"he said drowning another glass of wine
"But it seemed to me that you were talking to someone"
"I said NOTHING IS WRONG!!"Bako shouted and Asibi staggered back,Renata chuckled as she watched them,it was clear to her that Asibi couldn't see her or hear her,just her sweet Bako, she stood and glided towards Bako,she was beginning to fizzle out a little
"NO! NO!don't come close to me Renata"Bako screamed but Renata didn't listen and entered back into him,he shuddered and became still,Asibi ran to him and held his shoulders
"Brother,what is wrong with you,why did you call Renata now?"
Bako lifted his head and looked at her smiling
"Asibi my dear sister,you worry too much dear,go back to the kitchen and continue cooking"
"Oh don't worry brother,am done,was just washing up"she said and sat at another couch watching her brother, no way on earth was she leaving him when he was behaving like a mad man,she just couldn't shake the feeling she had within her,something was terrible wrong,has the evil finally come for Bako,she asked herself
Renata shook Bako again and left his body,this time, she went to sit beside Asibi and watched her face earnestly,she was enjoying the expression on her face
"Leave me alone please,let me be"Bako begged Renata crying
"Brother ,what is wrong with you,why are you behaving like a crazy man?"Asibi asked her brother,she was so scared,her fears had been confirmed,Bako was going crazy,who on earth was he talking to?
" Asibi,Asibi ,Asibi,my sister" Bako said crying and drinking as well,Asibi stood and rushed to where he was to collect the bottle and glass
"Don't come near me Asibi,please leave this house,leave me-------"
"Mind what you say Bako"Renata warned but Bako pretended like he didn't hear her
"Asibi,leave me,I would kill you if you keep on staying here,I killed Mr Toke,I killed him,I hit his hea------------"a resounding slap hit Bakos face and he landed on the ground,holding his face,Asibi screamed and ran to raise him,Renata passed by her into Bako making him shudder and lay still for some seconds
"Brother!Brother,are you okay?"Asibi asked trying to lift him up
"Am fine,what happened Asibi?did I sleep off and fall to the ground?"he asked grinning,Asibi was flabbergasted,what kind of funny drama was Bako acting for her
"Brother you weren't sleeping,you just held your face and fell to the ground like someone slapped you but before then you were saying that you would kill me and that you killed Mr toke,brother I don't just understand what happened here o"
"Ha ha ha ha ,Asibi,Ehen?Is that what happened?"
"Bako it isn't funny o,it is not a playing matter,you were behaving like a mad man"
"And how does mad men behave?"Bako asked grinning
" I see you take this for a joke,brother if what you did was just acting,I suggest you never try it again"
"Asibi,relax my dear,I just felt like making the place lively,everywhere is dull"
"I am serious Bako,never try this again"
"Yes ma"he saluted like a soldier
"I will never ever ever scare madam Asibi again"he affirmed and Asibi smiled at him,her lovely brother,she loved him from the depths of her heart.
* *
* *
That night during dinner,Asibi and Bako were seated at the dinning table eating yam pepper soup,prepared with chicken and dry fish,Asibi was watching her brother,he was really enjoying the meal,smacking his lips and eating like someone that had not eaten for days
"Easy Bako"
"Your food is delicious na"
"I know,I am a good cook"
"For where,who dash you,you are just lucky about this one"
"Like seriously,could your wife cook like this?"
"Hmmmm"he said eyeing her
"Do you want to spoil my mood and finish all the food yourself"Bako asked
"Sorry,it was a slip of tongue"Asibi apologized
"Better"
"Brother,this your theory of Mr Toke running away,do you really think its valid"
"That's what I think,else why would I come back from work and you would tell me you didn't see him since afternoon,he just left the gate open and vamoosed"
"Hmm,its strange,where would He run to,his family is very very poor,I mean Mr Toke is a lazy man,how would he survive without us,moreover,his clothes and personal effects are still here"
"I am as confused as you are Asibi,or maybe he ran off with a woman,you never can tell"
"But brother,do you think his disappearance can be connected to mama Dakars own,she too disappeared into thin air"
"Nne ,I really don't know"
"Nneka is no longer around,or can she still be connected,but they said if she leaves,no strange thing would happen"
"You can see it for yourself now,false prophets everywhere,Nneka might not be the one after all,she just might be innocent too"
"Na wah o!"Asibi exclaimed dropping her fork
"Now I am scared,anything can happen to us at anytime,what is really wrong?what is happening?how can people just disappear,who would be next?"
"You "Bako answered
" Pardon?"Asibi asked
"Was kidding love,don't panic dear,nothing evil is going to happen to us okay"
"Oh!,i just hope so Bako"
"Common eat up,worry less, everything would be alright soon"
"Okay"Asibi said then picked up her fork and resumed eating.
" Its almost holidays brother,time to go pick up the children"
"Oh!yea,was about saying so you,when are they vacating?"
"Tomorrow,I got a call from the school secretary,she called the house landline"
"Alright,but I have an appointment tomorrow,how would I combine the two now?"Bako asked looking worried
"Okay I know what to do,I would ask the company driver to go pick them up"
"But brother,does he know the place?"
"Well that is why he is a driver,I would describe the place for him,he is a professional,he knows almost all the roads in this state,so he would easily get the description"
"Maybe I should follow him since I am doing nothing at home and I know the place"
"No Asibi,you stay put,just prepare what they would eat before they come back"
"But I can prepare it this evening and warm it up tomorrow"
"Could you please stop arguing Asibi,you aren't going period"
'If I could drive,would you Keep me home like you are doing now"Asibi said sulking
"Eh,but you don't know how to drive na,even when my wife was learning it right here under your nose,you guys didn't want to tag along and learn,upon I employed the services of a driving school,only Nneka was zealous"
"What is the use of learning it,would you have bought a car for me after learning"
"You never could tell"
"Okay now,I would start next month"
"If you like start next year,your problem"Bako replied and resumed eating.

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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by lorelife(m): 7:47pm On Jan 09, 2016
i'm realy loving dis story.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 4:40pm On Jan 10, 2016
asibi, wat ar u waiting for? Cant u go nd tell ur uncles abt Bako strange behaviour cos it z going 2 b a real war
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 9:02pm On Feb 21, 2016
wats up prettysassy? It has bin a month nw dat u update last, op all z well wit u?
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 7:05am On Feb 26, 2016
bummybummy:
wats up prettysassy? It has bin a month nw dat u update last, op all z well wit u?
yea dear ,all is well,have bin so busy that's why,but would conclude the story soonest.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 1:30pm On Mar 05, 2016
Asibi awoke from her sleep in the middle of the night painting heavily,she had had a terrible dream,she held her chest with her left hand,thanking God it was just a dream,she had dreamt the children were involved in a terrible accident and every one of them was roasted beyond recognition,it was indeed horrible,she moved to the edge of the bed and sat up placing her legs on the floor,she was so scared and at a loss of what to do. The children were coming back today and she had a feeling that this was no ordinary dream,she believed this to be a warning,and with all the recent happenings,she knew she mustn't take this dream with levity,but what was she to do now,the only native doctor she knew was the one mama Bintu's friend took her to and that place was so far,she couldn't make it there and back before their arrival,she stood and began pacing up and down the room,she mustn't lose another member of her family,she paced a few more times before deciding on calling mama Bintu's friend , She rushed to the bed, picked up her phone and started dialling the woman's number,it rang for some few seconds before she picked it
"Hello Asibi"
"Good morning ma,sorry for calling at a very ungodly hour"
"I was about to ask you if there was any problem because calling at this time is really very odd"
"Yes ma,I had a terrible dream"
"And what was it all about"
"I dreamt my nieces and nephews were involved in a fatal accident where all of them were roasted beyond recognition"
"God forbid!"
"And do you know the worst part?"
"What"
"They are coming back from school today"
"This is a terrible coincidence"
"That is why I called you,is there any near herbalist you know,so we could visit first thing in the morning"
"Erhmmm,let me think,well the one i know that stays around just relocated to his home town,and I don't know if there is any other one around,you know ,their job is more lucrative when they are in their home town,people know them and would refer others to them"
"God! What am I supposed to do now?you were my only hope"
"Relax,there is hope,the one we went to previously,he is my very good friend,most times I don't need to travel to him,why I took you there the first time is that he likes physical and face to face contact for first timers and he needed to give you the poison ,don't worry my dear,I would call him immediately and tell him of the situation at hand,he would know what to do"
"Oh please ma,do help me,you are the only one that can help me now"
"You are like a younger sister to me,don't worry,I would help you"
"Thank you ma,I am forever grateful"
"Its okay,don't worry yourself too much and try to get some sleep,it would work out just fine"
"Okay ma,good night"
"Good night dear"

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* *
Bako was seating at his office doing some paper work when his phone rang,he quickly looked up at his clock,it was past three in the afternoon,the deed should have been done by now,he hoped,he picked up his phone and answered it
"Hello oga,I have crashed the car"
"Oh,that's very good news,I know you are no longer at the scene right?"
"Of course sir,how I go dey there call you,I am not a learner,I crashed the car and immediately disappeared,as I am speaking to you,the car is under my trailer"
"Good good,that's my boy,go to the spot I told you and pick up your balance"
"Ah!oga,you too much,na your type of business people I dey like,please contact me again if you need such favours"
"Its okay,bye"Bako said and cut the call,he was beyond pleased at the news he just received,now it remained Asibi and that was a very simple matter,he stood and started preparing for home,he wanted to be with Asibi when people on the road would probably call him to come pick up his nieces and nephews remains.



"Thank you and I would be on my way"
"Who was that Bako?"
"Ah someone"
"You only just arrived and you are telling someone over the phone that you are on your way!won't you eat first and at least welcome your family with me?"
Asibi asked
"Eating now should not be on our priority list,dress up let's go out"
"Go out to where?"Asibi asked
"I don't know,I just got a call to start coming to the express"
"You said what?"Asibi whispered
" Didn't u hear me Asibi,common let's get a move on"Bako said sounding irritated
"Is it about the children?"she asked
"Would you please stop this barrage of questions, I don't know,I was just asked to come,if you are not coming along,I better be on my way"Bako said and started going outside,Asibi jerked out of her shock and followed him silently to the car,she entered the passengers seat and sat quietly without uttering another word to Bako,she watched him start the car and she began muttering under her breath
"gods,please don't let it be the children"
Bako drove quickly towards the direction he was given by the caller and soon enough he saw a crowd gathered at a spot,it looked like there was a severe accident at the scene, He quickly parked and turned to Asibi to tell her to stay put while he checked what was going on,but she was already out and walking briskly to where everyone was,Bako came out,locked his car and followed suit,he was almost there when he heard Asibi scream continuously and endlessly like someone who was mad,he began running immediately and struggled between the crowd so he could get to the front,in a matter of seconds,he saw his company's car,it had been dragged out from under the trailer and it was very squashed,he could also see the bodies of his nephew and nieces,blood was everywhere,hands,heads and legs detached from bodies,it was a beautiful sight to Bako and he struggled to keep his face sad and affected,people around were sighing and some were crying,,he looked to where Asibi was,she had fainted and people were trying to revive her,he immediately swung into action and started making some calls,and some arrangements to clear the accident scene,he was so taken in with his duties, He didn't know when Asibi left,he couldn't find her,and when he asked around,the reply he got was that she had left and he wondered why she had rushed home.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 3:49pm On Mar 05, 2016
Asibi staggered as she walked on the road,she couldn't even see the road clearly,she felt like dying,she had suffered so much emotional heartbreak,she didn't think she could survive this one,why hadn't she been the first to die,then she wouldn't experience all this that she was experiencing,now for the first time in her life,she envied her twin sister Chamil and Makur her elder brother, they died since and was spared this torture, life was indeed very unfair to her,upon all she did,her nieces and nephews still died,what was the reason for her living when all was lost,she walked aimlessly and looked forlorn,all this while she had thought Nneka was behind her family's misfortune,but now,she wasn't so sure,Nneka was gone and the problem still continued,maybe it was bakos house all along,yeees it was the house ,which other way could this be explained,since her and her family moved into the house,it was death all the way,she would never go back there,it was a decision she had made,she knew she had no other place to go save Bakos house,but she made up her mind to rather be homeless than spend a night in the monstrous house, she continued walking and walking, it was beginning to get late and she was beginning to worry for her safety, the road wasn't a safe place for a young girl,she began looking around for any uncompleted building,so she could manage and spend the night there,by tomorrow,she would know what to do,she saw a church instead and decided to go in,she went in and looked around,everywhere was deserted,she didn't see anybody around,for that she was happy,she went to a corner and decided to sit on the floor and rest a little,but sleep overtook her and she slept off,she was so tired from the crying and trekking.


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Bako was at the sitting room drinking himself to stupor and Renata watched him,she was pacing looking agitated
" Ha ha,for once,you are looking lost and at a loss of what to do"
Bako sneered
"Shut up,you drunk!"Renata barked
"Oh don't be touchy,is this not just a little set back for you,after all you have achieved so much and killed so many people"Bako said gulping another mouth of alcohol,Renata rushed to him and held him by his collar,
"I want Asibi in this house as soon as possible,I would not tolerate delay" Renata warned
"Or what would you do?"Bako taunted
"Kill you"
"Oh ,you are free,please kill me and end this misery"
"Not so fast Bako,I will in due time, I need Asibi first"
" You would never get her,she has escaped and would never be in your clutches"
"Hahahah ,don't be too fast to conclude sweetie, I would never rest till everyone of you is down,hahhahahahhahahaah" Renata kept on laughing and reentered her host body.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 2:17pm On Mar 06, 2016
Asibi was awoken from sleep by a man standing and towering above her
"Young lady,I have been seeing you for two days now,just lying here and sleeping,could you please come to my office?"
"Okay"Asibi answered,stood up,dusted herself and followed him into the office,so she had been here for two days sleeping?how time flies,she didn't even notice,she walked slowly because she noticed she was weak,she wouldn't want to faint and become a liability to anyone
" sit" the man ordered her,and she did as she was asked to
"Like I said earlier,I have been watching you for the past two days,young Lady,are you in any sort of trouble?"
"Sir,I didn't even notice I have been here for that long"
"You don't mean that,wow,that means something must be in your mind,tell me,do u have any problem?"
"Sir,I do not have any problem,I just new a place to stay,I am homeless"
"Oh I see!but being homeless would not make you forget how many days you have been at someplace"
"I know but that's the truth"Asibi didn't trust anybody anymore and didn't want to confide in anybody,she could clearly see that there was no solution to her family's problem and she has accepted her fate and waited for death to come claim her too.
"Well my daughter,I am sorry for your state of homelessness and for the way I am about to sound now,but this is a church and not a shelter place,don't you have other family members?"
"I have but they live far"
"Okay then,I would give you transport Money so you can get there"
"But sir,I am not a Christian but with what I hear about you people,I think you should be more hospitable than this"
"Yes,yes,I get your point my daughter,but don't you think that we might have had other pleas from other homeless people,now if we had given in,here would be swarming with people,we are hospitable my daughter but when it is right"
" Do not call me your daughter sir for I am not"Asibi said standing up
"Could you please give me the money you offered previously"she continued
"Of course,how much do you need?"
"A thousand naira would be enough"
"Fine"he said as he put his hand into his pocket and brought out money
"I wouldn't want to create a had impression in your heart about us dear girl,its just that i am not disposed to help"
"Save your preachings sir"Asibi said collecting the Money from him
"The impression has been created and engraved"she concluded and left the office and building, she was going home to her uncles.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 2:34pm On Mar 06, 2016
Welcom bck Prettysassy, tnx 4 d update nd mre of it oo
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 2:25pm On Jul 02, 2016
this kind of run away writer,I never see,God go help me sha make I finish what I started.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by virtuedagirl(f): 11:57pm On Jul 02, 2016
This story is scary,nice piece it is though.Pretty welldone
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by dexterush(f): 5:37am On Jul 04, 2016
prettysassygirl:
this kind of run away writer,I never see,God go help me sha make I finish what I started.
Amin oh
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Johnsown1(m): 7:20am On Jul 04, 2016
*Vengeful girl* hmmm i wonder the content of this piece cos when women comes for vengeance they will close their hat and wipe all.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Jok3r(m): 7:32am On Jul 04, 2016
prettysassygirl:
It was dark and the rain was pouring down heavily,the streets were silent except for some few cars speeding down the road,but Renata didn't even know what was happening around her,her teeth were chattering uncontrollably,her ears pounding,her cheeks powdered by her tears mixed with the rain and her hands on her tummy as she staggered down the walk path,she regretted her predicament and wished she could rewind her days back even if its just to a year back,now its her fault her twin sister is dead all at d hands of one man and his family,she sighed as she tried to look around,so she could see where she was headed,the movement proved futile as it hurt her already famished body,she knew it was just a matter of minutes before she joined her twin sister at the land of the dead.Renata fell down to the ground as she cldnt hold herself anymore,as she lay there she closed her eyes and lost track of time before a gentle voice forced her eyes open,she looked up into a pretty girls face of about her age,she tried to put into words her gratitude and plea all at once but words couldn't form,she saw the girls lips moving and knew the girl must be saying something but she couldn't also understand the girls words,Renata smiled and thought within herself,this soothing hands touching my face must be my last moment,but she knew her gods have answered her prayer and sent her her tool to destroy the family that destroyed her,she gave the girl a sign to stoop lower as if she wanted to tell her something,when the girl stooped,Renata used her last ounce of strength to push the girl down,and bit deeply into her neck,as she did that,she felt her soul leaving her body and entering the girls body, yes I did it was Renatas final thought.


great
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Timba24(m): 9:18am On Jul 04, 2016
madam, when diz story go end naw.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by vena3(f): 9:35am On Jul 04, 2016
What is going to happen next? Babalawo or the three witches against Renata abi? Please u have a lot of ghost readers waiting.
Weldone girl, just that once in a while u do mix up their names esp mama binta
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by puuleeese: 12:50pm On Jul 04, 2016
Please continue, very interesting.
prettysassygirl:
Asibi was awoken from sleep by a man standing and towering above her
"Young lady,I have been seeing you for two days now,just lying here and sleeping,could you please come to my office?"
"Okay"Asibi answered,stood up,dusted herself and followed him into the office,so she had been here for two days sleeping?how time flies,she didn't even notice,she walked slowly because she noticed she was weak,she wouldn't want to faint and become a liability to anyone
" sit" the man ordered her,and she did as she was asked to
"Like I said earlier,I have been watching you for the past two days,young Lady,are you in any sort of trouble?"
"Sir,I didn't even notice I have been here for that long"
"You don't mean that,wow,that means something must be in your mind,tell me,do u have any problem?"
"Sir,I do not have any problem,I just new a place to stay,I am homeless"
"Oh I see!but being homeless would not make you forget how many days you have been at someplace"
"I know but that's the truth"Asibi didn't trust anybody anymore and didn't want to confide in anybody,she could clearly see that there was no solution to her family's problem and she has accepted her fate and waited for death to come claim her too.
"Well my daughter,I am sorry for your state of homelessness and for the way I am about to sound now,but this is a church and not a shelter place,don't you have other family members?"
"I have but they live far"
"Okay then,I would give you transport Money so you can get there"
"But sir,I am not a Christian but with what I hear about you people,I think you should be more hospitable than this"
"Yes,yes,I get your point my daughter,but don't you think that we might have had other pleas from other homeless people,now if we had given in,here would be swarming with people,we are hospitable my daughter but when it is right"
" Do not call me your daughter sir for I am not"Asibi said standing up
"Could you please give me the money you offered previously"she continued
"Of course,how much do you need?"
"A thousand naira would be enough"
"Fine"he said as he put his hand into his pocket and brought out money
"I wouldn't want to create a had impression in your heart about us dear girl,its just that i am not disposed to help"
"Save your preachings sir"Asibi said collecting the Money from him
"The impression has been created and engraved"she concluded and left the office and building, she was going home to her uncles.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by nikkybeez(f): 1:49pm On Jul 04, 2016
Nice story preetysassygirl.Well done.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Silensa(m): 2:07pm On Jul 04, 2016
Great storyline, but when is it ending?
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Martinsvp1(m): 2:22pm On Jul 04, 2016
When do we get the completion of the story...I am enjoying it
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by raindrop99: 6:12pm On Jul 04, 2016
Dont keep an old man waiting
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 9:22pm On Jul 04, 2016
my village witches can't hold me no more,it musnt pass this month,I must complete it,jes a tip,the ending is fantabulous.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by petkoffdrake2(m): 12:34am On Jul 05, 2016
prettysassygirl:
my village witches can't hold me no more,it musnt pass this month,I must complete it,jes a tip,the ending is fantabulous.


Beta ooo....



But wait ooo.... She is terrible
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by raindrop99: 12:38pm On Jul 05, 2016
Still waiting......
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by GoodieAmy(f): 3:56pm On Jul 05, 2016
Wow. This story just kept me on my bed. I've not done anything else since i started reading it. You're really doing a good job. Keep it up.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Luckymay(f): 4:32pm On Jul 05, 2016
Wow. Nice scary story.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by petkoffDrake(m): 1:33pm On Jul 06, 2016
Bae... Come finish this story naa
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by raindrop99: 3:42pm On Jul 08, 2016
Continue the story ooo

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