Nice work, I like the style good for the type of story, that is detective. I think you are using some wrong expressions though in some places and of course quite a few typos. Otherwise, very captivating characters. The plot drags at times but I assume this is the beginning. The first part was excellent, with lots of action. Try to follow through on that. Cheers.

I do not worry about plagiarism like you I also have my story here on naira land and on nigeria village square.

it's been long since i left this thread alone, thanks for your comments and advices and corrections are in progress though they're inhibited by work, man has to eat first. anyway, i'll be posting some excerpts for you guys to critique and they wont be sequels to the previous posts, thanks

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it's been long since i left this thread alone, thanks for your comments and advices and corrections are in progress though they're inhibited by work, man has to eat first. anyway, i'll be posting some excerpts for you guys to critique and they wont sequels to the previous posts, thanks

You are most welcome.Please don't let the suspense be that long again.

posting up something soon

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please join me on my blog http://thenigeriantruth..com/

doing some thinking, writing and mischief there, talking about issues not strictly literary

thanks

The novel backlash finished , but then comes the hard part, finding a way to publish it. Advice and help needed, I have just been editing and re-editing it,