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Review My Poem by Nobody: 9:52am On Sep 14, 2016
Criticism is allowed.



JUST ONCE MORE


Oh! Just once more,
There lies the gold,
A little dig is all you need,
To unveil the glorious treasure.


Oh! Just once more,
There you will find paradise,
A little search is all you need,
To discover the wonderland.


Oh! Just once more,
There you'll find faith,
A little trust is all you need,
To reach an height of no fear.


Oh! Just once more,
I repeat, Just once more!
Re: Review My Poem by greatex(m): 9:55am On Sep 14, 2016
Ok
Re: Review My Poem by nelson16(m): 9:59am On Sep 14, 2016
motivational
Re: Review My Poem by Nobody: 10:03am On Sep 14, 2016
nelson16:
motivational
thanks.

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