teddybiyasi:
Voting Criteria :
Opener - 1 point
Rhymes - 2 points
Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points
Punchlines - 3 points
Personals - 2 points
Flow - 1 point
Wordplays - 2 points
Closer - 1 point

Rules
- 5 bars(50 words per bar)
- Deadline is 8pm, November 13 November 2016.
- Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date.
- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.
- No complaining about votes.
- A no show attracts a ban.
- No unnecessary comments
- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.
- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong.
- If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over.
- NO argument with established vets OR voters.
- Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that.

whiz10:
Where is my opponent?

MOSflame:



post your verse first before complaining

Kineticist:
I'm very sorry...please lets post tonight...

Kineticist:
I'm scripting these bars from the creeks/
a veteran avenger who would do anything for the bricks/
fighting for a cause but now its for me to be on the top on the list/
came with no militant warfare just combat having known the risks/
......He gon think he's pregnant when he have the feeling of 'defeat' from my 'kicks'


I'm rambo with a 'loaded' gun/
You gon get bleeped up in all 'rounds' like a under-prepared surgeon/
I've read your chart,you have a disease called losing...literally conceited in all battles since you were born/
...show pity,nah...I'll make you see 'disaster' with the 'arsenal' even when that replay of KOTD battle isn't on/


Pause,Who's back/he's that rude chap/
i spit that true fact/you about to get bodied in a few sec/
so move back/
cos my arsenal is bigger than toolz back/
......or else you gon start singing praises soon as my tools clap/

How you gon put me up with whiz/
cos its ironical i'm battling the least/
I'll just take him out with ease/
.....no punches,no kicks but still will be a success as i made him feel the impact of my whole elbow soon as lubricate it with grease/

JigsawKillah:
verds needs here please




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Ibime
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testerfuze
Gottoboy
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funlord
sinizia
elymaxiimus

Jason21:
whiz10........you brought good enough materials to bag this battle but your rhymes..... and the way you structured your lines......... are poor!

Kineticist:

How you gon put me up with whiz/
cos its ironical i'm battling the least/

whiz10:
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• the sight of whiz, made him 'sick to his stomach!’ that aint ‘all-sir'