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Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by queeniee(f): 3:23pm On Mar 15, 2017 |
This teaches great lessons to all folks. 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:22pm On Mar 15, 2017 |
chade:Amen!!! thanks sis, God bless you too. Wow, thanks for the song too, I'm blushing right now*wink* |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:23pm On Mar 15, 2017 |
queeniee:Thanks dear, thanks for reading. God bless you! |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by onwards: 1:20pm On Mar 16, 2017 |
Grammar is very basic I mean 'Yoruba-movie-subtitles' level of basic. Plot is too simple - felt irritating after the first 10 writs. Scenery and use of imagery is practically nonexistent. Depth of research involved is zero. Character creation and differentiation; blatant zero. Sorry if this hurts the writer. Rest assured that 90% of the works littering this section are all the same. You are not alone. Rich guy meets wretched lady and they end up getting married. STALE! Try something like focusing on a character building themselves from nothing and failing. Pick a location, pick a time period, pick a circumstance and write something that really keeps us awake at night thinking about how else the story could have turned out. Challenge our personal biases. Teach us something new. Most boring stories are always all about happily ever after. Dare to be different. End it with us wondering. Can you write about a cancer patient? Can you write about a street-bred fellow and his travails? He doesn't have to 'hammer' he just needs to have a beautiful story. Dare to be creative please. Literature that doesn't touch our core is no literature. Please read https://www.artsandafrica.com For those wondering. It's a Pan-African writers' den. Writers from all over Africa write there. Amaze yourself with the creativity contained therein. Btw, I'm not affiliated to it in anyway. I have read good short stories there is why I'm sharing. I believe you can do better. You can take writing courses online and better your skill. Writing is more than just stringing sentences. It's an ART. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:48am On Mar 17, 2017 |
onwards:Thanks for the constructive criticism. I appreciate. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Angelyna(f): 9:42pm On Mar 17, 2017 |
Lovely and well written! Thumbs up for the writer... More blessings |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 8:31pm On Mar 18, 2017 |
Angelyna:Amen, thanks for reading. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Yollygee: 7:04pm On Mar 22, 2017 |
I started reading this story on WhatsApp but the person sending it was delaying so I decided to search for it on Nairaland myself and guess what I stayed glued from episode 28 to the end. Thank u so much for this wonderful piece. I also noticed you did ur best to write clean romance,kudos! We néed writers like this. I pray for greater wisdom for you. 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:09am On Mar 23, 2017 |
Yollygee:Thanks and Amen to your prayers. BTW the person posting it on WhatsApp is sharing without my permission. All the same thanks for reading. You can also read "I fell in love" on nairaland. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by teekay04: 6:32pm On Mar 23, 2017 |
Rachealfst have done a wonderful job, the story was superb, I bump on this on another trend and I google it to read through the episodes, oh sister ,it has been a wonderful write up. God bless you. 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 9:26am On Mar 24, 2017 |
teekay04:Thank you so much. God bless you too, thanks for reading. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by charityfelix(m): 4:10pm On Mar 24, 2017 |
Nice one |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 2:14pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
charityfelix:Thanks |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 2:21pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
@rachealfst someone is stealing ur work on facebook nd r person stopped @t episode 16 nd i kinda ask d person dat is she d one dat wrote it she said yes.... |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 3:16pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
damsel14:Thanks for the info sis. I did not give anyone authorization to post my work on Facebook. Please what's the Facebook account? so I can check and report. Thanks. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 10:42pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
rachealfst:..... May Lawal.. Group name.. Oau great ife students nd aspirant.. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:49pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
damsel14:I search for May Lawal but there's no result. I saw like 8 accounts with same oau great Ife.... I checked the public group but my story is not there I guess it's in one of the two closed groups. But I can't report because I'm not sure, there is one 45k members and another with 1050 members.can you please specify so I won't report the wrong one. Thanks for your help. 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 10:54am On Mar 26, 2017 |
rachealfst:... is a closed group nd is the one with 46k......i know d group is hard to find but m one of d members in dat group
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Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 11:01am On Mar 26, 2017 |
some of d chats
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Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 11:02am On Mar 26, 2017 |
more
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Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:26am On Mar 26, 2017 |
damsel14:Thanks sis, you are a darling. You even confronted her.Thanks, God bless you for me. Happy Sunday. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 12:17pm On Mar 26, 2017 |
rachealfst: no p........just doing my duty cos i too dont like people stealing my works..... happy sunday nd happy mothers day to ur mum 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 3:37pm On Mar 26, 2017 |
damsel14:Thanks, Happy mother's day to your mum and you (future mum) |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by damsel14(f): 8:22am On Mar 28, 2017 |
rachealfst: Rachealfst I saw ur story on facebook again by the name princess janet......... Pls look into it nd check her timeline |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 8:38am On Mar 28, 2017 |
damsel14:Thanks sis, I will. Good morning, God bless you. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by psalm1545(m): 10:42pm On Mar 28, 2017 |
Please i need the Episode 39 and 40 of WRONG NUMBER. |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by whillyamz98(m): 7:15am On Mar 29, 2017 |
Please toyin, i need episodes 38 and above... I can't miss out on this. 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Nifeola: 10:14am On Mar 29, 2017 |
I don't understand dis story again ooo I will just see Episode 42, dedicated to so so so and I won't see d story gangan. Na so so comment I dey see |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Nifeola: 10:16am On Mar 29, 2017 |
I don't understand dis story again ooo I will just see Episode 42, dedicated to so so so and I won't see d story gangan. Na so so comment I dey see 1 Like |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Ranisere(m): 8:14am On Mar 30, 2017 |
rachealfst:. Please I need the episodes of the WRONG NUMBER. episode 40 upward.. I'm a new member here and I found the story very interesting. please help me |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Ranisere(m): 8:18am On Mar 30, 2017 |
Nifeola:Anyone that with the episode of WRONG NUMBER.. 40- last episode should please send them to me.... 08103285212.. that's my whatsapp number 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: WRONG NUMBER By Toyin Taiwo by Ranisere(m): 8:23am On Mar 30, 2017 |
Yollygee: Hello Sir/Ma, I'd be glad if you can send me the full episodes of this story.. I stopped at episode 39, checked google and nairaland but I couldn't get subsequent episodes.. can you help me deliver them to my whatsapp number 08103285212 |
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