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~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 9:12am On Jan 17, 2017 |
GIYAZZ VS FLUXMIND Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point RULES - 5 bars(50 words per bar) - Deadline is 8pm, 18th January 2017. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters Voters should just vote and leave. 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Nobody: 7:17pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
(Check) Ayy Giyazz, where you at fam? |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 7:36pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Tally ho! |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Nobody: 8:00pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Death Star Cannons activating... * I'm still unpacking the flames to adapt in this game/ It's not Branding if I said I want to repackage this lame/ But since he needs a way out cos his Career is lacking the fame/ The Strategy would be exit wounds to the back of his brain / * * * No sexual themes, but if it is, the sex is mean/ I fück him up, in the Career end, like I sexed his dream / Tagging his homies to a battle ring... Are they Wrestling Teams? / They gas him up, it's confirmed this 'Named Vee'et his beans / Shots massage his back, caress his chest & the rest his spleen/ Yuck! The mess is green/ He'll look like 'Ye in a hospital when I wreck his genes/ G's azz in a pot, smoking, laid to rest in steam/ * * * Make a Tag with no hands, it's just one Man on you/ Top of the ring, Shooting Star Press, land on you/ We talking Hell in Cell or TLC Trash? The Can on you/ 4 times? Really bruh? You let that Sun Tanned Man OWN you ?/ * * * If Rap was War, I be like Texas Shooters/ Go into a gun store, buying vests & Rugers/ I spent 5 Nights at Freddy's tryna get to Krueger / But this Cat ain't as big standing next to a Coogar / * * * He'll bleed out his arteries when my Artemis bow & arrows hunt/ The poison would make him go ape shít if I used the Snake in a Monkey Shadow Stunt/ Bullseye! I... tore'is chest when I hit G in that sweet Spot ... Like he's a shallow cünt / * * * I started in the shepherd field, now in the Den of Lions/ If I hold the heart of a Lion, know I'm harder than Iron/ I'm shooting a G-star below the Belt , send him far to the Horizon/ In the eyes or skies of Paraguayans he looks like Orion / * * * Stealth moves, I'm as slick n sleek as serpents/ The beast is lurking/ When the Trumpet sounds its not for Police Insurgence/ Fire will crack at Dawn, like neighborhood peace disturbance/ G will get blown afar with his bones apart, then put back piece by piece by at least three Surgeons/ * * * Human with machine installed parts, I'm forever evolving/ Keep my weapon revolving, aimed at whoever involving/ Jump the gun? A False Start! Proton canons dissolve him/ No wahala, I'll let it All Spark , it's not Valhalla when I'm leaving Hall Marks till this rap legend is Fallen / * 6 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 8:02pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Fluxmind? That's a stupìd rap name!/ I'm getting this newbie cat raped/ funny how he beat Joe, but he the dude that's average/ I heard your selling point are the couple of rhymes you spill. . . but today that union will fail like Ubi's marriage!! At your first arrival you had that uniqueness that made rappers cower/ newbies thought of you as rap's Jack Bauer/ Cos your rhymes were wowers, received claps for hours/ But these days. . . its like you got quite predictable. . . cos everybody seems to read Mind like they got telepathic powers/ Yes, you lost touch! explains why imma clip this win/ your fitness wore out, you no longer spit it sick/ Now you got this weight on you, how you plan to flip this, kid?/ You should have prayed this battle didn't work out, cos I planned to get you ripped!! Rip out your throat with speed/ I'm pissed! I will smoke this dweeb/ for tryna flow with me/ i will beat you till you choke and bleed/ I won't even let you GET HELP. . . . MMM Ponzi scheme!! I trip too fast, I will take this beef to your fam cos you strike a chord/ bìtch-slap your mom till her eyes are smeared/ Beat your dad with a baseball bat if the guy goes hard/ Then have your sister pinned to the wall while i plug into her like a HiVolt Guard!! Take a look, every nigga know you getting pummeled cos I spit that wave shìt/ team newbies be like: "G'Iyaz getting him halved" Joewendell on some yesterday's shìt/ Team vets said I'm getting you ate, and you better embrace it/ I even got support calls from these industry catz. . . so its obvious all teams got me on this beat like I'm a Mavin!! (Altims) So peep the shots in this verse, you getting beat, cūnt/ shots on shots like Ice and Sark ripped that beat up/ You see all these shots in the previous lines? its a setup to a heaped punch/ so you getting killed in this bar. . . after this last SHOT. . . like Oliver Reed in The Pub!! Newbies, see how I outclassed the nitwit?/ I heard he gives y'all trouble with his loud ass techniques/ reason I put him to shame with that real rap, wit shìt/ so after this battle. . . . Mind go run go far. . . like you're not paying attention!!! Easy. . . . 14 Likes 5 Shares |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 8:12pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Open for votes to every regular member on this section and everyone tagged . Emaprince Alexpissu Ibime Reyginius Airmark Coogar Mikuz Smellymouth Kinglekan Kingtom Mimzy MissGdope STFUAREYOUGOD Iykekelvins MzMycoli Mynd44 Jaybee3 Glacierz Jason21 TheSonOfMark Joseph1832 Darkenedrebel Guykhena Limerick Muhgd Llaykorn Krone Ksslib CaptAwesome CaptainCids Captainflash Elymaxiimus Funlord YoungDaNaval Lagunna1 Ojoawo Obainojazz JReyez thunderstorm Elvisonjack2 Deepthoughts Dj5naira Jigsawkillah Wrongturn Naijaboiy Sinizia Testerfuze teddybiyasi Lezz Sammcarter Geoxpress Heywhizzy Grayline Gottoboy Willofsteel Sosiqdude Richommie Rapacme Liricyst Obesemf Gladyys Sinizia Supermiy Raplinx999 Dklef Adanna28 Danbrowndmf Lhood 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by obesemf(m): 8:28pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Giyazz, why did you choose to battle this guy? |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 8:29pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
obesemf:Lol, bro. Just vote. Mad man! |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Paayne(m): 8:29pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Lol. see blood 4 ground fa. anyway, lemme first save this seat for my vote.. buh una try sha.. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Timelezz: 10:20pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
Punchline goes to Giyazz I will give the rhymes to fluxmind Giyazz takes this for me |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by jreyez(m): 10:47pm On Jan 18, 2017 |
MVGT - GIYAZZ 1 Like |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by sosiqdude(m): 12:05am On Jan 19, 2017 |
MVGT------- GIYAZZ |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by devilmaycry: 3:52pm On Jan 19, 2017 |
Ya'll big to breakdown ur votes or wat ? |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by JoeWendell: 8:08pm On Jan 19, 2017 |
Opener- tie Punchlines- giyazz Rhymes $ Flow- Fluxmind, Personals- giyazz Similes/metaphors- tie Wordplays- Ojuku Closer - giyazz, on point Mvgt - giyazz!!! Great battle! But this two battlers needs serious improvements Mostly giyazz Flux you got cray rhyming skills |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by JoeWendell: 10:52pm On Jan 19, 2017 |
GIYAZZ: You they tag your fans join? Those names that started the list aint regulars here. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Paayne(m): 11:06pm On Jan 19, 2017 |
Nice battle in general, nd nice verses from both shooters.. So here goes, Opener - 1pt - Giyaz (Lol, nice opening bar) Rhymes - 2pts - Fluxmind (giyaz wasn't all that consistent) Similes / metaphors - 2pts - Giyaz PunchLines - 3pts - Giyaz Personals - 2pts - Giyaz (lol, Flux..you no see strong personal wey you for use attack dis guy ni ) Flow - 1pt - Tie Wordplays - 2pts - Giyaz Closer - 1pt - Tie Giyaz - 9pts. Vs. Fluxmind. - 2pts (Damn!) So judging by Criteria, Mvgt------- Giyaz. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 12:15am On Jan 20, 2017 |
Thread closed GIYAZZ wins! |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by JoeWendell: 11:01am On Jan 20, 2017 |
Hahaha Flux, got whooped bad |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by JigsawKillah(m): 1:27pm On Jan 22, 2017 |
really? |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by JigsawKillah(m): 1:29pm On Jan 22, 2017 |
fluxmind: Decent! |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Nobody: 1:39pm On Jan 22, 2017 |
JigsawKillah: How do I get better with punchlines? Mine need work. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Limerick: 3:55pm On Jan 22, 2017 |
Giyaz, your last four rhymes were irritating as fûck. Work on your Rhymes, you are too rusty. MMM line was a KO though. 1 Like |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 5:10pm On Jan 22, 2017 |
Limerick:Are you for real? man. Lol. I see absolutely nothing wrong with those rhymes. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Chidexter(m): 6:51pm On Feb 07, 2017 |
Wow, nice one guys |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by liricyst(m): 9:04am On Feb 15, 2017 |
Fluxmind I like how you think. Your ideas are good, executions are okay. However, you should really look into your setups. In a bar, you join a lot of ideas together and it's not the best. I see you are pun inclined. Excellent. Now you have to lock down pun associations, connect from your setups to your end punch. see this: I hit G in that sweet Spot ... Like he's a shallow cünt. I loved this end punch....but the setups weren't in line with it. It made the bar look disjointed. |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Nobody: 10:36am On Feb 15, 2017 |
liricyst: I appreciate the tips bruh. Sometimes it's a little tricky for me to come up with a scheme for a bar, so basically I have to make every line related/connected. I'm evolving tho! 1 Like |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by GIYAZZ(m): 2:25am On Mar 04, 2017 |
liricyst:I swear it, i like the guy's steelo. He's got a lot of nice ideas. And i admire his rhyming style. If only he was here before now, and battled with more skilled opponents, he could have been a dangerous vet to be reckoned with by now, because he would have been forced to learn how to punch better after two or more challenging battles. Fluxmind is nice. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Paayne(m): 12:16pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
GIYAZZ: hope y'al will be there to vote when i battle flux on the 12th? |
Re: ~ ~ ~ **** Hell In A New Dawn *** ~ ~ ~ GIYAZZ Vs FLUXMIND ~ ~ ~ *** by Nobody: 3:27pm On Mar 04, 2017 |
Paayne: Oh & have Jiggy set it up. Should be a classic! |
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