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Wow. This is spellbound. Beautiful. Beautiful.

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Interesting

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Wat a great piece of literary work, following u bumper to bumper

Wow Second To Comment, Bro Nyc Story U Got Here More Grease To Yr Elbow,

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Welldone op, pls kip it cuming

#following.. More updates please..

I will do that tonight. Thanks for your comments.

Nyc Story Pls Try 2 Update More.

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In as much as the story is interesting, the use of big grammars in my opinion is too much, I noticed you used grammar for even the smallest words making it difficult for someone to understand what you are trying to say, you don't expect me to read a story with a dictionary by my side.

Try to reduce the use of big grammars please, make it easy for a layman to read and understand your story, but if of course your story isn't made for people like us then carry-on

loads of grammer in dis book... how do u aspect ur readers to understand what u av written pls write in a language pple can understand before its start getting boring...

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Yea I Tink U Change Yr Use Of English In dis Story. I Tink I Can Now Read And Enjoy Dis Story Without Kip Checkin D Dictionary. My Boss Abeg Fire On I Dey Yr Back.

Thanks @Holuwanoisy