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Pause: (poem :pls Read And Criticise) by goodieyar(f): 11:47am On Feb 09, 2010 |
[font=Lucida Sans Unicode][/font] PAUSE When you walk by , I can not help but stare. When you look in my direction , I can not help but overreact. When you speak to me i just want to press PAUSE, I just want to savour the moment and hold you in my arms because when I unfreeze, We're back, , back, back to reality, Where I can not hold you . I do not want anything from you, All I want is to know you feel my presence, what is going on in you mind? But that's never going to happen , so, PLAY |
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