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Re: The Hole In The Wall by DzTzl(f): 8:01am On Mar 25, 2018
lemme join Andy and ask "what the hell is going on"?

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Ayoshewa12(f): 8:16am On Mar 25, 2018
Thanks for the dedication sir Souloho,Lot of love ❤ wink wink wink grin

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by HORLADSTAR(m): 11:51am On Mar 25, 2018
DzTzl:
lemme join Andy and ask "what the hell is going on"?
SECONDED
Re: The Hole In The Wall by dimssy(m): 12:17pm On Mar 25, 2018
HORLADSTAR:
This suspense is killing me broshockedshocked cool

I tell you....it's Palm Sunday....brother Souloho19, come and give someone palm Sunday update jare.

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Charminee(f): 12:56pm On Mar 25, 2018
Ghen ghen ghen ghen

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Joislim(f): 2:00pm On Mar 25, 2018
I'm comfortably seated in this Venza not knowing the direction we are headed.

I trust our driver 'soul, he will maneuver us to a great destination.

Ride on bro, we are with you.

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by queenitee(f): 2:50pm On Mar 25, 2018
Ah, thanks for the dedication.
Fome bawo? She's dead nau?

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by JONSYN7154(m): 4:44pm On Mar 25, 2018
Joislim:
I'm just comfortably seated in this Venza without knowing the direction we are headed.

I trust our driver 'soul, he will maneuver us to a great destination.

Ride on bro, we are with you.
you too like story. story no dey tire you madam JOISLIM
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Joislim(f): 4:48pm On Mar 25, 2018
JONSYN7154:
you too like story. story no dey tire you madam JOISLIM
good evening sir
Re: The Hole In The Wall by JONSYN7154(m): 5:23pm On Mar 25, 2018
Joislim:
good evening sir
Good evening my runaway friend. I'm in Texas o.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by meneski(m): 6:07pm On Mar 25, 2018
Fome! Dis cant be... Shey na person way don die? Anyway thanks for de dedication.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Joislim(f): 8:22pm On Mar 25, 2018
JONSYN7154:
Good evening my runaway friend. I'm in Texas o.
okay Sir, welcome
Re: The Hole In The Wall by EkopSparoAyara(m): 12:58am On Mar 26, 2018
Thanks Mr Souloho for the mention.. Please for future reference,it's Ayara not Araya...

So Mr Souloho has decided to raise Fome from dead and label her a potential suspect just the same way he did with Olivia.. Issoryt.. Lemme watch and see who follows next.. But as it stands, my own is Souloho19 is the prime suspect until he reveals who the suspect is, lol..
It's getting hot, exciting and unpredictable, the OP's best tools..
Bravo Souloho..

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by EkopSparoAyara(m): 1:01am On Mar 26, 2018
Oroolorun:
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Can some1 b so stupid, an agent 4 that matter, committed murder and yet put down her real name? Mrs Obasi is not that stupid.
Obviously...Someone is playing games..
Re: The Hole In The Wall by WHOcarex: 8:06am On Mar 26, 2018
I got the mention wink

Well, I always have the feeling that the one that got lost in the smoking house must have escaped. Well, let see how you will twist it again grin

Fome still dey para for Rex that why she used the wife's name grin

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Damibiz(m): 5:34pm On Mar 26, 2018
Damibiz don showwww,Guccqueen come nd see American wounder......my guy frm the devil wears Okrika at work

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 5:39pm On Mar 26, 2018
Nostradamus:
hi souloho nice story here, keep on the creativity.the link above is not opening

The antispam kept on editing it..and even banned me after my first reply its actually after the https// chat (dot) what's app (dot) com / then the rest I.e the (GY2ALLvM......)
Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 5:40pm On Mar 26, 2018
Damibiz:
Damibiz don showwww,Guccqueen come nd see American wounder......my guy frm the devil wears Okrika at work

Welcome ma niggy
Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 5:51pm On Mar 26, 2018
Ayoshewa12:
Thanks for the dedication sir Souloho,Lot of love ❤ wink wink wink grin
You welcome dear smiley

phoenixchap:
Souloho19, you are always killing it, I duff my hat and you timely updates I just can't deny you this comment.

Thanks a mil bro..Jah bless

Oroolorun:
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You very welcome bro

chisiudeh:
Baba souloho19 you too much. Before it was olivia now it's fome. Hmmm who is the next in this twist. Keep the suspense up jarey. I'm happy though that Olivia is not the suspect.

Lol...to be honest me too...Olivia is the perfect saint in my eyes

DzTzl:
lemme join Andy and ask "what the hell is going on"?

Haha..serious I'm even confused

HORLADSTAR:

SECONDED
Thirded

dimssy:

D
I tell you....it's Palm Sunday....brother Souloho19, come and give someone palm Sunday update jare.
Don't worry its coming bro

Charminee:
Ghen ghen ghen ghen
grin grin cheesy nice suspense sound track

Joislim:
I'm comfortably seated in this Venza not knowing the direction we are headed.

I trust our driver 'soul, he will maneuver us to a great destination.

Ride on bro, we are with you.

Lol...thanks dear in fact I must turn F1 driver

queenitee:
Ah, thanks for the dedication.
Fome bawo? She's dead nau?

Hehehe...maybe she went ghost mode

meneski:
Fome! Dis cant be... Shey na person way don die? Anyway thanks for de dedication.

You welcome bro...make we just dey watch as e dey go

EkopSparoAyara:

Obviously...Someone is playing games..

That one is sure...very deadly games

WHOcarex:
I got the mention wink

Well, I always have the feeling that the one that got lost in the smoking house must have escaped. Well, let see how you will twist it again grin

Fome still dey para for Rex that why she used the wife's name grin

Haha..I actually agree with your last paragraph, you welcome on board bro

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 6:02pm On Mar 26, 2018
Chater 5


What!!!!??

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I was standing, legs shaking and a great deal of apprehension in my heart. My eyes burned..a fiery bright red mirroring the horror I watched. The flames burnt brightly into the night as the roof collapsed with a crash. Fomé was dead, blown apart in the explosion and her remains were now no doubt burning with the house.
I could still feel the heat.
I could still feel the pain...so raw, the guilt...if only I hadn't released the gas...if only...


"What the hell is happening?" Andy asked again "how can that be possible...the print belonging to Fomé?"

I snapped out of my trance and shook my head trying to clear the lingering images "it has to be some kind of mistake...the system obviously made an error."

Tonye nodded "but you know in our business we need to consider everything as a possibility..you all know that"

There was silence. I looked at Bami he seemed to be in his own trance.

"Is it possible Fomé survived that night?" Tonye asked
Andy looked at me "I wasn't there but Fomé died that night"

"Well I was there and before my eyes the house went up in flames" Bami found his voice finally.

I nodded yet to find mine. After the explosion I had slipped out of the compound and gone straight to Andy's house.
Bami had been in the compound including the chief and his two children not to mention a handful of agents. The ones who hadn't gone into the house before the explosion. Not to also mention the two dead bodies on the floor belonging to the old assassin woman and Mona....Mona, Andy's wife and Fomé's sister. I shivered

"Rex are you okay?" Tonye asked worriedly
I nodded again.
"So is it possible that maybe she got out of the house before the explosion?" Tonye asked her husband.

Bami shook his head. "The fire didn't burn for long before we put it out. And infact we saw her remains....as well as D.y and Alpha's team"

Tonye was nodding sorrowfully at the memory of the fallen agents. "I remember.....this case is indeed a peculiar one"

I found my voice suddenly. "The body...the body is the answer...we exhume it and match the DNA...that's the only way to know."
"Isn't that a bit extreme" Tonye said
"No he's right but I don't know where the body is" Bami affirmed. I knew he also needed to know as much as I did.

"I do" me and Andy said together.



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Olivia



"See Rex that you said would call us later...its 8:30 already" her father in law said as he leaned back and burped discreetly.

"I don't know what's keeping him...maybe he forgot" Olivia said as she cleared the dishes from the table. They had just finished dinner which consisted of semovita and banga soup.

She carried the dishes to the kitchen and was surprised to find Utebo already at the zinc washing.
"Don't worry go and relax eh...I think Emma has slept off." her sister in law said with a smile.

Olivia checked her daughter in the parlour and true enough she was sprawled on the couch sleeping, the twin boys weren't running around now but focused on the television which was still on.

'I killed an eel, I buried its guts, sprouted a tree now you got coconuts, what is the lesson what is the takeaway don't mess with Maui when he's on a breakaway.....' The cartoon was still on and a huge man covered in tattoos was rapping rather impressively.

She carried her daughter noticing the twins were yawning sleepily. " oya its time to sleep..your food would have digested by now" she said before the boys could protest. That was always their line to stay up longer at night. They were smart boys.

When Emma was on the bed asleep she called her husband. "Have you booked the flight?"
"My assistant should have done it..check your inbox or your mail for the details."
"Rex..are you okay?" She asked
"Yea...I'm fine" he replied. But he sounded somehow...she couldn't place her hand on it but he didn't sound 'fine'.
"You forgot to call your parents and I told them you would call tonight"
"Oh...I totally forgot...I'd call my mom right away" he sounded absent minded.
"Are you sure you're okay?" She asked worriedly.
"Yea I'm fine, I'd see you tomorrow"
"Okay goodnight dear"




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?? ?? ??


The room was clustered. It was a small room, store size actually and the only furniture was a table and chair. The latter was presently occupied by a woman and she sat hunched over the desk looking intensely at the papers before her. Mostly newspaper articles and press clippings.

The bulb swung a little once in a while and it tilted now dimming her view, she sat straight and studied the wall at the pictures.
On the left was a picture of a good looking man in his late 20s. To the right was a lady also in her late 20s, she was beautiful and had a beautiful radiant smile. In between both pictures in the middle was a beautiful baby girl. She had a happy smile that was much like the woman's own and she actually had much features of both the man and the lady.

On the picture of the small girl, her face had been circled with a marker. A blue marker.
And under the picture was the name; Emmanuella Obasi.

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by dimssy(m): 7:28pm On Mar 26, 2018
Ahnnn...oga Souloho19...the update small na.

Thanks though.
Hope the day was worth it sah....
Cheers to strength through the week

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Damibiz(m): 9:39pm On Mar 26, 2018
Thanks man...na work na e make ur guy never comment all this time
souloho19:


Welcome ma niggy
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Ayoshewa12(f): 10:48pm On Mar 26, 2018
Thanks for the update sir,Eh! Fome don't kill Emmy o angry > angry

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by EkopSparoAyara(m): 12:29am On Mar 27, 2018
...And he just introduced a mysterious character into this suspenseful suspense.. A lady for that matter??
Who could she possibly be?? Obviously,she is deadlier than Late Mr Kehinde, the last of the shadows,murdered in hot...sorry cold blood..
Bravo Souloho..

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by SleekHoyeen(f): 8:01am On Mar 27, 2018
Wow! I just got to see the mention. Thanks. Souloho is here again! #following
Re: The Hole In The Wall by queenitee(f): 9:04am On Mar 27, 2018
My poor baby
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Eberechi24(f): 9:10am On Mar 27, 2018
grin :Dghen ghen ghen this isnt yet the beginning we are stil exploring the prologue
Soul the mind twist well done!
Re: The Hole In The Wall by mitchelljnr(m): 10:30am On Mar 27, 2018
Hope the killer is not planning to kill his daughter ooo, more ink to ur pen souloho19

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by labelle123(f): 10:41am On Mar 27, 2018
The suspense is killing update please loving this story like kilode

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by jupitre(m): 11:26am On Mar 27, 2018
Souloho19..thanks for calling me bro..For Emma's picture to be circled,it means she's the next target....

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by meneski(m): 2:50pm On Mar 27, 2018
ok oh...it ok

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by chii8(f): 5:23pm On Mar 27, 2018
To the men, some girls won't let go easily if you mess with them.

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