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Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Iyaomolere4(m): 8:19am On Sep 25, 2018
please everyone, now that this awesome story has ended,who can recommend another story here or elsewhere for me to read,something as powerful as this
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by queenitee(f): 8:32am On Sep 25, 2018
gentlegenius:

I was once in Ken's shoes... I dated a young girl about 2 years ago and I was very sure she loved me. But her attitude towards me was very inconsistent. Today she will act like I mean everything to her and she can't live without me. Tomorrow she'll act like I don't mean anything to her or I'm not even part of her life. This got me thinking and wondering what is it that she really wants. Sometimes, she'll behave like we are quarreling when actually nothing gone wrong between us. I used to ask her why she's behaving so warm and cold towards me but she wouldn't have any answer to that. I finally resorted to playing by her rules: Any day she acted warm and loving towards me, I will also act warm and loving towards her. Any day she acted cold and unfriendly towards me, I will simply pay her back with her own coin. With this development, I stopped complaining about her attitude. But I noticed that she, on her own side, wasn't happy to be displaying such attitude towards me, and yet she couldn't stop it. I began to see it as a psychological problem, and I decided to help her overcome it. But unfortunately, she was doing everything possible to prevent me from helping her, and that includes avoiding me sometimes. When her avoidance became too much and too obvious, I resorted back to the rules of the game: paying her back in her own coins. But this time, I went too far... She noticed that I have gone extra miles to show her that I can also avoid her. Sometimes, she'll come to my house with a look of remorse on her face - behaving as if she feels deeply sorry and want to apologize to me, but I will ignore her and continue with the avoiding game. This whole thing baffles me so much because I loved her and I was very sure she loved me. I was always wondering what could make her behave this way towards someone she loved. It was difficult to either continue dating her or let her go.
One day, I read Gary Chapman's book 'Things I wished I had known before marriage'.
This book opened my eyes and I saw the exact reason why she was behaving that way and why changing her was almost impossible. I learned a great lesson that before a man considers a lady for a serious relationship or marriage, he should first of all find out about her mother's attitude especially towards her father... Just like what happened in this story, I discovered that my girlfriend's mother had a very bad attitude and she was constantly fighting and quarreling with her father until they finally seperated.
So, the constant fights, quarrel and sometimes warm, sometimes cold relationship between her parents did not only affect the girls character, but it molded her and shaped her thoughts and emotions to resemble that of her mother; and because it affected her entire being, it was almost impossible for another person apart from her parents to influence or change her.
Back to our story, Ken wouldn't have been able to change Grace no matter how hard he tried, but now that her mother is beginning to talk sense into her, and show her regrets for treating her late husband so coldly, it is possible for her to influence Grace and change her. For it is only the same people that impacted us negatively with their character flaws that can easily influence us to correct those flaws and change.

This to me was an important lesson, that's why I took time to write this.

In case you see this as a useless distraction from the story... I humbly apologize.
Thanks for this
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by queenitee(f): 8:41am On Sep 25, 2018
Thank you for this beautiful story
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by dimssy(m): 9:59am On Sep 25, 2018
This is some deep stuffz bro.....to get serious with a lady?guy is to stop saying love is blind but gat to open up to the real things that matter....was a good read
gentlegenius:

I was once in Ken's shoes... I dated a young girl about 2 years ago and I was very sure she loved me. But her attitude towards me was very inconsistent. Today she will act like I mean everything to her and she can't live without me. Tomorrow she'll act like I don't mean anything to her or I'm not even part of her life. This got me thinking and wondering what is it that she really wants. Sometimes, she'll behave like we are quarreling when actually nothing gone wrong between us. I used to ask her why she's behaving so warm and cold towards me but she wouldn't have any answer to that. I finally resorted to playing by her rules: Any day she acted warm and loving towards me, I will also act warm and loving towards her. Any day she acted cold and unfriendly towards me, I will simply pay her back with her own coin. With this development, I stopped complaining about her attitude. But I noticed that she, on her own side, wasn't happy to be displaying such attitude towards me, and yet she couldn't stop it. I began to see it as a psychological problem, and I decided to help her overcome it. But unfortunately, she was doing everything possible to prevent me from helping her, and that includes avoiding me sometimes. When her avoidance became too much and too obvious, I resorted back to the rules of the game: paying her back in her own coins. But this time, I went too far... She noticed that I have gone extra miles to show her that I can also avoid her. Sometimes, she'll come to my house with a look of remorse on her face - behaving as if she feels deeply sorry and want to apologize to me, but I will ignore her and continue with the avoiding game. This whole thing baffles me so much because I loved her and I was very sure she loved me. I was always wondering what could make her behave this way towards someone she loved. It was difficult to either continue dating her or let her go.
One day, I read Gary Chapman's book 'Things I wished I had known before marriage'.
This book opened my eyes and I saw the exact reason why she was behaving that way and why changing her was almost impossible. I learned a great lesson that before a man considers a lady for a serious relationship or marriage, he should first of all find out about her mother's attitude especially towards her father... Just like what happened in this story, I discovered that my girlfriend's mother had a very bad attitude and she was constantly fighting and quarreling with her father until they finally seperated.
So, the constant fights, quarrel and sometimes warm, sometimes cold relationship between her parents did not only affect the girls character, but it molded her and shaped her thoughts and emotions to resemble that of her mother; and because it affected her entire being, it was almost impossible for another person apart from her parents to influence or change her.
Back to our story, Ken wouldn't have been able to change Grace no matter how hard he tried, but now that her mother is beginning to talk sense into her, and show her regrets for treating her late husband so coldly, it is possible for her to influence Grace and change her. For it is only the same people that impacted us negatively with their character flaws that can easily influence us to correct those flaws and change.

This to me was an important lesson, that's why I took time to write this.

In case you see this as a useless distraction from the story... I humbly apologize.
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Eberechi24(f): 11:44am On Sep 25, 2018
Hi baby, you doing a great doing here, you are healing so many soul, you raising women with substance, you are strengthen the weak with your story. so many scene in your story is everyday life of a Nigerian girl. I pray we get it right with the right person.


I can't help appreciating you. I would like to keep in touch outside here, hope you don't mind?
ps, you didn't add disclaimers and copyright at the beginning of your story.
Rosemary33

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Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by paulohgirlie(f): 2:41pm On Sep 25, 2018
Rosemary33:
I am torn between starting the "Victims" series now and starting it next week. I will be traveling tomorrow and network will be a huge problem where I am going to, so I may not be consistent with the posting till I get back on Sunday.

What do you guys think??



Start the "Victims", we can adapt to d network issue till u re back

Thank u Rosemary33

May your rose continue to flourish. cheesy
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by queenitee(f): 10:10pm On Sep 25, 2018
paulohgirlie:




Start the "Victims", we can adapt to d network issue till u re back

Thank u Rosemary33

May your rose continue to flourish. cheesy
I agree with you.
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Ibunkun1(m): 11:03pm On Sep 25, 2018
Rosemary33:
I am torn between starting the "Victims" series now and starting it next week. I will be traveling tomorrow and network will be a huge problem where I am going to, so I may not be consistent with the posting till I get back on Sunday.

What do you guys think??
Well.It Depends On The Number Of Days You Will Spend Where You Are going.If You Won't Stay long I Prefer You Start Now
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Jesutourmewer(m): 3:45am On Sep 26, 2018
What a wonderful story. God bless your ink and empower you more with his wisdom richly. Kudos
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Hada2020: 5:54pm On Sep 26, 2018
An interesting story, more ink to your pen, you are going places, you write so well being your first time.
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by FortunateB(f): 2:44pm On Oct 01, 2018
If you enjoyed this story, please vote for Rosemary33 for the October award, she deserve the award, as a first timer she nailed this story.

I have vote for her please let's all do, let it be her payment for this wonderful story she fed us with.
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 6:27am On Oct 03, 2018
I have started "The Victims" o. I don't know how to tag people on it grin Any idea?
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 6:28am On Oct 03, 2018
Eberechi24:
Hi baby, you doing a great doing here, you are healing so many soul, you raising women with substance, you are strengthen the weak with your story. so many scene in your story is everyday life of a Nigerian girl. I pray we get it right with the right person.


I can't help appreciating you. I would like to keep in touch outside here, hope you don't mind?
ps, you didn't add disclaimers and copyright at the beginning of your story. Thank you so much, I am glad and grateful
Rosemary33
Thank you so much, I am glad that this story is making impact on people. And I am grateful to you and every other person for reading.

As for copyright, I am working on getting one, this work was fresh and in progress as I was posting, meaning that I was writing and posting, but I have applied for copyright certificate for it and other works too.

I have started another series "the victims"

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Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 7:20am On Oct 03, 2018
Please click on the link to follow the new series "the victims " https://www.nairaland.com/4766281/victims-fiction#71730311
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 10:23am On Oct 03, 2018
While we are at it, I am also dropping a series of short finished stories, you might want to check it out "THE MASK AND OTHER STORIES"https://www.nairaland.com/4767058/mask-other-short-story#71741967

I am running both"the victims" and "the mask and other stories" concurrently

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Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Ibunkun1(m): 9:45am On Oct 06, 2018
Wow.I'm In
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 4:10pm On Jan 12
I am back to update my two stories.

Check out new updates on "the mask and other stories" and "the victims". cool cool
Re: Kiss Me One More Night - Fiction by Rosemary33: 4:22pm On Jan 12
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