sosa993:


Hey guys! I'm so sorry about the delay. I was emotionally down yesterday. My book got rejected by a publisher friend but now I'm back. Your reads and comments keeps me going. Thanks a lot.

Sorry about that, dissapointments are part of life, don't be discouraged, keep working hard and improving yourself, you'll go places.

Culin:


Sorry about that, dissapointments are part of life, don't be discouraged, keep working hard and improving yourself, you'll go places.

Thanks for your kind words.

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Ouch! That was too rude of fibi's mum. Poor Aaron.

Condemned soul! That's harsh!
Aaron you are in big soup

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Who could have seen Fib?
Well done OP

When are u updating next? Today's nice

Could be Leinad..

GeoSilYe:
Could be Leinad..

Could be, but I doubt that. Could be someone new, someone whom she least expected to see or recognise.

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I knew something was up with Leinad
Thanks for the update

That son of a gun,I knew there was something fishy about him,thank God Amara the guardian warrior was there to save fib
Nice update pls keep it coming,I really enjoyed the thrills and a young seer discovering her gift when it matters most

I enjoyed this episode, the detailed actions. It thrilled me. You did well explaining how the fight went down. You'd be a good action thriller novelist. Seeing Fibi doing the animal mind control thing, I just wish it was me. Man, Lions would be my bodyguards, Gorillas too . Would be fun

Nice work Sosa. *applauding*

You're such a great writer Sosa993, I'm in love with you

Hey guys! This is not an update but just in case you like books so much and would like to subscribe to one.

The Quirkypen Girl(my blog) might be the right fit for you.

https://quirkypengirl..com/p/home-page.html?m=1

Pinkberry5:
You're such a great writer Sosa993, I'm in love with you

Thank you

Fazemood:
I enjoyed this episode, the detailed actions. It thrilled me. You did well explaining how the fight went down. You'd be a good action thriller novelist. Seeing Fibi doing the animal mind control thing, I just wish it was me. Man, Lions would be my bodyguards, Gorillas too . Would be fun

Nice work Sosa. *applauding*

I'm glad you liked this chapter

dawno2008:
That son of a gun,I knew there was something fishy about him,thank God Amara the guardian warrior was there to save fib
Nice update pls keep it coming,I really enjoyed the thrills and a young seer discovering her gift when it matters most

Thanks for reading

Ann2012:
I knew something was up with Leinad
Thanks for the update

Thank you

Pinkberry5:
You're such a great writer Sosa993, I'm in love with you

Ahem. *clear throat* sorry

The bombest update!!

Culin:
The bombest update!!

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Oh my God! Who's dead?

Who's dead oooo?

Thanks for the update OP

Who is dead Sosa?

wow.... u have got great potentials.... more wisdom, ideas & knowledge fall on you.

Hello Sosa993. i gotta say, i like your writing technique. im a fantasy/sci-fi writer myself. that said. i think the time is due for good writers to start getting paid for their work. im trying to build a team of prolific and talented writers who can produce fantastic short stories to be compiled into a book. you will be paid for every story accepted. if you're interested heres my email. mikun155@yahoo.com. contact me. thanks.

I guess lilian is dead

Deep sigh. I thought you was meant to drop a new chapter tonight. After waiting the whole day, its saddening

I'm sorry to say but there won't be a new chapter tonight. Had a busy day. Stay tuned for tomorrow by 9pm