Welcome, Guest: Join Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / New
Stats: 2,673,521 members, 6,287,779 topics. Date: Thursday, 13 May 2021 at 08:26 PM

Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). - Literature (31) - Nairaland

Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). (162356 Views)

The Madam At The Top (18+) / She's My Madam Last Episode / My Madam And I (part Two) (2) (3) (4)

(1) (2) (3) ... (28) (29) (30) (31) (32) (Reply) (Go Down)

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Austeeenxx: 8:31am On May 23, 2019
To be fair, i'm quite satisfied with the ending of this story.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Uncleodi(m): 3:21pm On May 23, 2019
extremelygolden:
This story can not end ooo. End ke?


So after passing out, the fat guy decided that he cannot let Mike die. He placed an urgent call to his gang's private doctor. Thank God he was able to revive Mike after series of surgery to extract the bullets.

Phila is now agitated wondering where on earth Mike has gone to and while his number is not connecting. Jaz and Sly needed to see Frozen urgently because there's a package to deliver first thing tomorrow morning.

Esther has gotten to Frozen's house but was told he left home five days ago and couldn't be reached via the phone. Everyone thought he probably has absconded from duty, but Esther is sure that Frozen is not the type to quit so easily.

Meanwhile, Phila is confused and feels that should anything happen to Mike, she might be held responsible. Esther on her own was wondering who Phila is, but that's a matter for another time. The most important thing now is finding out where the hell Frozen has gone to.

Mike woke up in a strange room. He couldn't remember how he got there, but his recovery is even faster than both the fat guy and the doctor anticipated....

Topher052, see now, this story never finish nah. Mike's son cannot be orphaned nah. Mike needs to visit Nigeria even once to flaunt his new acquired wealth, etc.

Thank you very much for keeping me glued to Nairaland these months with your amazing story. You are indeed a great writer. Kudos.



My brother, you don talk am finish.



The one wey de pain me badly be say Mike never even buy Benz him come die, shoo!



Who wan chop all that plenty money we him arrange for house??



Boys dey wait you for Efurun ooh, ready de come.


No be so nah Topher052.

2 Likes

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by topedoski(m): 3:26pm On May 23, 2019
ugnoble:
Honestly I think Topher052 rushed this story courtesy of those who have been requesting for an end. There are many twist to add to the story but some people just wouldn't allow him. Oya make una chop end now. Topher052 Abeg this story must continue ooo. I no gree at all. Interesting story though, thumbs up.
Like say u dey my mind the ending of this story is very very far from were we stopped.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by elmagnifico411(m): 9:14am On May 24, 2019
Topher, this story never suppose end oh! Walahi, e no sweet me. Mike did not shag the sweet-smelling and beautiful Phila. Why And to think again sey most yankee movies actor no Dey die, u need come tell us sey d guy wake up again like John snow, come travel back go celebrate with Phila and him son. What a night of sweet love-making it woulda been.

U just turn everything to Russell crowe matter for ‘gladiators ‘ the thing no sweet me oh.. now I’ve been looking for what else to read.

2 Likes

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by wonderjewel: 9:10pm On May 24, 2019
Guys please let's turn up for topher052 by voting massively for him in the ongoing Nairaland literature contest.He has been nominated for the grand seat category. Let's show him love by voting for him.He truly deserves to win.

2 Likes

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by CaZmir: 12:22am On May 25, 2019
Y'all should show Topher052 some love by voting him for the grand seat, he truly deserves it.


Let's bring it home, your vote counts.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by ChristineC: 9:55am On May 25, 2019
It was worthwhile grin grin grin
Good scripting bro.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by ChristineC: 9:58am On May 25, 2019
wonderjewel:
Guys please let's turn up for topher052 by voting massively for him in the ongoing Nairaland literature contest.He has been nominated for the grand seat category. Let's show him love by voting for him.He truly deserves to win.
link
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by wonderjewel: 2:53pm On May 25, 2019
For those asking how they can vote for topher052,just open the thread of the Nairaland literature sanctuary contest in the literature section and mention topher052 as the candidate you are voting for.
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by topher052: 3:36pm On May 25, 2019
wonderjewel:
Guys please let's turn up for topher052 by voting massively for him in the ongoing Nairaland literature contest.He has been nominated for the grand seat category. Let's show him love by voting for him.He truly deserves to win.
Please on Nairaland?
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Amb25: 3:44pm On May 25, 2019
topher052:
Please on Nairaland?
yes on Nairaland it's closing on the 28th of may. pls vote for Topher052.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Osaib: 4:05am On May 26, 2019
Amb25:


yes on Nairaland it's closing on the 28th of may. pls vote for Topher052.

Please how do I vote? The guy is really great and his story superp.
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by wonderjewel: 4:34am On May 26, 2019
Osaib:


Please how do I vote? The guy is really great and his story superp.

For those asking how they can vote for topher052,just open the thread of the Nairaland literature sanctuary contest in the literature section and mention topher052 as the candidate you are voting for.
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Amb25: 7:06am On May 26, 2019
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by ugnoble: 12:22pm On May 26, 2019
This is the link for those who haven't voted for him yet.

https://www.nairaland.com/5198678/nairaland-literature-sanctuary-forever-contest
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by franksunny(m): 5:22pm On May 26, 2019
metalgear11:
I applaud you for the efforts you made in your story. However, I feel you kinda rushed the conclusion. I had this "unfinished, rushed" and sort of unsatisfying feeling about the end. Like you didn't know the best way to end it properly. To me, it felt like a meal you've been savoring, enjoying the taste, but along the line you begin to lose interest in the meal, then when you are beginning to enjoy it again, your plate is taken away.

I figured out Mike was gonna die at some point. The build up was sort of abrupt to be honest. What then happened to others? how did they react? How about those he left behind at home? I assume he was killed in a totally different country from where he had his base with Sly and Jaz. The hired assassins didn't know him from Adam. How would you have then "gathered every detail from friends and family, every one he ever met during his life time"? And what happened to his and Amaka's child? These are but some questions that were left hanging and left me with my conclusions.

I believe you might have run out of ideas on how to end the story, and i honestly feel it dragged on for too long, especially with the repetitive plots but different characters, but that doesn't take away the fact that you came up with a good story. You just need a bit of improvements here and there.
I give the honor of commenting on this thread for the first time, but I don't agree with you on your assertion. Still no time for me to express myself, no vex for me
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Kaodek(m): 5:40pm On May 26, 2019
Congratulations @OP

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by naturecures: 6:03pm On May 26, 2019
he followed this stories to the last last paragraph. perfect end great lesson for me on sex. thanks Frozen
we can help you pay manufacturers on 1688 very cheap, yes I mean cheap just say Hi via whatsapp 08139633009
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Gleefreak125(m): 5:19pm On May 27, 2019
Seriously
This is how this story ends? Shocking is the least I can say. I'm sure the OP has better things to work on, hence, the reason for this abrupt end to the interesting story. It was a wonderful read I must say. That you for all the good times. Following your next story asap. God bless you bro.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by metalgear11(m): 8:32pm On May 27, 2019
franksunny:
I give the honor of commenting on this thread for the first time, but I don't agree with you on your assertion. Still no time for me to express myself, no vex for me

Everyone is entitled to his/her own opinion about things. That's what makes the world go round.

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Nobody: 6:10pm On May 28, 2019
Wooooowww this is wonderful!
You are such a great writer Topher.
I really enjoyed this piece, this is the first adventure piece I'll sit myself to read through, if it is not ghost or intra-universe stories then it's nothing but this hooked me. Thumbs up Bro.

I can see so many agitations on why you concluded the story like that, but seriously that's what a good writer does, you have to leave us hanging, in suspense hoping and curious for what to come and then you hit the jinx and make us go haywire lolz that's how it's been done, thanks. More ink to your pen.

And the moral lesson to learn is of great impact, you've told us why we young men shouldn't engage in indiscriminate sex, sex with anything putting on skirt, I love that too, God bless you and stay great!

2 Likes

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by kpaofame: 12:18pm On May 29, 2019
lovely

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by topher052: 2:46pm On May 30, 2019
Tosinex:
Wooooowww this is wonderful!
You are such a great writer Topher.
I really enjoyed this piece, this is the first adventure piece I'll sit myself to read through, if it is not ghost or intra-universe stories then it's nothing but this hooked me. Thumbs up Bro.

I can see so many agitations on why you concluded the story like that, but seriously that's what a good writer does, you have to leave us hanging, in suspense hoping and curious for what to come and then you hit the jinx and make us go haywire lolz that's how it's been done, thanks. More ink to your pen.

And the moral lesson to learn is of great impact, you've told us why we young men shouldn't engage in indiscriminate sex, sex with anything putting on skirt, I love that too, God bless you and stay great!
follow me, and join in the new season
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Kaodek(m): 3:26pm On Jun 07, 2019
topher052:
follow me, and join in the new season

Link pls?

1 Like 2 Shares

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Nayo08(m): 7:41pm On Jun 07, 2019
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by tcharrisson(m): 4:15pm On Jun 09, 2019
Please can anyone direct me to the start of the story. My madam and I. I only read the continuation
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by topher052: 5:53pm On Jun 09, 2019
tcharrisson:
Please can anyone direct me to the start of the story. My madam and I. I only read the continuation


https://www.nairaland.com/topherchris819

1 Like 1 Share

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by jjbest123(m): 5:08am On Oct 02, 2019
Thanks @Topher for the entainment. More knowledge to you bro

1 Like 1 Share

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Goddeywithme: 2:56pm On Oct 26, 2019
Frozen
Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Goddeywithme: 10:30pm On Oct 31, 2019
topher052:
fOLLOW: THE DEVILS TOUCH

Topher, u are a good writer. You are up there with Chinua Achebe and Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie. I hope u have plans to write a full novel which u will publish. U are really good.

Pls, while I enjoyed the free entertainment of My Madam and I, while I appreciate that some guys here gave u something, I encourage u to publish. Consider all avenues through which u can achieve ur aim. Consider ebooks. But u would have to develop a story line to be big enough to be a novel. U will make it man. U will be big like Adichie and Achebe and other big Nigerian writers. God bless

1 Like

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by topher052: 8:01am On Nov 01, 2019
Goddeywithme:


Topher, u are a good writer. You are up there with Chinua Achebe and Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie. I hope u have plans to write a full novel which u will publish. U are really good.

Pls, while I enjoyed the free entertainment of My Madam and I, while I appreciate that some guys here gave u something, I encourage u to publish. Consider all avenues through which u can achieve ur aim. Consider ebooks. But u would have to develop a story line to be big enough to be a novel. U will make it man. U will be big like Adichie and Achebe and other big Nigerian writers. God bless

I'm blushing boss. Thanks so much. Im trying to get there by Gods grace. Please follow the sacrifice, chapter 35 now.

2 Likes

Re: Continuation Of My Madam And I(from Family Group And Sexuality). by Goddeywithme: 11:13am On Nov 01, 2019
topher052:


I'm blushing boss. Thanks so much. Im trying to get there by Gods grace. Please follow the sacrifice, chapter 35 now.

About 5 years ago, I would have sponsored u to publish. I was young, I had money. I did a lot of good for people. But now, I have a lot of responsibilities. But I will pray for u bro. Keep it up. I follow ur stories bumper to bumper

(1) (2) (3) ... (28) (29) (30) (31) (32) (Reply)

The Complete Assassin / Friday The 13th-Assassins Creed / Ogechi & I

(Go Up)

Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health
religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket

Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10)

Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2021 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 143
Disclaimer: Every Nairaland member is solely responsible for anything that he/she posts or uploads on Nairaland.