am actually a newbie in poem writing, but I tried something out anyways, and it lead to this...a review or critic won't be bad.


*BREATHING IDOLS*
Alluringly intoxicating
Like a seductive beast
Tentacles clothes in ornaments
How can I resist thee
Sweet dimensional sedictive
Our spirit copulates - bornes addiction.


The poem talks about the things that takes our time these days, most times it turns out to be an addiction while we devote a whole lot of time in it, we sometimes value and cherish it like a god