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Re: The Rabbi (+18) by royalguy123(m): 11:48am On May 14, 2020 |
Sorry guys was a bit Ill..jux hope say no be coro Sha..but I'll try my best to be up and doing.. Wishing you speedy recovery in JESUS NAME AMEN!!! |
Re: The Rabbi (+18) by Cipherson(m): 3:13pm On May 14, 2020 |
Nice story. Although I think you need to add this sign. * * * * * * ** * * * * * * So as to tell us that you are writing another scene Just a suggestion 2 Likes |
Re: The Rabbi (+18) by Cipherson(m): 5:00pm On May 22, 2020 |
Looks like erudite has got to his writer's block Bro we are still waiting... |
Re: The Rabbi (+18) by KelvinCoaster(m): 3:54pm On May 23, 2020 |
Erudite0000 you are doing a good job!Your sentences are near perfect with good illustration. However,you should spend more time describing event especially if such events lead to an anticlimax.Your plot should also be connected with the next scene. You are good to go! More power to your elbow. |
Re: The Rabbi (+18) by Commander008: 11:54pm On May 25, 2020 |
OP keep the good work going please don't relent we your readers are really glad with your choice of words,so therefore we encourage you to do more,please listen to our appeal and give us updates back to back |
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