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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Thebigdream: 7:07am On Mar 16
Mr silver hope you haven't forgotten us
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by AgainstIslam(f): 4:22am On Mar 17
Th
Thebigdream:
Mr silver hope you haven't forgotten us

That is one of the problems I have with Silver1996. He just disappears without giving reason until you lose interest in the story.

But he's talented. Just needs to work on his spellings, punctuation and grammar and he might just become the Chinua Achebe of our time.

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Vidamia(m): 7:18am On Mar 17
AgainstIslam:
Th

That is one of the problems I have with Silver1996. He just disappears without giving reason until you lose interest in the story.

But he's talented. Just needs to work on his spellings, punctuation and grammar and he might just become the Chinua Achebe of our time.
On my previous comments, I have said how the story will goes and I think that drop his morale to continue the story

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 8:29pm On Mar 17
AgainstIslam:
Th

That is one of the problems I have with Silver1996. He just disappears without giving reason until you lose interest in the story.

But he's talented. Just needs to work on his spellings, punctuation and grammar and he might just become the Chinua Achebe of our time.
I'm really sorry., truth is my work hasn't been giving me much time, but I already made a promise when I started the story, I am not abandoning the story for any reason, not until it ends.

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 8:32pm On Mar 17
Vidamia:

On my previous comments, I have said how the story will goes and I think that drop his morale to continue the story
Nothing can drop my morale bro and you should know me by now, my stories can't be predicted.

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by purity23(f): 8:39pm On Mar 17
Vidamia:

On my previous comments, I have said how the story will goes and I think that drop his morale to continue the story
Your prediction is what we all think but I doubt it will happen that way, I'm really scared for everyone now
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by purity23(f): 8:40pm On Mar 17
Silver1996:
I'm really sorry., truth is my work hasn't been giving me much time, but I already made a promise when I started the story, I am not abandoning the story for any reason, not until it ends.
But do and update na
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 1:10am On Mar 18
PLAGIARIZED
EPISODE 59









Success brain stutters for a moment and her eyes take in more light than she expected, every part of her goes on pause while her thoughts catch up.., the shock brings a quietness within, a moment to feel her emotions change gear and girder her soul for what is to come out from her mouth....

"No way.."Success blare out..

"This is the only way out..."Samuel riposte immediately..

"I said no.."She retorts with frown lines encroaching on her forehead..., she's pissed, first at the fact that Samuel had to make a deal with her and now, he wants her to put her life on the line....no way on earth is she doing that.......

"I'm not putting my life at risk..."Success blare out...."No way I'm doing that shìt..."

"I know Amilo too well..."Mojo chime in...."He's not an easy target..., if we're going to kill him., we need a better strategy..."

Samuel sniffle and walk to the end of the window, for a slight second, he fused his attention on the broken window before his hand found way to his broken nose, even with the pain relief he had taken, he can still feel the pains..., the wounds searing every part of his body.., the pains is just a sacrifice he has to make....., to defeat Amilo he's willing to do anything...

"I sincerely thinks sending Success there is a bad idea.. "Festus said with a cringe at Success.....

"I'm not doing it..."Success reiterates as she fold her hands across her chest...

"Do you have a better idea..?"Samuel retorted spuning around to face Success...."You said it yourself., Amilo isn't just after me but we all..."

"I'm not putting my life at risk because of you..."Success fling back angrily.....

"Then do it for yourself.."Samuel groaned..

"Can you two be quiet now...?"Mojo cut in..

Success glare at Samuel and turn her gaze from him....
Mojo sigh before he continue......"I was once part of Amilo's crew, I know how they operate...., if we attack Amilo head on, we'll lose, we need to draw him out from hiding and I believe using you will make him catch the bait...."

Success nose flare with irritation when Mojo cast his eyes on him..."Do you even understand what you all are asking me to do..., to act as bait...?"

"Amìlo will not kill you..."Mojo stated..

"You're wrong..."Success replied, her mouth quivering with fear as the words made way from her mouth..."He's a cold blooded killer.."

"That's correct...."Mojo said grabbing a chair to sit...."But he isn't after you.., He's after Samuel...."

"You don't understand..."Success stated setting a foot forward.."Amilo has seen me with him.."

"Precisely why you're the right person for this job..."Mojo said and got up from the chair..."You're a friend to his sister.."

"I betrayed her and Anita..., they hate me"

"Exactly the point.."

"What point..?"Success queried..

"You betrayed her to stick with Samuel and now you're going to tell the whole world a little story about Samuel.., you'll make a video saying Samuel is not just a greedy person but a woman beater...., you're going to say he harasses you, insults you......and that is why you're living his side....."He pause and made few steps towards Samuel...."We don't know where Amilo is now but when that video goes viral..., he's going to come from his hole and get you.."

"And kill me.."Success added...

"Maybe..."Mojo said..."His sister is angry at you, she's crippled and she won't only blame Samuel but you as well.., she might get provoke and put a bullet in your head.."

Success shivered and took a step back...

"This is a bad idea.."Festus chime in..

"But...."Mojo cut in..."If you give them what they want...., they might consider sparing you until the deal is done.."

"And what is it that they may want....?"Success ask..

"Samuel.. "Mojo replied with a cringe at Samuel..."You're going to tell them the location of Samuel and if I know Amilo too well, he's going to bring you along incase you're playing him...."

"So what happens when Amilo comes to Samuel's location..?"Festus ask curiously

"We kill him.."Samuel replied stealing the words right out from Mojo's mouth...

"And me..?"Success cut in..."What happens to me...?"

"Amilo is our target, the moment we get him, you run.."

"And if things goes south...?"Success ask

"Run..."Mojo replied

"This is a perfect plan..."Samuel chime in..

"Yes for you..."Success retorted....

Samuel grunts and face her"We'll finally be getting the chance to get rid of Amilo once and for all.., aren't you tired of running..., please Success.., we have no better option..."








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48 HOURS LATER





Susan dropped one leg from the wheelchair before she looked up to face Amilo and Lawrence, a minute ago she had refused their help, she needed to do this herself, for the past few days she's been exercising per the Doctor's instruction..., she grimace before she set the second leg down from the wheelchair.., she took her steps carefully like her limbs don’t really belong to her and each step was a negotiation rather than an order. Everything hurts now. Every damn thing...., she wince as she walk over to Amilo's side, Lorenzo offered to help but she refused his help....

"How's the leg..?"Amilo ask with hands folded across his chest..

Susan raise her head to meet his eye level, her muscles feel as though they have been flash-burned with acid from the inside - just sufficient to make them move like the living cells have been replaced by aging rubber bands, thick and twisted...., she look away when the thoughts of Henry crossed her mind once more.., she fixated her eyes on the mannequin standing on the far end of the compound, her eyes moved to the foams beside the mannequin before she ŕevert them back to Amilo, this is the second day of her shooting practice, yesterday she missed, couldn't hit the mannequin standing as the target, today she has made up her mind to hit the highest points..., with a prepared mind, she extended her hand to Amilo....

Amilo glance at Lorenzo before he handed the gun to her.......

The cold metal made greyer the skin of Susan's hand as if her blood ran from the gun..., frown lines encroached on her face a she pointed the gun at the mannequin.....

"I asked again...."Amilo said standing behind her...."Do you really want to do this...?"

The morning had more than a bite of frost and the air made Susan's lungs feel chilled just to breath it in..., without a reply, she place her hand under the trigger guard and aim at the target...

"Place your hand as high as possible on the grip with your thumb pointing forward just roughly below where the slide meets the frame.."Amilo said setting her hand well on the gun......, he let go of her as she compose herself and maintain a shooting balance...

"You have to take the position of the athletic stance....."Amilo added

Susan looked his way wondering what he meant by that...

"Stand with your feet and hips shoulder width apart and bend your knees slightly....."Amilo said to her as she move her gaze back to the target......"The athletic stance position allows you to fire the weapon with stability and mobility..., aim at your target, bring that anger out....."

The past series of events began to come like flashes in her head, it annoyed her, pushed her beyond her boiling point, she set her eyes on the target and imagined Samuel's head on the mannequin...., everything he had done to her race with tremendous speed into her head and that was when she applied pressure on the trigger...., her blood boiled with extreme precision when the bullet flew right out the chamber and hit the head of the male mannequin.......

With quivering mouth she watch the smoke walzed it's way out of the gun muzzle...

"Bravo..."Lorenzo said with an applause...."You hit the head this time.."

Susan took a deep breathe and turn her gaze towards her brother expecting a smile from him, when she got nothing but a hard line beneath his jaw, she turn her gaze towards the fallen Mannequin....

"I want to try again.."She said angrily.....

Lorenzo and Amilo exchange glances but before anyone could say a word, Cadex chime in from behind..

"Boss.."Cadex said walking close to them with a phone in his hand...

Amilo and Lorenzo quickly spun around to face him...

"You need to see this..."Cadex said playing a video on his phone...

Susan didn't want to listen but when she heard Succes's voice, she became keen and quickly drew closer to them to watch the video..., her eyes enlarge with trepidation as her ears open widely to listen to everything Success was saying in the video...., she didn't believe it..., Success couldn't have left Samuel because he harasses and beats her up...., she refocus her attention on the phone and that was when she saw the wounds just above Success eyebrow......., even if she's saying the truth, why make a video, why announce it to everyone's hearing, why now...., Samuel is in hiding and anyone who have a personal vendetta with him might likely go for her to get to Samuel., why put her life at risk....?









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Carlos blew out the smoke from his mouth as Jadan and two other men dragged Jerome into the room....., he puff out one last round of the smoke before he dropped it on a saucer on the table........, he took a second for himself before he turn his face towards Jerome that was force to his knee by his men.......

"You bastard..."Jerome sneer angrily...

Carlos scoffs and that was when Jadan slammed his fist across Jerome's face....

Jerome grimace in pains and spat out blood..., furious, he turn his bloodied and angry face at Jadan...

"Where did your mistress hide my money...?"Carlos ask..

A taunting smile surrounds Jerome's face...."So good of you to ask after you killed her..."

"I didn't kill her, it pains me someone else took that privilege of snapping her little neck from me.., now where is my money...?"

"I'm not telling you.."Jerome sneer.

"I know you'll say that..."Carlos said standing up from the chair..."Which is why I've made arrangemnet beforehand for some special visitors.., bring them in.."

Jerome heart raced with tremendous speed when a door open and his mother and only sister are dragged into the room...., with pounding heart he tried to get up to meet them but Carlos men hit him and made him go on his knees again...

"Mama..."He cried as his mother and sister burst into tears....."Let them go.. "He shouted..

"Not until you tell me where my money is.."Carlos riposte angrily.
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Jerome breathe fell and rise shallowly..., once again he turn his attention to his mother and sister pleading with him to tell Carlos everything he knows..., he shake his head as his head brood over the events that happened on that night.......

"Kill them..."Carlos ordered when he got tired of the delay in reply...

Jerome heart froze and tears forcefully fell from his eyes when Carlos men cocked a barrel and pointed it at them...

"Fine I'll tell you..."Jerome said immediately...., he sniffle and took a glance at his mother before reverting his gaze to Carlos...."The truth is, I don't know where exactly your money is but on the night of the attack.., there was this boy who was with madam Sansa, when your men attacked us, they escaped together..."

"Who is he..?"Carlos ask shapily..

"Oh you must have heard about him..., his name is Samuel..., months ago he won millions of naira with his story..."

"Is this the boy...?"Jadan ask showing him à picture of Samuel...

"Yes..."Jerome replied..."That's the bastard I believe stole your money..."

Carlos sigh and made a few pace from where he's standing...

"I've told you everything I know..."Jerome Chime in.."Please let my mother and sister go.."

Carlos grunts and reverts his gaze to him...."Of course.. "He mutter and motioned Jadan with a raise of his brow.., Jadan understood and quickly without any form of hesitation, he took a pistol out and shot Jerome's mother in the head...

Jerome screamed as his mother fell to the ground, her blood splashing on his sister's face...., filled with rage, he stood up to his feet and just when he was about rushing to his mother dead body, a bullet from another of Carlos men came for him, the powerful bullet hit his chest....., blood mingled with smoke jumped effortlessly from his body before his lifeless body crashed on the ground....

His sister screamed loudly, Carlos couldn't take the screams, he got paranoid, took his own pocket pistol out and shot her bearing the silence that once been in the house again...., he pick up the remaining of his Indian hemp ignoring the blood flowing freely on the ground.....

"Locate that boy.."Carlos said ..." If he has my money, he's going to pay.."

"Yes boss.."Jadan said








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Success quickly dragged the hoodie to cover part of her face as she stepped out from the supermarket, it's been 62hours since she made that ridiculous video...., and now it feels as if the whole world is after her, every steps she takes isn't secure and every breathe she takes looks as if it's her last..., she looked back and saw someone staring at her from a corner.., fear creep into her and quickly she increased her walking pace, she look back again and noticed the same person was following her, there it occured to her the time has come..., cold chills rain down her spines and without an order from her brain she took to heels and began to run on her sneakers but her thoughts of escaping were quickly shortlived when a car pulled at her side blocking her...., she didn't let the fear of been caught get to her, realising what is going on, she took another turn before anyone in the car could come out.., she looked back again to know if she was far from her pursurers but quivkly realise she was just a stone throw from her pursurer and the car, she turn her gaze away, she didn't noticed early someone was in her front.., before her brain could send signals to her leg to stop, she bump into the person on her front....

"Don't scream.."The scar face man she bump into said before pulling out a gun from behind him...

Success froze to the spot but quivkly snap out of it when the man ordered her in a baritone voice...

"Move..."The man said pressing the gun against Success back.. ..

Success shivered and quickly did as she was told, with a gun pressing against her back, she couldn't say a word but the moment the man lay the gun off, Success look around and that was when she shouted..., without hesitation, the men bundled her into the car, the rest of the men jumped into the car and zoomed off before the onlookers could assemble for a gossip and a rescue.....








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Success struggled with the ropes as she tried once again to lose herself, realising she's not getting anywhere, she gave up..

"Damn you Samuel..."She cause, a feeling of dread crept from the pit of her stomach.....

Breathing heavily, she look up at the door as it creaks before it opened..., Success mouth shake as she remenbered her contribution in making Susan's life miserable...

"You're walking now..."Success said as Susan carefully set one foot forward before the other......

Susan glare at her with hard rimmed eyes.., Success shivered, never had she thought she'll be meeting Susan again sooner than she realise..., when Susan grew close to her, she nearly crumbled on her chair......

"You....."Susan dragged between her teeth.., her teeth chartered as the sight of Success arouse every suppressed anger.., without thinking she clenched her fist....

"I can explain everything that happened....."Success said as she saw the anger in Susan's eyes..."I didn't do anything to you, I tried to stop Samuel, I really did..., I....

Susan moved closer, every word sung from Success mouth were like gasoline to the fire burning inside her, without hesitation, she punched Success face hard...

Blood pooped from Success mouth as the gravity of the blow turned her face to one side..., she knew there's nothing she'll tell Susan that will stop her from venting every anger on her..., speechless, she raise her head to face Susan again....., blood drained from her body when she saw Susan pointing a gun at her..

"You destroyed my life.."Susan sneer with tears rolling down her eyes..."You destroyed Anita's life..."

"I...I....

"You don't deserve to live..."Susan added

"I can explain.."Success mumbled swallowing hard..., when Susan cocked the gun, she realise she was right from the start..., this isn't a plan to kill Amilo....this is a plan for her death....this is certainly the end of her...

Every sick event began to replay in Susan's head, it pushes her beyond her limit, little by little the anger began to take over her, Success apologies fell like dews at her side.....when her brain took in more thoughts than it could no longer take, her fingers whirled around the condenser before she angrily pulled the trigger.........








PLAGIARIZED......




TBC





Sorry for the late update

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by doctorexcel(m): 2:24am On Mar 18
Success is a CRUELLA. She does not deserve a chance to explain. Once a traitor, always a traitor

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by hotswagg12: 10:31am On Mar 18
Thanks for the update. Besides I don't think Susan will be able to kill success and amilo will fall for the trap set by mojo.

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Dacaller: 11:28am On Mar 18
thanks for d updates..... festus. is next to go down

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Christipsy(m): 11:54am On Mar 18
Thanks silver1986.
Biko let it be straight on her for head the bullet hit

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Adekunlated: 7:33pm On Mar 18
Thanks for the update, I don't think Susan killed her

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Ann2012(f): 8:05pm On Mar 18
Thanks for the update boss

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by collinometricx: 9:20pm On Mar 18
Hope success dies..

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Mavikolo2020: 10:06pm On Mar 18
I sincerely hopes Success dies but silver please permit me to ask, what exactly is Festus role in the story, I mean besides following Samuel upandan

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by 1Teethosin(m): 11:05pm On Mar 18
Susan pulled the trigger.... I strongly believe success can't die yet. However, who will kill Samuel? Amilo or Carlos? That Bastard had lived enough already.

Great work Silver

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by purity23(f): 12:43am On Mar 19
Success shouldn't die like that, death is too good for her.

Thanks for the update

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Jesubaby(f): 1:32pm On Mar 19
Thanks for the update.

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Advantaged: 3:43pm On Mar 19
Mavikolo2020:
I sincerely hopes Success dies but silver please permit me to ask, what exactly is Festus role in the story, I mean besides following Samuel upandan

Lolz
His role is that of a follower smiley smiley cheesy grin

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by kelvyncruz: 10:50pm On Mar 19
Success and Samuel should suffer a terrible death, a bullet is too good for them

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Thebigdream: 8:55am On Mar 20
Thanks for the update

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by showgoeson: 9:53pm On Mar 23
Wow Success is finally dead, Festus and Samuel left to go, thanks for the update

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by collinometricx: 12:40am On Mar 24
showgoeson:
Wow Success is finally dead, Festus and Samuel left to go, thanks for the update
me I don't think she shot her shà

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Ibroslank(m): 3:07pm On Mar 24
[quote author=Mavikolo2020 post=100000815]I sincerely hopes Success dies but silver please permit me to ask, what exactly is Festus role in the story, I mean besides following Samuel upandan[ANSWER] adviser and personal assistant

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:48am On Mar 25
PLAGIARIZED
EPISODE 60
EPISODE TITLE- And the demon shall be slain








A drop of tear dropped from Susan's eyes as anger rolled off her and marinated in resentment....., eyes wide open Success stare at the smoke from the gun, she couldn't breathe, couldn't utter a word but bash in the stupefaction that threatens to seize her breathe...., with unsteady breathe she manage to move her eyes from the gun to where the bullet had hit........

Fear pricked her with it's deep claws realising it could have been her.., the bullet could have hit her..., she tried to steady her breathe but quickly realise how futile it was when the shock overwhelmed her...., it incapacitated her..held her captive against her choice........, she tried to open her mouth to talk but what came out was engulfed in stutters and that was when someone pushed the door wide open and Amilo and Lorenzo came rushing in...

Amilo didn't hesitate before he took the gun from Susan..
Susan anger sparked and she quickly revert her stony look towards Amilo...., her breathe rose and fell shallowly, she return her gaze back to Success before she wipe her tears and walked out of the room angrily...

Amilo kept looking at her until she disappeared out of sight.., he sigh and return his gaze to Success...

"Are you okay...?"Lorenzo ask Success....

Since words couldn't come out from Success mouth, she hesitated before she nod her head...









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Samuel stare blankly from the hotel room window, his head was filled with how he's going to enact his revenge on Amilo, Amilo had bitten more than he can chew and he's tired of running....

"I got you this.."Festus said extending a glass of fab energy drink to him....

Samuel looked his way, Festus found his looks dangerous, it was as uncomfortable as a chorus-girl corset and had the same effect on Festus's breathing, constricted and shallow.... There was no life behind his eyes. Every move he made betrayed his intentions and none of them were noble....., after much hesitation, he took the glass from him and drank a little from it...

"You've been awfully quiet since Success left.."Festus said walking back to the bed.."Do you miss her that much..?"

Samuel grunts and took another gulp down of the fab before he spun around to face Festus...."It's not funny, she's risking her life..."

"We all have been risking our lives......, have you forgotten how we started..."

"You were against the idea...., what lifted your spirit..?"

Festus scoffs...."I realise there's nothing we can do, if she hadn't done what she did.., who knows, maybe Amilo will still be in our neck.."

"He's still on our neck..."

"You think she'll succeed 'cause if Amilo doesn't kill her...I strongly believe Susan will..., if any of these happen...what's the plan b..?"

Once again , Samuel revert his gaze to the window and took another gulp down of the drink before he opened his mouth to talk....."There's no plan B.."









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"Do you believe her...?"Lorenzo ask with hands folded across his chest...

Amilo trot towards a bottle of whiskey, he took the bottle and uncapped it, he tasted it and grimace at the taste...."No..."

"It could be a trap..."Lorenzo said..."But the bruises in her face and body.., you think it's all part of their plan..."

Amilo nibbed...."She left them and put herself on the streets even if she knows I've seen her face with Samuel...., it could be all part of thier plans or she could be telling the truth...."

"Susan knows her very well.."Lorenzo said.."She said we shouldn't believe any words that comes out from her mouth.."

"My sister is smart...."

"So what are you going to do, let her go..?"

Amilo scoffs.."Why would I do that.., she did say she know where Samuel is and for everything he's done to her, she's ready to show us to pay him back...."

"We could be walking into a trap..."

"It wouldn't be our first.."Amilo replied..."We've be searching for this bastard for days.., if she know where he is, then I'm willing to take the chance...., this is the perfect opportunity.., one thing is setting a trap for someone, another thing is that person knowing fully well you're setting a trap for him but chose to forge ahead..."

"We don't know what kind of trap.."Lorenzo said..."It could be the special agents.."

"Then we'll be killing two birds with one stone because we'll be fully ready for any kind of trap it may be....., inform the rest of the men.., we're heading out yet again, let them aware we'll be walking into a trap..."

"Amilo you need to think this through..."Lorenzo said.."Samuel may not be there, instead we'll be meeting the special agents or something worse..."

"Trust me.."Amilo riposte..."Samuel will be there..., Success knows what's going to happen to her if I don't find Samuel....."

"You're taking her along..?"

A lean smile that disappeared as it came surround Amilo's face before he left Lorenzo and walk towards the room Success has been held, getting there, he opened the door..

Success shivered as Amilo walked in...

"You said you're going to lead me to where Samuel is hiding.. "Amilo said

"For everything that bastard had done to me, he doesn't deserve any mercy from me...."

"Well know this little girl.., if I realise you're leading me into a trap, the first bullet that will come out from my gun will be for you..., do you understand that..?"

Cold chills rain down Success spine before she nodded.......









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49 HOURS LATER....






Carlos moan as she took the full length of his penis into her mouth , when his phone rang, he glance at the caller.., he moan a little as her tongue wetly stimulated his boner.., after a slight hesitation, he answered the call..

"Boss.."Jadan's voice sounded from the other end...

"What do you want..?"Carlos replied in a hurry..

"We found Samuel's location.."Jadan said..."One of our spies called in a few hours ago, he said he saw someone like Samuel checking into a hotel, I didn’t report because the information wasn't verified..., but it's been confirmed now.., another of our trusted guys saw him few minutes ago at the hotel lobby.., we were able to get his room number..it's room 406..."

"Get him and get my money.."Carlos said

"Yes boss.."Jadan said before the call dropped and ended...








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"This is a trap.."Susan said rolling the wheelchair behind Amilo..."She's lying.."

Amilo huffs and turn to face her..."I know.."

"Then why are you going...?"

"Because every moment that passes and I noticed i haven't gotten that bastard that put you in this condition.., I get pissed......., this is the only chance we've got..."

"Don't you get this.."Susan said infuriated..."I don't want you to die..."

Amilo sigh and lower to her sitting level...."I died the day I chose to live by the gun.., I'll be fine.."

"Promise me you'll come back.."

"Amilo nodded before the words came from his mouth....."I'll come back.."

Susan sniffle, stopping the tears from falling from her eyes, she rolled the wheelchair back to her room..., Amilo puff and stepped outside.....

"Is everything ready...?"He asked Lorenzo...

Lorenzo look at the cars they were going to take and the men....."Everything is set.., everyone has been brief of the danger that lies ahead...., when are we leaving...?"

"You're not going Lorenzo.."Amilo said

Lorenzo flinched at the statement.."Wait, what..?"

"I need someone to stay here and watch my sister.., you know what happened the last time we were away..."

"Come on man..., anyone else can watch her, I'm not a babysitter..."

"This isn't a request.."Amilo retorts..."It's an order Lorenzo..."

"You don't just want me to watch your sister.., what exactly is going on...?"

Amilo look away and look back at him a second later...."Look.."He said, his voice dropping..."If something happens to me."

"No man..

"If something happens to me.."Amilo cut in...."I need someone I can trust to lead the team and continue the business..."

"Nothing will happen to you...."

"Listen to me.."Amilo said..."We've known each other ever since we were little..., if I die out there..., I want you to give Susan fifty percent of my wealth..."

"Amilo...

"Just listen damn it.."Amilo retorted...."The other fifty percent should be used to continue the business.."

"Nothing is going to happen to you man.."

"Promise me..., promise me Lorenzo, you'll do as I say..."

Lorenzo hesitated before he grudgingly replied..."I promise..."

Amilo took a step back and took a deep breathe..."Where is Success..?"

"On the front seat of the van as you requested.."

Amilo exhale before he began walking towards his armed men...

"Brother.."Lorenzo blare out..

Amilo stopped in his tracks and turn around to face him....

"I'll be anticipating your return..."Lorenzo said

Amilo nodded and without giving him a reply, he trot on...
"Let's go men..."He shouted and enter the backseat of the car..., once in, he point a pistol to Success head from behind..

Success shivered and manage to turn her face around..

"Do you feel that.."Amilo ask..."I'll blow off your brains first if you dare lead me into a trap......."

Fear froze Success to the bones, So though it feels as if her bones have no more strength and her muscles are all out of power, she still have the option to remain still, to be quiet enough to choose how she's going to die.....is helping Samuel really worth it.....

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:48am On Mar 25
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The abandoned building glowed golden in the light of the new day, its' stones finding their way to join the dawn chorus, first came the sunshine into the abandoned building, then came the nesting birds and sheltering animals of the woodland.., as the car tyres graze the sand, Amilo look out from the car, everywhere was quiet, except the songs of birds and rattling animals, there was no sign of any human living around...

"It's here.."Success said with shaking mouth...

Amilo look out from the car window..."Get out from the car..."He said to Success as he stepped out from the car..

Success shivered with great fear as Amilo held her to himself and began to push her forward..

"Observe.."Amilo said to Cadex who quickly pulled out a microscope and view the area...

"Anything...?"Amilo asked

"Nop.."Cadex said and drop the microscope to his side....

"You aren't going to see them through that.."Succcess chime in with shaking mouth...."They hide themselves very well..."

"Themselves!"Amilo reiterates....."Who is them..?"

"Samuel and Festus..."Success ŕeplied..."I was hiding here with them.., when Samuel tried to kill me, I had to run away..."

"And you think they're still there..?"

"I guess so.."

"Alright then move it.."Amilo said pushing her forward with the gun..., the rest of Amilo's men followed, each ready to face any danger that comes.....

Success grudgingly dragged her legs, fear took hold of her and her brain couldn't formulate any thought..., as she forge ahead with a gun pointed at her head, she realise she was so stupid to accept such a task.., Samuel isn't worth it, isn't worth any of her efforts..., how couldn't she have realise that Samuel is only using her to get what he wants.., not that he cares about her...., she trot on with fear.., everywhere was awfully quiet making her realise she isn't aware of the whole plan......

As they walk towards the building door, she realise she was tense and sooner or later her foot isn't going to move..., she manage to take another step towards the door before Amilo instructed her to stop....

Amilo signalled one of his men to open the door....., carefully the man trot towards the man, he glance at Amilo and the rest of the men, with Amilo's signal, he turn down the door knob.., the door opened slightly, when Amilo nodded again, the man pushed it wide open and that was when an explosion went off......

To the sound of the explosion came the terrible echo as if it were the anguished cry of God..., the fierce heat and fire sent everyone close off their feet and threw them against the ground...., The explosion seared the air and earth in a way that left devoid of life down to the microbes......, in a few minutes, a cloud of smoke engulfed the whole place......

Amilo cough as he tried to get himself back, the earth spin around him.., he blink and cough again as smoke surrounds him..., there he realise what just happened but before he could get up, bullets began to rent the air, each ripping into his men.., he look around in search of Success.., just a few pace from him, he saw her laying face flat on the ground...., he raise his face up only to see more men running towards him...., when he look around again, he saw his gun, he made move for it but a bullet hit the ground just a step from him..., he look up again..., the hair in the back of his neck rose as he noticed one of their attackers was close to him..., any move he makes now will probably be his last..., eyes sparkling with anger, he look as his attacker raise the gun to face him....., just as his attacker was about to fire..., a bullet hit him...

Amilo's eyes widened wondering who had fired the gun...

"Boss..."Cadex shouted from behind him and fire more shots towards their attackers that were gaining on them...

Amilo quickly pick up his pistol and stood up, he fired some shots before he ran into the house with Cadex jumping past the fire the explosion had made.., once in, they ran into a corner and hid......

Amilo took a deep breathe as he brood over what just happened...

"You were right..."Cadex whispered...."This is a trap.."

Amilo glance at him, he knew something like this was going to happen but he never anticipated a bomb....."How many of us are left...?"

"I think it's just the two of us.."Cadex said ..."We were distracted by the bomb.."

Amilo grunts heavily..."Who are they.., the men that attacked us, do you know who they are..?"

"No idea.."Cadex said poking out his head to see if anyone is coming.....






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Mojo touched Success chin, he look at his men and shake his head....."She's dead...."

"Oh..."Daniel mumbled..

"What a waste.."Mojo said.."I was beginning to like her..."

"She should have known Samuel was just using her..., she embarked on a suicide mission...."Daniel said...

Mojo walked over some of Amilo's dead men and trot close to the building......"Amilo.."He shouted..."I know you're in there and you can hear me....., I hope you recognise my voice..."

Frown lines encroached on Amilo's face as he heard the voice..

"That bastard.."Cadex sneer..

"Mojo.."Amilo whispered..

"Come on out man.."Mojo shouted...."You have no where to run, you're surrounded.., come on out and I shall consider giving you a merciful death....."










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A gleen of sweat fell down from Festus forehead as he dug more sands from the hole....
"I'm getting there.."He told himself as he dug out more sands..

Excitement swept across his face as the shover hit something, a wooden box..., he continue digging until the buried wooden box was visible.., overwhelmed with his excitement, he pulled the box from the ground and climbed out with it to the surface...., overjoyed, he broke the key the box is locked with with the shover and opened it......

His heart raced as he saw the money on it, the money tied on a thick nylon to prevent sands and inscets from eating into it.., he torn the nylon open and took out a bundle of the money.....

"I knew it..."A voice chime into his ears..

Shocked.., Festus stood up and look up to face the direction of the voice...., more sweats dropped from his face realising it was Samuel....

"I knew it.."Samuel said angrily..."I knew you were coming here when you left the hotel early...., you've been asking me lots of questions about where I hid the money I stole from Madam Sansa, I told you and this is what you do.., steal it..."

"Don't try and act like a saint..."Festus fling back angrily..., resentment building like wildfire in his guts...."Do you think you're the only greedy one around here..."

Anger burn hot and unstoppable in Samuel's gut.., he could never have believe it...his best would betray him......"I gave you everything..., I trusted you..."

"I trusted you too.."Festus groaned...."Until I realise we're just pawns in your game...., because of you, Success is dead...."

"How do you know that..?"

"You would know if you care...., I just got off the phone with Mojo a few minutes ago.., he told me himself, She's dead.., killed by the very explosion you encouraged him to plant there.."

Samuel sniffle and lower his gaze in regret....

"Don't even pretend to care about her.. "Festus added angrily..."You don't care about any of us, all you care about is your money and annihilating your so called enemies....., well breaking news bro.., Amilo is still alive..., who knows, he could kill Mojo and still come after you.."

"You think I wanted this..?"Samuel blare out, a tear burst out from his eyes..."You think I wanted any of this....., I was a young boy with dreams but I had no penny to my name.., my father was poor, nobody cared or even pretend to care about us..., I had to survive...., and when an opportunity came, I wasn't ready to let it slide..."

"You use people Samuel...."Festus fling back..."God knows why it took me this long to realise it..., you'll use anyone to get what you want..., Success is dead, who knows who else will go down for you...., I'm not willing to die for anyone bro..."

"If you want to leave, you leave but not with my money.."

Festus scoffs...."Well bro, you can't cut your cake and eat it..., I'm taking this money..."

Anger roused Samuel's gut, it pushed him beyond reasoning and that was when he took a gun out from behind him and pointed it at Festus.., to his surprise., Festus did same....

They both glare at each other with their guns boldly on each other's face...

"You're not the only one with a gun.."Festus retorted....

"You're not leaving here with my money.."Samuel said, a muscle bulging out from the back of his neck...."I suffered for that money.., i risked my life to get that money..., it's my sweat, I killed for it and I'll not let some swine who hasn't worked for anything in his life take it away from me...."

"You mean you stole it.."Festus retorted..."Just as you stole Anita's story and killed everyone close to her to silent her....."

"Everything I did, I did for the money, my money...."

"The money wasn't yours to take.."Festus groaned...."What you stole doesn't belong to you.."

"And it belongs to you..?"

"Admit it Sammy..."Festus said..."You stick with me all this time because you were scared if you leave me I'm going to expose your secrets...., I bet if I were in danger, you would bother to show up...."

"You're right I wouldn't bother showing up...., I should have killed you a long time ago..."

"Then you should know I also stick with you because I thought I could benefit from your wealth....., I never really liked you, you're a greedy proud fool....."

Samuel's nostrils flare and quickly he circled his fingers around the trigger...."You're not getting out of here alive..."

Festus eyes sparked with anger..., he curled his fingers around the trigger and focus his aim on Samuel....."We'll let the bullets decide .."








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Slowly, Anita unzip the bag and took out the sword, the fine sharp edges gleen in the midday sun shining it's rays through the window.., she look at the sword, it's was her father's, a gift passed on from her great grandfather to her grandfather and then to her father, for years the sword had been in their family, it never rust, neither does it's sharpness faints...., her father had told her the sword was used in the past to slain demons, since there's no one left to inherit the sword, it automatically falls to her and with her family ancestral sword and all the powers of her ancestors wield on it, .....she'll cut off Samuel's head.......








PLAGIARIZED.....




3 EPISODES TO THE BREATHTAKING FINALE.......



How will it all end....?

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Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:51am On Mar 25
doctorexcel:
Success is a CRUELLA. She does not deserve a chance to explain. Once a traitor, always a traitor
That's it bro
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:52am On Mar 25
Dacaller:
thanks for d updates..... festus. is next to go down
You welcome man
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:52am On Mar 25
Mavikolo2020:
I sincerely hopes Success dies but silver please permit me to ask, what exactly is Festus role in the story, I mean besides following Samuel upandan
Hahaha
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by Silver1996(m): 12:53am On Mar 25
1Teethosin:
Susan pulled the trigger.... I strongly believe success can't die yet. However, who will kill Samuel? Amilo or Carlos? That Bastard had lived enough already.

Great work Silver
You welcome
Re: PLAGIARIZED (The Story Was Just The Beginning) by binsanni(m): 7:14am On Mar 25
Silver1996:
You welcome
thanks for for the update

hmm story wey dey gimme joy

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