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Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 10:26pm On Aug 22, 2020 |
syluck:Rate my writing, punctuation, narration, descriptiom abeg |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by doggedfighter(f): 10:47pm On Aug 22, 2020 |
TornMill:in your den, boss |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by doggedfighter(f): 10:52pm On Aug 22, 2020 |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 11:03pm On Aug 22, 2020 |
doggedfighter:sleep well, i don't want eyebags on those eyes |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 11:04pm On Aug 22, 2020 |
doggedfighter:wellcome *where is my kiss emoji* |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Lakesc: 6:09am On Aug 23, 2020 |
TornMill:Its ok sir, i understand, writting is neva easy and man must work too, just keep up the works u started... |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by syluck(m): 8:42am On Aug 23, 2020 |
[quote author=doggedfighter post=93117685][/quote] Sorry you mentioned me |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Nobody: 10:01am On Aug 23, 2020 |
TornMill:bro we dey your back |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 1:20pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Chimpretty:As gallant as ever 1 Like |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 1:20pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
syluck: |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by TornMill(m): 1:21pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Lakesc:Yes, it is not easy. You guys do inspire me alot 1 Like |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 2:18pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Deborah98:I did not get the dm oh |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 3:57pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
TornMill:Bentleyjnr |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 12:28pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Episode 05. ¤¤¤ "He who runs from a fight lives to fight another day" ¤¤¤ " segun " my mother screamed, breaking into my thoughts " come and buy medicine for your grandfather" i immediatly ran to her to get money for the drugs. Holding a polythene bag i trugged down clement street, the street was said to be a hub of activities, ranging from the early cries of hawkers who used sonorous voices to advertise thier wares. "èkàró ó ológî de o", "finey butter bread", "sweet puff puff, sweet puff puff"then to the evangelists who would carry heavy megaphones to preach christ. " brother, sister don't let jesus catch you in beer parlour, it is hell fire straight" they will proclaim, "iya lagbaja don't gossip you wee not hear when rapture come now you will start begging for second chance" Then the boys who would rush to play "kolo beating "(a childhood football game) before the big agbayas(egbon kunle, brother lanre etc) chance them to the field. . . . ¤¤¤ To be continued |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 12:33pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Krazzyandy ann2612 Ann2012 preshbeauty ujunwa14 petyprincess damniggar damnniggar bobosneh pre14 pabon skubido enirock rosemary33 fulaniherdsmen biafrabushboy ekopsparoayara kaycee9242 rozz tallestbabe fumisticqueen damselposh fumisticqween riele chatinent 77craze divepen1 jameskudooski Culin adesina12 ukaface akinwale14 Odoogu tonyspecial Oyinelle adekunlated Lakesc elvictor embellish kweensheba alexaonfleek froshloaded section1000 silver1996 pablo25 horeofe yungbanks C8t8 oly23 come and see guys i have created the group help my ministry. Join abeg. [url=facebook.com//groups/1038453149947186?refid=27] Ancient Stable Of Stories(A.S.O.S) [/url] 1 Like |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 12:54pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Episode 5b ¤¤¤ I suddenly navigated to the corner which leads to the local field, there i met the brodas already playing while a group of teary kids looked from afar. Though i do play on the field i was not a fan of chasing a bunch of kids with palmfronds or bamboo rods. The kids onced rebeled against the brodas. That fatefull day i took the lead to cajole the kids to leave the field for us but they refused, i even tiped them with a sum of #150 but they remained admanant. My friends who were right behind me were enraged at the kids behaviour pushed me aside and flooded the field with bamboo rods, the kids retreated then gathered at a save distance they then chanted a funny sounding slogan. "kolo gangs, kolo for real we no they tire" their leader chanted and they replied in unision "KBG",in a twinkling they dispersed in to the nearby bush giving themselves enough distance. Thier leader who was still in middle of the field screamed. "AGBAS" At that moment they came out from all directions in number. TBC |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 12:55pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Peacy26 wellcome, don't just read, please drop an encouraging comment |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 12:56pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Peacy26 wellcome, don't just read, please drop an encouraging comment ""Thanks"" |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by peacy26: 12:59pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Interesting pls give us more |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:20am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Episode 5c ¤¤¤ Well that story is for another day. ¤¤¤ I noticed the kids but i acted like i don't care, even with the beatings these guys are still stubborn. But, may . God help me deal with tope that pastor son, the boy beat me but if not that, that day was a wednesday i would have fought back i don't fight on wednesdays. ¤¤¤ Then i heard kunle voice, " segun, shey arun stroké ó ti gbè baba e" he shouted after me,"mo ri won lojokan bayii, wón gbë gan". kunle was a guy who has written jamb and waec 12 times , until he got addmitted to unilorin, where he was later rusticated due to his .. Which was going in to negative. They are not rich nor poor rather are they able to make all ends meet, they are just there. He once said that he went to a NIKE store and saw his fathers salary on a pair of trainers. He was also rude, proud . . . . This attitude made them boys leave him to himself. . . . . . This is a BORING update shey??. .. . . . . Sha manage las las you chop quarter bread |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:22am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Krazzyandy ann2612 Ann2012 preshbeauty ujunwa14 petyprincess damniggar damnniggar bobosneh pre14 pabon skubido enirock rosemary33 fulaniherdsmen biafrabushboy ekopsparoayara kaycee9242 rozz tallestbabe fumisticqueen damselposh fumisticqween riele chatinent 77craze divepen1 jameskudooski Culin adesina12 ukaface akinwale14 Odoogu tonyspecial Oyinelle adekunlated Lakec elvictor embellish kweensheba alexaonfleek froshloaded section1000 silver1996 pablo25 horeofe yungbanks C8t8 oly23 come and see guys abeg help my ministry. Join abeg. [url=facebook.com//groups/1038453149947186?refid=27] Ancient Stable Of Stories(A.S.O.S) [/url] 1 Like |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:23am On Aug 29, 2020 |
peacy26:Thanks, stay tuned |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:28am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Deborah98:Waiting . . . . . |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:30am On Aug 29, 2020 |
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Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Lakesc: 7:45am On Aug 29, 2020 |
[quote author=Tominix post=93342098][/quote] Op, my moniker has an s before the c, as in LAKESC. Thanks Sir, indeed half bread is better than non. next time give us full bread ok.... |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 8:35am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Lakesc:Okay noted, wey your gangs. Buh, shey you go like beans or butter or egg with the bread |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Lakesc: 5:43pm On Aug 29, 2020 |
Tominix:Egg and bread pls... Let me go and call them |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by peacy26: 7:09pm On Aug 29, 2020 |
op pls include very rich tea to the bread and egg o. Thanks |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:19pm On Aug 29, 2020 |
Lakesc:As peac26 said will you also want tea or just egg with it ?? |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:21pm On Aug 29, 2020 |
peacy26:Will you want lipton, cowbell, coffea, top tea, or just herbal tea ?? Eh? |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Lakesc: 10:05pm On Aug 29, 2020 |
Tominix:A hot cup of tea will be great... |
Re: The Girl Next Door By Tornmill by Tominix(m): 7:27am On Aug 30, 2020 |
Lakesc:Noted, Loading . . . . . . . . . 45% |
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