Just drop it anyway you can
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i would have been forgotten
cos enemies wanted me rotten
am in his team
and i'll glue to him
so i can have all ways
of breaking those days
so there will be no raise
physical
or spiritual
cos i'll be ready
steady
no shudderring
no beating.

somebody else should carry it from 'beating'

There's a thread for this already -the Freestyle thread.

There's a thread for this already -the Freestyle thread.

@gbade.x

the freestyle thread is for freestyle. I don't freestyle and I don't believe there's anybody freestyling online. Unless they don't know what freestyle is.

@mrofficial

I'm a songwriter and not a rapper so I have only one 2 verse rap.

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anybody wanna test me
contest me
bless thee.
never known a nigga wanna go on a death trip
except me.
denex.
Mass murderer,
lyrical serial killer
bomb on you like Hiroshima
spill your guts like an animal
eat your heart out, cos am a cannibal
I'm hunting ya
booby traps in ya backyard.
So what you call battle is war.
And what you call beef is now dropping your jaw
nigga please,
you don't want this
you don't wanna be stepping to me
so get down your knees
kiss ma feet
and get back to your nursery sh*t.


Abeg, am too tired for verse 2

Mr official's verse was pointless, no single msg.

@denex. Freestyling online is like typing on d spot - no premeditation. For instance, abt 70% of my lines on dis thread was 'freestyle'. Was replying directly to other cats lines.

lol , Some guys got no jobs.
I mean JOBLESS

@johnny
and you think reading jobless people's post make you betr? No my friend - worse!

naijafan:

Mr official's verse was pointless, no single msg.

@denex. Freestyling online is like typing on d spot - no premeditation. For instance, about 70% of my lines on this thread was 'freestyle'. Was replying directly to other cats lines.

Ok, what did i write?

mr.official:

Just drop it anyway you can

Open your eyes.

Denex, its because u're on a forum u feel online freestylin' is impossible. Go to d yahoo messanger chat(music section ) and battle(don't ask for a link), u'll know wassup. Its instant messagin' so u have to freestyle. Its just like me in front of u, *instant messagin'*, u don't have time to think of what is in some rhymebook or sumthin', U JUST SPIT!!! So don't think we don't know what freestylin' is, I've been freestylin' since 4eva!!!

@Po Deep

to a large extent, I can understand freestyle through IM. But on a forum or via email? Definitely not.

You do not know the extent to which people would go to fraud people into believing they are artistically gifted.

There's a guy who posts I saw in the Poetry section of this forum. His ID was GREATPETER.

So I don't trust anybody displaying lyrical prowess. I think you're good though.

Denex.
Aight, I feel what u sayin'. Thanx 4 d compliment.
Here's a little somn I wrote some time ago.

"The whole game's seemin' abnormal//
kinda seems like a Indecency//
cos all these wack ones +blowin'+ like its some 'oral'//
I'm on top o' d game, my view be dorsal//
they still laggin' behind, their view be caudal//
makin' me far ahead n' I ain't even use no time portal//.
I'm a hustla, my life story would make a hollywood hit/
while most be fabricatin' tales, I'm talkin' dat real sh*t/
dats why I hate these liein' wack~M~Cs/
matta'fact I'm done spittin', y'all b*tches don't deserve a track~fr'm~me!/.
- Deep25th(aka Po Deep).

Howzit?

Denex.
Aight, I feel what u sayin'. Thanx 4 d compliment.
Here's a little somn I wrote some time ago.

"The whole game's seemin' abnormal//
kinda seems like a Indecency//
cos all these wack ones +blowin'+ like its some 'oral'//
I'm on top o' d game, my view be dorsal//
they still laggin' behind, their view be caudal//
makin' me far ahead n' I ain't even use no time portal//.
I'm a hustla, my life story would make a hollywood hit/
while most be fabricatin' tales, I'm talkin' dat real sh*t/
dats why I hate these liein' wack~M~Cs/
matta'fact I'm done spittin', y'all b*tches don't deserve a track~fr'm~me!/.
- Deep25th(aka Po Deep).

Howzit?

It's cool. But I just checked out your last rhyme on the freestyle thread and ya punchlines were off the chain.
"on the web again like I'm spiderman"
bro that is so hot. It's incredible. I dropped a lil' something for some cat that goes by the name youngdices. Check it out.

Yea. Me n' my bro(gbade.x), we punchline all d time. . . ALL THE TIME(at least in every verse).
I've seen ur verse to youngdice$, an evident work of a rhyme fiend(u're tight.
Check d reply(don't take it personal).

Yea. Me n' my bro(gbade.x), we punchline all d time. . . ALL THE TIME(at least in every verse).
I've seen ur verse to youngdice$, an evident work of a rhyme fiend(u're tight.
Check d reply(don't take it personal).

PO WHATA POMPING.U TIGHT,AND CHECK MA LIL FREESTYLE AS IT COMES TO MA BRAIN.

I GAT MA LEFT EYE MOPPED OUTMOULDING RIGHT TO MA BRAIN
PUSHING ME BACK TO THE WOMB I WISH I NE'R GET BORN
THIS SLENZY RAP IS MORE BROIL THAN WHAT YALL USED TO KNOW
PO DEEP ADN D-END DIS IS HOW WE ROLL THIS BEEF
WHEN U GAT SUCKING UR DICK RESPECT THE STREET
ONE LOVE TO THUGZ WE LOST RIP
END ROLLS LIKE TOUR DATES MISTAKEN 4 A LIFE
BLACK THUGZ GAT BETRAYED BY PAIN AND HUGZ
ALL TIME STYLES EVER ROLLS 4RM THE SLUMP
TAKE IT ALL CUZ ITS WAR AFTER WAR

I'm street inspired/
but lately I've been gettin' weak n' tired/
cos it ain't easy having this weight up on my shouldaz/
desperately thinkin': should sip upon the henny or just blaze upon d doja?/
to ease d tension//
cos this ghetto sh*t be gettin' my n*ggaz in police detention//
we can't play snooker no more, they'll say we smokin' trees/
soakin' seeds//
dryin' 'em/
and then fryin' 'em//
gettin' high n' then/
sayin' its inspirin'//
I'm tired, man/.
-Deep25th(Fed up).