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Once Upon A Time by jesusfreak(f): 5:39pm On Jun 27, 2007 |
Once Upon A Time Once upon a time we lived in happiness Holding hands under the moonlight We danced We touched We kissed. Once upon a moment a long time ago The wind ruffled our hair sand tickled our feet And we danced Oh, how we danced Our movements matched Our bodies fit Our footprints light on the sand As though we were hovering above the ground. Once upon a night The stars sparkled brightly but not one star matched your eyes Your eyes of the bright, bright blue Blue as the ocean, the sea Blue as the moon could possibly be. Once upon a time Once upon a moment Once upon a night. We stared upon eachother Love vibes sending out sweet messages through our eyes. This was long ago When the world was beautiful When the ocean was always blue When our footprints still lingered in the sand. Now there are other footprints But ours are gone Gone with my love for you that I had Once upon a time Once upon a moment Once upon a night |
Re: Once Upon A Time by stephanay(m): 6:08pm On Jun 27, 2007 |
soooooooo |
Re: Once Upon A Time by RuuDie(m): 5:33pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
jesusfreak, this is sublime stuff . . . . it just rolls of the tip of a reader's tongue with sweet fluidity! w'oulda been a l'il more smoother if you'd broken it up into stanzas just so we know where to break for effect. but its great stuff, i'm TRIPPED ! |
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