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Remember Me / Remember Me / REMEMBER ME{ A poem & others} by. Ben C. Okere. (2) (3) (4)
Poem : Remember Me by mikuz(m): 9:26am On May 14, 2011 |
I pray that one lucky day, You'll think back in some way, About those days you really cared, And the love we once shared, How we promised to stay together, No matter the weather, How i used to drive you crazy, And the lovely way you called me baby, How you said my name, And set my soul aflame, How romantically i held your hand, And rocked you like a star quest band, How you called me your life, And vowed to be my wife, How eager you craved for my tender touch, And how you missed me so much, But i never for once new, Even with the boldest clue, That you who served me so much bliss, Would ever desert me like this, You pledged never to leave, Saying to my bossom you'll forever cleave, You so pledged to stick to me like glue, But your stories were lies - not true, Now i am soaked in my rue, Like a beef in a stew, My heart can barely beat, Without you around i can scarcely eat, Just like a desert eagle gun shot, It hurts so bad alot, And if my ruined life was for rent, It would cost no more than a cent, For i feel like am already dying, Because over you i can't not stop crying, So now my heart can no longer trust, For a long while it will stay still and rust. |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by literary: 5:14pm On May 25, 2011 |
You need to give this poem life. Its too dull. |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by Orikinla(m): 6:01pm On May 25, 2011 |
mikuz: Very sensitive poem. Good thoughts make good words. Well written. |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by Nobody: 8:46pm On Jun 18, 2011 |
whaoo 9ce poem. U can use this to console her. this is the girl i know much Wether she knows me i know not As We met God know much By earing her voice my blood ruch Just to be with her i dont need luch I wount let her heart cruch |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by mikuz(m): 1:57pm On Jul 03, 2011 |
Okay guys thanks alot! |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by adedapoet: 7:21pm On Jul 04, 2011 |
mikuz, its takes time you'll definitely get there I notice that you try to adhere to the rules of rhymes The same mistake i had as a poetic-baby Use rhymes that don't rhymes, its sweet that way Who says poems ain't sweet without rhymes, anyway! Dont just write, write out your mind Your fellow Wordknight Tenibegiloju Smartfingers |
Re: Poem : Remember Me by mikuz(m): 2:36am On Jul 05, 2011 |
Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it. |
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